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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read all 3 parts!
Loved it!
The food fight scene was amazing and loved the Istikhara part!
Excellent Work!

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dis part was sooo cute. I loved da replies Zoe gave to Asad n was laughing wen she innocently said dat he had asked her to put the jam on his head. God, can dey be more cute! I was rolling in laighter imagining Asad n Zoe covered in food. good Asad stopped himself in time cox Zow wudn't hav thought n blurted out everything.
this was great.
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Posted: 12 years ago
just read all the 3 parts..hw can I miss such a lovely story!!!!
I must say you hv gr8 writing skill 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: niks23

just read all the 3 parts..hw can I miss such a lovely story!!!!

I must say you hv gr8 writing skill 👏

Thank you Niks😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Ohhh myyy God!! I SOOO LOVED this!! 😳

The food fight was AWESOME!! It was sooo cute and when did Asad get so naughty? 🤣 This story had me grinning like a food all along! 😃 Wonderfully written, cute hilarious and hot 😉 @Red: Well I don't know when that happened 😆 Jaaaddduuu😆

The idea of Istikhara was brilliant 😳 Ohhh I loved it!! I loved how you added the translation of Salat-e-Istikhara! I love its translation! Its sooo meaningful 😳

An awesome story brilliantly ended! And yes Istikhara did give it a VERY special touch! Mwahhh to you for writing this awesome piece Diya 😳 I read the last chapter twice 😛

Oh Thank you for your wonderful comment. They really motivate me to write more😳😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: teddy25

I want AsYa life to be as perfect as your story 🤗 I love you for presenting us with such a beautiful story 👏 👏


Waiting for your next FF. 😃

Thank you sweets😃
I'm continuing with my previous story. After completing that, only, I'll be writing something new. But you never know kyunki mere saath kuch bhi ho sakta hai. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

hey dis part was sooo cute. I loved da replies Zoe gave to Asad n was laughing wen she innocently said dat he had asked her to put the jam on his head. God, can dey be more cute! I was rolling in laughter imagining Asad n Zoe covered in food. good Asad stopped himself in time cox Zow wudn't hav thought n blurted out everything.

this was great.

Thank you Nimra😳
I'm glad you liked my experiments with my writing😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KulfiBai

OMG how did I not find this SS before? I LOVE it ❤️

It's okay. I'm glad you liked it😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Diiiyyuuu!! This was amazing yaar !!

I missed it due to the friggin exams -_-

But anyways, better late then never, right ?

The Asad-Zoya food session was HAWT.

Their arguments - the love of my life !

Amazing work jaan-e-mann ! Sorry I'm late !
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome story

The food fight and then romance was awesome



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