#1 AsYa(KaBhi)FF: Fallen in the Trap of Love (link to #2 pg 148)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: Linsie

Thank u! :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: krati5
so painful for zoya

I know, will make it better soon :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
hey tis is a very heart touching update...
luv it...
dilshad is the best...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Thank u so much! :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice & painful update
Feeling very sad for zoya
Asad should realised that he did wrong
He can't punish zoya for ghafoor sins
Hope he will bring her back & clear all misunderstanding
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

Thank u! :)

He soon will realize that he was wrong in whatever he did. Onr of the major reasons for y I went with this track is to make asad realize that zoya isn't his personal property.

Thnx again! :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: anopama
Loved the update but it is chapter 15 not 16
Loved dilshad to bits she give Asad what he deserves a tight slap and if he can bring zoya back she will disown him
Like how can he be is stupid like yes she is gaffur daughter but she doesn't even know the man she doesn't know where she belong
Like KV was the first home she got where she found love and felt loved
Oh Asad u r such an ass u give tanveer just what she wanted separation of u and zoya
Continue soon

Oops sorry, edited it :)

Thank u!

He will realize that he'd been an absolute idiot in giving tanveer what she wanted. He's just not using his brain ri8 now.

Thnx again! :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI
excellent update Ramya 👏
asad's reaction confuse me
he feels bad on zoya leaving house
but ask her to leave forever
and he still want zoya to trust him
is his hate towards gaffur is more than his love towards zoya
dilshad s right
wat s zoya's mistake in asad's dark past??
does dilshad really disowned asad??
wat did she show asad in precap??
it was so emotionall update
especially when zoya leaving and dat song
so touching and nice song choice

Thank u Aditi! :)

I know, Asad has this malfunctioning, jumping side to side, kinda brain if u know what I mean 😆

Dilshaad hasn't disowned him yet, if asad doesn't bring zoya back to kv within a week then she will disown him.

Haha, dude its a cliffy, I can't tell u 😆

Thank u! :)