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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
nice intro
do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting... Please update soon and please do PM me😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please update it soon :)
and please pm it to me :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The moment I started reading the Intro I was aghast!!
Wud love to see wat u in store for us
Waiting eagerly do pm me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting update😊 can't wait continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting prologue. Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heya people ^_______^ I am here with the Chapter one :D I hope you like it :P...I tried to send PMs but all of you haven't recieved it I think. I couldn't send them to all of you.It's difficult to send PMs
Chapter-1 The Touch

I walked in to find empty packet of chips, crushed Soda can and an empty Pizza-Box lying on the floor.

Ahh! This girl when she will learn cleanliness and Tehzeeb?
I cleaned up the mess and then walked in the room to find Zoya sitting there on the couch munching some Chocolate Bar
Excitedly watching something on T.V.
I stomped to her
"Miss Farooqui"
I said in the calmest tone
She didn't budge
"Miss Farooqui!!"
Amazing she is so engrossed in watching, that she isn't hearing me
"Miss Farooqui!! can't you listen"
I switched off the Television, and turned to face her
And lo! she wasn't there, she dissappeared
Tears streamed down my cheeks
My Imagination!
She is no more to annoy me! To laugh seeing me agiatated
To jump up and down in the whole house!to fall in my arms
to make me fall in LOVE with her each second.
She is no more
While this is what my BRAIN speaks but my HEART...
My Heart clearly refuses it, I can't understand why?
"Jammy!"
"Ugh! Tanveer again! And why is she grinning like a fool! I have lost My life forever and she is grinning!
Wow! and she claims to know me and understand me"
Another tear streamed down my cheek at this thought
"Actually it was Zoya, One look and she will know what's going in my Mind"
I self thought
"Jammy dekhiye na!" ahe showed me a piece of sewinf craft she has done
"Heck! this girl iin such a state she shows me her art! I just want to kick her out, but that will not bring Zoya back, if that could I would surely send her flying to America"
I just stomped out of my room
Ammi was sitting on the sofa Tear stricken.
It pained me to see her like that
She everyday sits there still in hope Zoya would return, jumping in happiness at the door. She would return back to us one day!
But how is it possible for a dead body to return?
All 3 of us haven't eatn anything except drinking water for 4 days
Ammi has even refused water, I somehow forced her
While Ammi sits here waiting for Dead Zoya to come
I grief and sometime cry in my room having her flashbacks
Tamatar stays in her room crying whole day
She even sleeps while crying
No shoppings
No T.V.
No outings
No colourful cloths
Nothing!!!
The colour of our lives was gone!
But I don't know about Tanveer, what she does
She ever griefs?
Her face as a normal expression everytime, soetimes even happy like some time before
But I have never seen her SAD in rememberance of Zoya
"Asad!"
It was Ammi
She...she had spoken after such time, a tingle of relief ran across my face
"Asad Zoya kab ayegi?"
The relief vanished, my face again started getting wet
"Usse le aayo"
I ran, I couldn't bear it
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After whole day griefing in my room I stepped out
It was almost midnight
I walked to the fridge to get some water
when something touched my Arm
It was a familiar touch!
I couldn't make out
"Who's there?"
A grief stricked Asad ,well that's when you you are Dead still living(jeete ji-mar jana)
Ouch! what was that
Well that's Mystery dear. I told you you will be Glued on your seats
Now keep guessing Who's there??
I know you are very excited for the mystery to unfold, but beleive my I am as much excited to write the mystery unfolding
Well how was the This Chapter Guyz!
You liked it? Great!
You didn't? Awesom!
Leave you reviews
Edited by ApurvaLovesARVI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow dear..You wrote so well..
Heart touching..You made me cry..
That might be His Angel Zoya right.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsommme Man ...kya story hein...not easily digestible but goodd...
its paining but can bear ...good peice of writng...continue soon and PM me pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chinnu.Munnu

Wow dear..You wrote so well..

Heart touching..You made me cry..
That might be His Angel Zoya right.😉

Thank You!!!Dear
Your comment is encouraging me, next part will be up soon
And who was that, well wait for the next part

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