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saina

@saina01

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

This is so beautifully written. Only Dilshad can save these two from that billi now.

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Nishita Rao

@Nishitarao

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

This is really good Sangeeta. Hope something like this happens!!

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NainaAlex

@NainaAlex

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Loved it bheegi...this is the dillu mom I want

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Livingfree

@Livingfree

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

This is brilliant Bheegi. Loved how Dilshad intervened and decided to take matters into her own hands. She is the only one who can drill some sense into her son. If something along the similar lines does happen in the show, I think Dilshad is the only one we can bank upon to tackle the situation. As you rightly mentioned, "Ye Asad ke bas ki baat nahi hai."

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delena90

@delena90

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

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Unres

I loved the way you wrote this and unfortunately I can totally see Asad reacting the way you wrote him!! Bewakoof, complicated ladka hai na? 😆

Edited by delena90 - 12 years ago

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Very nice! Love Dilshad Momma! Asad is going to eat crow soon!

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Thanks guys. I hope something like this happens instead of zoya thrashing.

Also, I tried to highlight certain aspects if their characters here:

1. Dilshaad's trust in zoya
2. Asad's lack of trust in zoya and himself too. He actually thought it was their baby!
3. Asad's unwillingness to see that tanu is not all white.

4. Zoya's trust in asad. She never blamed him at all.

I hope last week, my OS prediction comes close :)

Edited by bheegi - 12 years ago

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

AWIIIEEE luvly OS!!!

luvd moma darling!!

vry nicely ritten dea!!!

amaazn!!

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SleepingBeauty.

@SleepingBeauty.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

OMG i liked how you pointed out how Asad believes his childhood friend over everyone else! It really bothers me to see that much of faith on someone while i watch this show and i really liked how you highlighted that part! I wish this could continue and see how according to you Dilshad would have handled Tanveer. But will be waiting for your next week's OS now :D