Good Bye Mr.Khan - final part added Pg5 on 5/5 - Page 2

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Pleeej continue n pm me!

Awsom! If u wnt to continue plz pm me! Lov yr post

Oh my goodness. Thank you so much for all the replies. I never ever thought you will all like them since it is kind of a sad story. Thank you for cheering me up with your likes and replies.

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

Wow, this OS makes me both happy and sad. I'm happy that you're writing and posting but I'm sad that Zoya is so fatalistic in this story. I hate thinking she's giving up on love because she fell in love with a jerk. He might try to go to New York to get her back or she might find someone else! Either way, it's great that you wrote such a thought-provoking and emotional piece. Keep up the good work!

Paly,
You can pull a string only so far. It will break. Same thing is true for every relationship in this world except maybe of Mother child relation. A mother should and would not stop caring for her child. All other relations have a limit. If a person is pushed so much and not given a chance to even fight for the relation to work, anybody can give up.

Plus, I never said she gave up on her love. She left him with the ring on her finger promising that she would never ever look at any other man. That says a lot, isn't it? Asad is like a secret agent. Very good one and however hard you torture him, he won't let out his secret. How much ever Zoya tries to get his emotions to come out as words, she is not succeeding, is she? I am in no way negative, but I feel everyone should be shown the limit. That is the only way things work for some people. Thanks for commenting and reading.

Nice start...and I am happy that Zoya left. It would have been better if she would leave the ring behind also...
And you are indeed right...everything in life has a limit , even love !!!
When someone is hurt beyond limit and pushed to the wall, this is what's gonna happen.
I hope you'll continue and hopefully Asad will realise what he's done, but if he's not willing to give this relation a chance, I would love to see Zoya moving on too...she deserves to be happy

and this is what I call a fantasticaly fantabulous shot :D that was rocking *standing ovation*
Love, Laiba

Excellent. Brilliant OS and well written.

OMG its so touching... i loved it loved it <3

the letter was outstanding and heart touching... please please do continue soon and pm me... i don want to miss the next part