Asad-Zoya OS | Falling In and Out Of Love. *Posted

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MissAsian

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

You updated :)
I love ur stories :)

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Aparichit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

This was super se upar..Sorry Fizz i suck at writing long comments.I just dont get the words..but i adore u for writing these stuff.ur the best 🤗

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SleepingBeauty.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Aww this was super cute! Really loved it <3

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Maaneet099

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

ah that was such a pleasant surprise. aptly portrayed. i loved the whole thing :D

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supriya.ipkknd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Mera testi kho diya kuttie. Kabhi maaf ni karungi tujhe :x
Long comments my foot. Itna acha likha tha. Andhi. Chudail. Gavaar.

This OS was very cute. Aage kuch ni bolungi warna sar pe naachegi. Huh.
Beep Beep Beep.

U better update Love Just Is or M ready wid my gun.

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@Asya6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

I didn't have to wait like the others! Nananana!
When are you updating your other fan fics?
C'mon! Update ASAP! (No blank docs accepted).

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life4me

@life4me

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

How romantic 😳
Loved it. But I think zoya forgave asad quite easily. Thoda bhav khane chahiye.

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Nivriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

*Fizz!!

My Gracious. This was one of the most adorable OSes I have ever read on our lovely Asad-Zoya. Oh God, Oh God, am a FAN of this work of yours.

Well, the past was truly ugly in all it's senses. I really - even though I shouldn't - pity the damsel. It takes a lot of guts to propose, and especially for a girl to do so, as it is cliched Man's work.

But then, I really dun blame Asad for declining. It's perfectly understood he didn't want to be burdened with a responsibility in the age of 23 , but one thing I would've appreciated, if you would have stopped her at least! Gosh! How could he just let her go?

But the Asad is Asad, it's his fat, big ego, eh!

All the more, six years thereafter, Zoya remains Zoya even after so much in her life, and I am more proud of her than Asad is.

Truly, am so glad she accepted his proposal, and we had a happily ever after, because after reading the title, I was a bit skeptical whether it would have a happy ending or not, but you're FIZZ and you rock!

Mwuaah! x) I loved it, babes. WONDER-FULL job! 😳

FANTABULLOOUUUSS, and this makes me love your writing and adore as well as look forward to your concepts all the more!

Love. 🤗