AsYa FF hell-bent game note pg 30 11/5

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fiza

@Fiza28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: janu1610
nice parts Fizza . I just read all .Nice pace . i think both r hooked unknowingly .Its not bet anymore . look how it unfolds.😃

Thanks dear 😳 yup both r hooked lat lag gaye hai dono ki 😆 lets see if the game is still on or they actually have fallen for one another 😃😉

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

wow loved the song good update I love how u include the pics 😊

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

such a great update...

just luv it...its amazing..

thx fr the pm n eagerly waiting fr the next part...

the way u use the pic to describe it perfect...asad n zoya is just perfect...

please continue soon...👏

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fiza

@Fiza28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16
wow loved the song good update I love how u include the pics 😊

thanks dear 😃 glade u liked it 😳

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fiza

@Fiza28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
such a great update...
just luv it...its amazing..
thx fr the pm n eagerly waiting fr the next part...
the way u use the pic to describe it perfect...asad n zoya is just perfect...
please continue soon...👏

thanks dear really happy u liked the dance part i was worried ki how it was 😕 i thought pics would be more helpful visualizing it😳

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

very nice parts. cont soon. I guess Asad will fall for her soon.

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fiza

@Fiza28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
very nice parts. cont soon. I guess Asad will fall for her soon.

haha lets see what happens hota kya hai dehke the rahoo😉

thanks dear

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Alveena12

@Alveena12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

i loved the two parts, i also loved the bonding between Zoya and Asad's family, it's really cute...i loved the dance and the pictures did help visualize the whole thing better so that was good to include them...i loved the store room date, that's cute 👏

please update soon and also pm me when you update, i am looking forward to reading ahead

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fiza

@Fiza28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: Alveena12
i loved the two parts, i also loved the bonding between Zoya and Asad's family, it's really cute...i loved the dance and the pictures did help visualize the whole thing better so that was good to include them...i loved the store room date, that's cute 👏

please update soon and also pm me when you update, i am looking forward to reading ahead

thanks dear yup her bonding with his fsmily was just like a bahu should be ... thanks gald u liked dance ...n store room date well thats asad's style 😳 sure ill pm u dear will update soon