SS:Desperate lovers

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Hello everyone. It's me Bhumika here. I have come up with a new SS. I hope you enjoy learning it.

Here goes the prologue

Prologue

I hate the way you make me feel,

I hate the way you make me want you,

I hate the way you make me love you,

but most of all I hate knowing that there is no future.

Is it possible to love two persons at one time?

What will happen if two brothers fall in love with same girl?

It's a story about a Muslim girl name Zoya. In search of her father she reaches to place name Bhopal. There she meets two brothers Asad and Ayaan. Asad Ahmed Khan is a boy who does not have the word 'love' in his dictionary and Ayaan Rashid Khan is a typical playboy who falls over every pretty face but never had a true love till now. The two of them are brothers though they are not born from the same mother they have a very special and unbreakable bond with each other. Asad and Ayaan are more like a friend to one another than brothers. They share every thing in their life with each other.

But will this bond remain forever????

But, everything changes when Zoya enters their life. Both of them fall for her. Asad who never had the word 'love' in his mind except for his sister, Nazma and mother, Dilshad will fall for Zoya. He has a control over his heart and his mind so he never admits this feeling. Asad rejects his engagement with Tanveer just for Zoya as he knows that he will not be able to give the love and care as his heart belongs to Zoya. Ayaan who was soon to be engaged with Humeira rejects from the engagement saying he loves someone else and it's none other than Zoya.

Will this feeling of both the brothers for Zoya create a wall of hatred between them?

Zoya never thought she would be falling for the two guys in her life. One was her best buddy Ayaan and another was Jahapanah six packs, Asad. She had come to Bhopal in search of her father but she did not know so much was waiting for her to arrive. She did not know she would fall in love not with one but with two of them.

Who will capture her heart Asad or Ayaan?

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So, how do you like it? Pls leave back your precious likes and comments. It's really important that you leave back your feedbacks so I can make up my mind if I should continue.


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Bhumika (eyecatchers)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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-25 likes for next update.

-No res please.

-No spamming and chatting.

Edited by eyecatchers - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That's just too good, bhumika dear :)
In luv wid ur title :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love it continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pls like this post to get the pm's. I don't have many QH members in my buddy list so I am gonna pm it individually.
Edited by eyecatchers - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
interesting...update soon

gr8 asad will nt engaged with BCA MSK
Gurmeet4Drashti thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ...
It's intriguing ...
Update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hy it wao...plz add me n pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one dear...Iliked the concept.
Update ASAP and pm me.

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