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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello guys , this my first and last Os , this is completely bakwass ! you can throw me tomatoes or chappals . Sorry for mistakes please don't commit suicide after reading this anyway if you are alive leave me your comments.😆



"Ami I don't know why you have this thought I ..I don't love her this is absurd" tried to explain Asad

She was standing in her room she heard all his conversation between his ammi and him . She felt dizzy why did he have to hurt her ? Was she really misfit ? Was she destined to be alone ? The women at the nikaah were right she has no one...Maybe one day her Api and her Jeeju would leave her ... Why this man was hurting her why his words were so difficult to take ?
"Paani I need water " she whispered she took a glass who Tanveer left for her

"Agar Tum Zoe se nahi pyaar karte toh what about tanveer ?"

Asad felt confused Tanveer was his best friend how can he marry her he was about to reply when he heard a big noise from Zoya's room he ran there this is how he and his mother found Zoya collapsed ..

"Zoyaaa" he cried

"Zoya kya hua beta uto beta , Asad yeh Zoya ko kya hua "

"Ammi please call the ambulance " he said he took Zoya and made her lie on the couch what happened to her ?

The ambulance came and took her to the hospital .
In the hospital Asad couldn't rest a while he was walking over the corridor . He was thoughtful was he going to loose her he had some flashback their first meeting,their arguing ,her stupid poems, their first hug ,the night at the farmhouse, then Mangalpur ... He was afraid maybe this time ... No he can't ...he can't let her go . He felt a pressure on his shoulder it was Najma

"Bhaijaan coffee ?"

He remembered how Zoya used to make his black coffee.

"Thanks tamatar" he said with a weak smile

"Bhaijaan Zoya is strong everything will be ok " she tried to comfort him

"I know she is stubborn she won't let us "

"Doctor how is she ? " asked Dilshad

"Mrs khan.. ms Zoya was poisoned the poison is very strong all you need to do now is to pray for her "

"What ?! What the hell doctor you can't do job ? Are you a doctor I want to talk to your superior ! You need to save my Zoya doctor ! If something happens to her I swear I will kill you !" Shouted Asad as he grabbed doctor's collar

"Asad beta please stop it nothing will happen to her I have faith on Zoya " said Dishad she tried to reassure him

"I can't live without her Ammi " For the first time he cried in front his mother

"I Know beta I know just pray Allah sees and listens everyone ..." Dilshad made him rest on her lap

Najma needed some fresh air when she heard a strange conversation

"Trust me Zoya is gone she will not bother us any more this bewakoof took the poison mera kaam pura hogaya.." Tanveer cut the call
She laughed evilly "bechari Zoya now no one will come between us Jammy and. I will make sure my name will be next to yours mrs tanveer Asad Ahmed khan "

Najma was shocked tanveer was behind all this fiasco she has always hated her she knew something was wrong she has to inform Asad ..

Asad closed his eyes and prayed
When a nurse came

"Mr khan your fianc it's a miracle your fianc is out of danger " she said happily

" can I see her ? " Asad stood up he had some tears

"Of course mr khan true love always wins you are a lucky man"

Asad rushed in her room she was there looking through her window when she looked up

" mr khan ... " she tried to say

"Shhh. " he approached her and give her a tight hug "don't ever do this to me! You Know How much I was worried I thought for a second I've lost you I care for you ms farookhi "

"But I heard you ... You don't love me as.."

" you know how much Jahapanah six packs is emotionally challenged "

She smiled and showed her ring

" you meant it hai Na ."

He nodded and say

" I love you Zoya ... I love more than my life you are not misfit in fact you are perfect you are the one and only "

She felt a relief feeling finally he opened his heart to her he gave a sweet and innocent kiss in her lips "

Dilshad who was witnessed of this confession had a big smile on her face

"Thank you Allah thanks for reunite them "

" to Asad Zoya nikaa 10 din ki baad ?"

Zoya smiled shyly Asad took her her hand

"Ji ammi"

"Congrats bhabhi !" Rushed Najma

"Ow easy tamatar " Zoya laughed

"Oops sorry sorry "

"Zzz.. Zoya Tum theek ho" asked a confused "my plan failed again and Asad is going to marry her never I can't let him. He is mine" she was thinking


Zoya was about to respond when Najma cut her

" kya hua tanveer you seem surprised you are not happy that your plan failed "

" tamatar what do you mean by "plan failed" we don't understand .." Asked Asad

"I have a urgent call" tanveer was trying to escape but Najma grabbed her hand

" Zoya what did you eat or drink before your fainting ?"

"Paani "

" do you know who put the water in your room"

Zoya tried to remember
Flashback
"Zoya here your water I know you must tired ..."

Zoya was sitting on her bed thoughtful she recalled the confrontation between Asad and her why was he behaving like that

"Akdu Ahmed khan ..."

"Zoya paani.."

"Oh thank you tanveer just put the glass on the table please "

"Of course but don't forget drink it I'm sure you feel better " smiled evilly tanveer

Tanveer left Zoya stood up to close the door of her room when she heard

" Asad do you love Zoya ?"

End of the flashback

" How could you Tanveer ? I mean why ? I thought we were friends ?"

"Z.. Zoya .. Jammy it's a misunderstanding i will never put poison or put a wire in your bathroom ! "

"Oh no did i mentioned the wire ? God this girl spoiled my plan" she was thinking angrily

"Wire ? It was you ? How could you know ? Only Ms Farooki and I know about it ? Tanveer you tried to kill Zoya ! " Yelled Asad , he was angry

" I wanted to marry you Jammy ! And this stupid girl came between us !"

" Don't call me Jammy ! Najma call the police" instructed Asad

"Police is here Bhaijaan I've already call them" replied Najma

" You will regret it Asad ! You don't know what mistake you did ! Choosing her will have consequences ! " Tanveer screamed as police grabbed her .


The next day Zoya was back to home , she was resting on her bed , Asad was lying next to her holding her hand .

" Asad ?" She tried to get the attention

"hmm?" replied Asad

" Im afraid ..." let out Zoya

"Of what Zoya ?"

" I... Tanveer was maybe right .. I am completely different of the perfect wife , it will have consequences , log kya kahenge .." Zoya was tensed .

" Shut up Ms Farooki ! Are you mad ? i don't care about people , you are perfect for me , i love you ok .. We will face all problems together .."

Zoya felt tears " promise Mr Khan ?"

"Promise " He kissed her softly

" I love you Asad " declared Zoya


THE END


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Are you alive ?





Edited by SanayakiBarun - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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No...is it even possible ?! After reading such a awesome AsYalicious os how can one be alive?! 😛
This is beautiful! Great job! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awwweee!!!❤️
It was so cute 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awwleee Awwlee Awwlee! ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great!!! I really want this to happen in the serial.👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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more than alive...haha

this OS is really, really nice
i love the fact that najma is on the who discovers tanveers truth

well done👏

and i hope this woN't be your last OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good attempt dear. Why do you say last??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww this is so cute!!!! LOVED it!!! asad lying NEXT to zoya?????? HAYYYEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dream come true!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awe chooo cute it was
but why does everyone wanna send zoya to the hospital man?
yet it was so adorable
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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uff..i just love thiskash aisa ho pata...awesometotally loved it !!!👏😃😊

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