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Posted: 12 years ago
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good ...waiting fo9r the next dose
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum..pls update soon!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please dont stop it here , please contiue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb start...!!!
omg zoya left...!!!! hope asad gets her back...!!!
but ye kya ciffhanger😲 aise point pe stop...!!!
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the comments guys. Well even i was mad that i left a cliff hanger but i was sleepy so i was starting to blank out😆. Anyway enjoy part 2!

Asad got up and took his keys and left. He just drove on for what seemed like hours and then finally stopped at the daragh. The place where he met his Zoya first. He sat where he sat on that day and this time he was the one crying. He prayed to Allah that somehow Zoya would appear in front of him.
Asad: Zoya... Zoya... Zoya
He kept chanting her name, hoping god would hear his prayers. Then he heard a sob. Then the sobs turn into uncontrollable crying. He looked up and it was like the day they met. There, right in front of him, sat his Zoya, with her suitcase by her side and her body wrapped up in that same black shawl.
Zoya: Why allah? Why does this always happen to me? Why do i have to sacrifice all the time? Why don't i ever get the love that i want? First, i find my father gone, then the guy that i love is not even in love with me, heck i think he hates me. And his family was the family i have wanted ever since my mother passed but i had to leave them to because i couldn't bare seeing the guy i love, with another girl. Allah promise me only this that whoever Mr. Khan marries, she keeps him happy and wont ever give him as much pain as i have give him.
Asad couldn't believe his eyes or ears. Zoya was not only in front of him but also confessing her love, for him. (in this story Asad can figure out that she is talking about him because in this story he is actually smart not like in the show where he cant figure it out!😉) Asad gets up walks to her and sits by her. She continued to cry with her eyes closed but then she stopped. She could feel him. She turned around and her eyes got big as they usually do when she knows she is in big trouble.
Zoya: Mr...Mr...K...Kh...Khan
Asad: Lets go
If she thinks she is in trouble why not mess with her a little. Asad was thinking. Once her heard her confession he knew he would just waste time if he got mad at her and this time he wasnt about to let her go.
Zoya: But...
Asad: Lets go.
He grabbed her suitcases and started walking out the daragh and towards his car. He knew she would follow him because that's how his Zoya was. His Zoya. Nice ring to it. He smiled at that thought and heard her trying to catch up to him.
Zoya: Mr...Khan... i can't... I cant come back.
Asad: Get in.
Zoya: Didn't you just hear what i said?
Asad: I did. Get in.
Zoya didn't know what to do so she got in. Asad started the car and drove for a short while until he stopped in a deserted land. Zoya looked and realized this was where they had their first meeting, their first argument.
Zoya: Why have you brought me here?
She turned towards him and he looked into her eyes and then got out of the car.

Im not usually keen with cliff hangers but i keep having to do something once i get into this story. The next update will be today just i dont know when. Please keep on reading and the next update will come quickly i hope.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cont plzzz jst luved it... plzz continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice story dear. Poor zoya . Keep writing:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great update...
chalo finally asad knows that zoya loves him...
omg phir se cliffy? :o
whats gonna asad do now??
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey.. This is awesome.. Nice update.. 😊 pls continue soon.. 😊 waiting..
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Hey guys im back with hopefully the last update but lets see. Hope you guys this update!

Asad got out of the car and leaned against his door. He smiled to himself, hiding his face from Zoya. He heard the door open on the other side.
Here i go, Allah raaksha karna.
Asad walked around the car and stopped near Zoya. Zoya saw him staring at her with a straight face, without any emotions. She only gets that face when he is gonna yell at her.
Zoya: Lis...
Asad: You are very irritating.
Zoya: I no...
Asad: You are very annoying.
Zoya: I no...
Asad: You attract musibat.
Zoya: I...
Asad: But your also beautiful.
Zoya: I n... Huh?
(Imagine Zoya moving back with each step Asad took forward and stopped when he called her beautiful.)
Zoya couldn't believe what she heard. He has never complimented her without being drunk. (imagine her flashback to that night in that house they spent alone.)
Asad: You also are kind.
Zoya: Are you okay?
Asad: You make my heart beat faster every time i look at you.
Zoya: What? Why r u...
Asad: Wen you smile and those dimples come out, m heart skips a beat.
Zoya: Huh?
Asad: When we argue every morning before i go to work, i have a content feeling knowing i had a chance to interact with you.
Zoya: You have lost your marbles.
Asad: Yes, yes i have lost my marbles because i have fallen for you. Every day i come home knowing im gonna see your face. Sometimes when i have a late meeting i cut it short just so i can see you before u go to sleep. Every morning i sit at the table with my newspaper early so i can see your face when you come and put my newspaper in front of me so no one knows im staring at you.
Zoya: I...I..
Asad: When u left today, i felt a part of me being taken away from me. I need a dose of Zoya to get on with my day. I...
Zoya: But why have you been ignoring me? Ever since Tanveer come to your life, you don't even seem to remember me.
Asad: Is that why you left?
Zoya: I...
She turned around cause she didn't want him to see her cry anymore. After a while she heard Asad speak.
Asad: I never wanted to ignore you. Im sorry i made you feel like that. I just met Tanveer after a long time. She had just gotten out of her marriage and is pregnant. The doctor has told her family to keep her happy or she might harm the baby and that is why i was told to keep her company because her family was dealing with her husband.
Zoya couldn't believe her ears she almost risked her love over her thoughts of Asad not liking her anymore. She turned around only to be shocked out of her mind. On the floor, on his knees, Asad there holding a blue velvet box.
Asad: Zoya you gave me the biggest scare i have ever felt. I can never have you leave me again. I don't know what i would do if i couldn't see you every morning and sleep every night. The only way you can save me from this misery, and keep me sane, marry me?
Zoya couldn't believe what she was hearing. Was this really happening or was she dreaming? She pinched her self.
Zoya: Ouch! Oh you really proposed!EEE! oh my gosh oh my gosh!
Asad: Is that a yes?
Zoya: Seriously! Do you really own a company and run it? I mean can't you see! Obviously its a yes!
Asad got up and pulled Zoya to him.
Asad: Then i have the right to do this.
He slipped the ring on her finger and gave her the biggest kiss on her lips hat if it could she would have reached heaven.
Once they pulled apart Zoya can't believe he did this.
Zoya: Mr. Khan, you can't even stand me wearing jeans and you kissed me!That to in public! I must say i love this Asad more Hehehe!
Asad: Really!
They chased each other around till they decided to go home and as soon as they told Dilshad she immediately started planning. Because Zoya's scare the family finally got was complete.
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Year later
Asad: Mrs. Khan
Zoya: Yes Mr. Khan?
Asad: Don't you think its time to make our family bigger?
Zoya: What you mean?
Asad: You know have a little Zoya or little Asad?
Zoya and Asad looked at each other and smiled and from that night they created little Asya and lived happily ,Crazily, ever after!


There my story has officially come to an end! Hope you liked the fast ending! 😆


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