AsYa FF-Please Forgive Me-Note PG 82 UPDT 8/18/14 - Page 37

In all my excitement that there was an update, I decided to read all thirteen chapters at once, all over again :'D I don't think that's good for my eyesight, but oh well lolol. I'm so beyond happy that you're back and you updated! AHHH <3 This remains on my top favorite fan fictions and after re-reading the chapters, I once again realized why and fell in love all over again. You're take on what happens after the Razia slap was far more intense for me and even tho I LOVED the airport proposal, like omg that was beautiful, I absolutely loved all the damsel-in-distress situations. I don't know, these kinds of things make me feel butterflies in my stomach-wow I'm weird. However, you NEVER showed Zoya as being weak. Sure she may have been physically weak, but she never allowed Akdu Ahmed Khan to see her fragile side. I think my favorite part of the whole fan fiction has to be the bathroom scene where Asad broke down. Damn, I wish that was real. The intensity, love, care, and chaotic-feel of the whole scene makes me squeal with happiness! Girls are not the only ones who have breakdowns, Asad was weak too, and he allowed Zoya to heal his wounds-physically and mentally. Their conversation about how she manages to remain so positive and her reassurance to him that he was only his mother's son swelled my heart with joy <3 As for chapter 13, another fabulous update! Their nok-jhok, her anger, the misunderstandings, and his concern were all beautifully expressed! Tanveer is causing problems, ugh, but Asad is not falling for any of it! Booyah! The precap is way too interesting, please update soon :'D I see another Mangalpuri Asad in our future :DDD Thank you so much for this update and I can't wait for the next one! Ahh I'm so happy you're back, this literally made my week <3