AsYa FF-Please Forgive Me-Note PG 82 UPDT 8/18/14 - Page 17

great update...!!!

wow wat a great update...just luv it...cnt wait for the next part

loved it 2 the core,

A Lovely Chapter.. Totally admired Zoya & How she comforted Asad!!..

Awesome updates :-) loved the conversation between AsYa it was just beautiful

Loved it.
Thanx for the pm. Take care.

I read it last night, but wasn't able to comment. Its outstandingly awesome - please continue soon. I wonder when Asad going to see Zoya's scare... in the show itself.

Chapter 7

Precap: Asad is still locked in the bathroom but Zoya finds a way inside and takes care of Asad. She talks to him and they both sort out there problems and leave the bathroom hand in hand. Dilshad is happy to see that her son is happy and okay all thanks to Zoya. As they are there enjoying each other's company Tanveer is watching them quietly and planning her next move to get Asad as her husband to remove Zoya from the picture.

(Note: So this chapter will start off from when Asad and family are getting ready to go to Wasim's nikaah or was it engagement party. An in this Zoya and Asad are not engaged the whole airport scene didn't happen but in fact the employment letter worked for Zoya and Mr. Dhurander granted her the visa extension.)

The rest of the afternoon went off smoothly. Zoya was back to her usual noisy, loud and messy self. Asad didn't mind he was just happy to see Zoya happy after a long time. He wasn't able to concentrate on his work so he went to go make some coffee to help him concentrate. As he walked over to the kitchen his ammi came downstairs to talk to them.

Dilshad: "Asad, Zoya, Najma, and Tanveer you guys please come to the living room I have to talk to you guys about something."

All of them in unison said okay. Asad came out of the kitchen while Zoya and Najma made their way from the table to the living and Tanveer came from her room.

Dilshad: "I forgot to tell you guys that we have to go to Wasim's nikaah today in the evening so you guys should be ready by 7 okay."

Zoya: "But Phupi I have nothing to wear to the nikaah and I am pretty sure you wouldn't like it if I went in jeans and shirt would you? Phupi can me and Najma go shopping I promise we won't take long and plus we haven't gone out in a long time."

Dilshad: "Yes Zoya you can go shopping just make sure that you are back in time so you guys can freshen up and get dressed okay."

Najma/Zoya: "Okay we will be back soon! Allah Hafiz"

Zoya and Najma quickly grabbed their things and ran out of the house before Asad could say anything. Zoya knew that he would try to come with them just to make sure that she was okay but she just wanted to spend some free time with Najma and have a girls day out and besides Mr. Khan wouldn't even enjoy doing girls shopping he would get bored. Zoya and Najma went to many stores and after 2 long hours of shopping they both found the perfect outfit to wear for tonight. By the time they got home I was almost 6 they had to hurry up and get ready or else Mr. Khan would start yapping about them wasting time since he was always very punctual. Zoya went to her room to freshen up and get ready.

Zoya: "Allah Miyah how do people wear these clothes especially with heels. I will for sure fall and make a fool out of myself. I can't even walk straight in this. Ya Allah please help me so that I don't make a fool out of myself."

Dilshad: "Zoya hurry up beta we are all ready just waiting for you."

Zoya: "Ji Phupi I am just coming I am almost ready." (Zoya is wearing same outfit from the show)

Zoya grabbed her dupatta and straightened her hair out and started to walk out of her room. Meanwhile Asad was downstairs waiting for her cause she was taking forever to get ready. Ammi had specifically told her that the nikaah was at 7 and we should be there by now. As Asad was lost in his own thoughts he did not see Zoya coming out of her room. What brought him out of his thoughts was when he heard his sister say that Zoya was here and that they should leave. Asad looked up and it seemed as if his world had stopped. Right in front of his eyes stood the most beautiful person in the world and she looked like an angel sent from heaven. Asad couldn't move his eyes away from her he let his eyes wonder her body taking in her beauty. Slowly a big smile spread on his face when he realized that Zoya was staring a whole into the floor and her cheeks were a crimson red color. Asad heard the clearing of his sister's throat and that snapped him out of his drooling session and made him come back to reality.

Dilshad: "Asad beta lets go or else we will get late."

Asad: "Ji Ammi lets go."

As everyone turned to walk out Asad still did not leave he stood rooted in his spot waiting for Zoya he smiled and she smiled back.

Zoya: "Mr. Khan why are you staring at me like that? Do I look funny in these clothes? Is there something wrong with my outfit or is there something in my hair?"

Zoya was puzzled because Mr. Khan still didn't answer her question and he was still staring at her and smiling. Zoya waved her hand in front of his face and that snapped him out of his thoughts.

Asad: "Huh wo…actually you look beautiful Zoya." He quickly blurted out.

Zoya was shocked to get a compliment from Mr. Khan and that also something like that. She started blushing and quickly started walking out of the house to the car. As she approached the car she saw that Najma, Phupi, and Tanveer had all occupied the back seats of the car so she had to sit in the front with Mr. Khan. As she was about to open the door Asad's hand brushed against her and opened the door for her. She felt a jolt go through her body has her body made contact with Mr. Khan's body she blushed again and got in Asad shut the door and made his way to driver side and got in and then they left for the nikaah.

Tanveer however was observing all this like a hawk and was fuming as she thought that she should be where Zoya is but no because she was stuck sitting in the back with his sister and mother. She had to think of a way to get rid of Zoya and that also quickly because she couldn't hide her pregnancy for much longer.

They arrived to the hall and everything looked fabulous inside. The decorations made the hall inside look just perfect. Zoya was admiring everything since this was her first traditional function. Asad's family was from the groom's side so they all exchanged there Salam's and made their way inside.

Zoya was busy chatting with people but Asad couldn't take his eyes off of Zoya. He was just so enthralled in her beauty. This surprisingly didn't go unnoticed from Dilshad. She stood behind her son with a big smile on her face as she watched Asad admire Zoya. She knew now the time was right now to help bring Asad and Zoya together since they were on speaking terms but before she could do that she first had to make sure that Zoya also had the same feelings for Asad as he did for her.

Dilshad: (to herself) "I have to talk to Najma and then we can do something from there."

Some guests came and started talking to Asad so he couldn't keep an eye on Zoya. After a while he turned around to look for her but couldn't find her in sight anywhere. He went around looking for her. As he was walking he heard her voice and decided to follow it. He came to see Zoya standing behind the curtains talking to someone. Asad stopped in his tracks as he saw that another guy was talking to her and she was smiling. He overheard the guy call her beautiful and Asad was boiling in anger. He was disgusted and hated that man whoever he was because he had called HIS Zoya beautiful all he wanted to do is go up to that guy and punch him in the face. Asad clenched his fist and stalked up to the guy only to glare at him and then he slipped his hands around Zoya's waist.

Zoya felt Asad coming but decided not to bother about it because he probably came to lecture her on tameez and tehzeeb because she was talking to a stranger and that also a man. She saw Asad approach and it seemed as if he was upset but she was completely shocked by what Asad did the next very moment. She felt his hands snake around her waist and she felt him pull her close to him. Zoya looked up to him questionably asking with her eyes what he was doing but she saw him smiling with a strange look in his eyes.

Asad: "There you are! I was looking for you everywhere where did you go? Ammi is looking for you."

Asad turned his attention to the guy in front of him and extended his hand out to shake hands with the guy.

Asad: "Hi I am Asad Zoya's fianc."

Asad had a death grip on the guys hand and he glared at him as if he was about to beat him to pulp. Zoya was shocked to see Asad acting this way and was even more shocked when she heard Asad say that she was his fiance. She looked up at Asad and saw anger in his eyes and she quickly decided to intervene.

Zoya: "Asad you where saying that Phupi is looking for me well lets go now."

Zoya dragged Asad away from there and went somewhere else. She turned around to Asad…"Allah Miyah what is wrong with you Mr. Khan? What was that all about back there? Did you not see me talking to that guy?"

Asad: "Yes I did see you talking to him and I didn't like that now stop this nonsense and lets go"

Zoya: "No Mr. Khan I am not going anywhere you go I am here to enjoy myself since I never get to see this type of stuff back in New York. Isn't it just so beautiful Mr. Khan?"

Asad: "Yes it is beautiful just like you are."

Asad and Zoya share and eye lock (Mitwa Moment) they are lost in each others eyes that they didn't see Tanveer spying on them and Raziya standing behind her.

Raziya: "Well look at his Billo Rani, you had told me that, that girl had already left the country but it looks like you lied. You can't do anything right now can you? Didn't I tell you to take care of this mess before she finds out that her abbu is still alive."

Tanveer: "Don't worry Raziya I will take care of her she won't live for long her days are numbered."

Raziya: "Theek hai but you better make sure that you get the job done I don't want her anywhere near my family. Understand?"

Raziya left but Tanveer was still watching Asad and Zoya. They pulled back and Zoya looked away shyly and started blushing. Asad was smirking as he realized the type of effect he had on her.

**Meanwhile back in the main hall Shireen and Dilshad bump into each other and have a fight.

Dilshad: "I am sorry"

Dilshad looked up and saw Shireen.

Shireen: "You do not even deserve to be sorry for what you have done to my family.

Dilshad: "What are you talking about Shireen I haven't done anything. I am not your enemy. There is some big misunderstanding.

Shireen: "No Dilshad I thought that we could be someday be friends but no I was wrong you harmed my family you ruined Aayan's engagement with your black magic."

Dilshad: "Black magic, are you crazy I would never do anything like that to Aayan I consider him to be like my son don't fall into the trap of other people.

Shireen stood there silently and that's when Raziya realized that she had to do something before she got Shireen to believe that Dilshad was not behind the black magic.

Raziya: "Shireen don't listen to her she's just trying to blame me for this. She is just jealous and hurt that Aayan is getting engaged before her oldest son Asad. She is just upset because no one would marry their daughter to a divorced mother's son.

Dilshad: "Then what is Shireen Raziya Bi she is the second wife of my husband who could never even forget his first wife. She is just an innocent bystander who got trapped into your trap just like my husband. Shireen can't think for herself she has other people think for her.

By that time Najma had already showed up with Asad and Zoya. Tanveer came a little bit later. All were shocked and worried about what was going to happen next.

Shireen: "Dilshad your children will never be happy, that is a mothers curse. You hurt my family and you snatched away my children's happiness but watch your children will suffer just like you did.

Dilshad was shocked, Asad was fuming with anger and clenching his fists Najma was hurt and shocked and was silently sobbing.

Dilshad: "My children will not suffer like I did. In the next ten days Asad will get married that is a mother's promise and that to also to the girl that he loves. An Raziya be ashamed of your deeds they are so lowly and disgusting that watch your daughter will suffer the most for your bad deeds.

Raziya was so angry now. How could this witch try and curse her daughter. She moved forward to go slap her but was stopped when someone gripped her hand and yanked her away from Dilshad. She turned around to see anger on the face of her husband's illegitimate daughter. Anger flashed in her eyes. Zoya had seen the slap coming and had quickly intervened before this lady had hurt her Phupi she was seething with anger.

Zoya: "DON'T YOU DARE RAISE YOUR HAND ON MY PHUPI!"

Raziya struggled to pull her hand out of her death grip and finally succeeded.

Raziya: "HOW DARE YOU TOUCH ME? AFTER YOU TRIED TO KILL MY DAUGHTER! WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE!

Zoya: "YOU BELIEVE WHAT YOU HAVE TO BELIEVE BUT I WOULD NEVER HURT HUMAIRA SHE IS LIKE MY SISTER."

Raziya: "Don't you dare address my daughter as your sister. Did my slap not do you enough or do you need another on to bring you back to your senses?!"

Zoya: "I don't care about that all I know is that you are disgusting women who is falsely accusing my Phupi of doing such a disgusting thing like that. My Phupi is like my ammi I believe in her and I know she would never do anything like that to hurt anyone she is a gem of a person but a person like you wouldn't know that since you have such evil intentions in mind. You must have done something that's why you were punished for your misdeeds. If you ever try to harm this family again or if you ever even try to blame this family ever again then I Zoya Farooqui will make your life living hell."

With that Zoya turned around to see several shocked faces looking at her but she ignored it she grabbed her Phupi's hand and walked out of there making sure that her Phupi's honor and respect were safe. Asad grabbed Najma and led her out also leaving Tanveer behind and went behind Zoya and his ammi. They made their way to the car and silently drove home with Zoya comforting his sister and ammi in the backseat. In all the mess they realized that they forgot Tanveer at the hall but no one addressed the matter since it was not important and they did not even notice her absence. However Tanveer was fuming with anger and she decided that she would get her revenge some way or the other and that also soon. She had to find a way to get rid of Zoya and also get her revenge on Raziya in the process.

Hey guys so that was chapter 7. I hope you enjoyed it. I had it done for a while since i couldnt sleep all night i had really really bad allergies and just couldnt sleep so i decided to right chapter 7 in the meantime. Excuse any errors i was kinda out of it.. I rushed to write the chapter so i dont know how it is. i tried to keep it to the track of the show but did stray and added more ideas to it so i dont know how you guys will like it but i hope you enjoy it. Read it and please comment i need feedback since it helps me and a plus. since I've been getting such lovely comments from all you guys i decided to start chapter 8 today also! ill try to post that later on when i get home from college! If i get good feedback ill try and update faster. Hope you like it and let me know if you want me to continue or not.

PS: THANKS FOR ALL THE LOVELY COMMENTS GUYS!!!! I ENJOY READING THEM!!! I LOVE YOU GUYS ALL SO MUCH FOR SUPPORTING MY FF AND SINCE ITS MY VERY FIRST ONE!!! ❤️

Ruksar 😊

Wow! Great update!! Loved how Zoya stood up for her Phuppi! Please update sooon!!

AMAZING!!! i'm glad that Zoya came forward and stuck up for Dilshad in this bcause that is what i wanted her to do in the actual episode...this was perfect, i loved Asad's jealousy and the fact that he introduced himself as her fiance...i hope Tanveer gets lost soon 😡