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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kajen.asya4ever

UPDATE FAST.PLZZZ.CANT WAIT.


Will update on tuesday or wednesday ! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -cyndu-


Will update on tuesday or wednesday ! 😃

YEEE
HAAA
WILL WAIT FOR UR UPDATE
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: samko

YEEE
HAAA
WILL WAIT FOR UR UPDATE


mere update ke liye wait kar rahe the mujhe laga ki tum soch rahe honge ki yeh ladki pagal hogayi hai update nahi kar rahi hi hai Abb chodo bhi mujhe aab iss os mei interest bhi nahi hai!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -cyndu-


mere update ke liye wait kar rahe the mujhe laga ki tum soch rahe honge ki yeh ladki pagal hogayi hai update nahi kar rahi hi hai Abb chodo bhi mujhe aab iss os mei interest bhi nahi hai!


Aisa kyun kehrahi hoon kii tumhe ab iss os mein intrest nahi hai.😒i love this one.
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Posted: 12 years ago
[QUOTE=kajen.asya4ever]
Aisa kyun kehrahi hoon kii tumhe ab iss os mein intrest nahi hai.😒i love this one.
[/QUOTE]
Meine aase kab kaha theeek se pado usse ^ i said you must be thinking like jisne likha yeh os usko hi interest nahi so she is not updatingtoh hum phir hum kyun wait kare aase soch rahe honge aap log!
i love this os..pata nahi kyun but its really special to me!😃

Edited by -cyndu- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
SWITCH ON UR SPEAKERS

Zoya opened her eyes as she felt a presence in the room...she couldn't believe at first but soon a smile decorated on her beautiful face as it was asad! Zoya tried to speak but Asad took a step forward and kept a finger on her lips.

ASAD:Sshh

ZOYA:Mujhe pata tha ki aap aayenge Mr.Khan.

ASAD:Aata kaise nahi?

ZOYA:Kuch bhi!

They both had tears in their eyes.

ASAD:Zoya mujhe maaf kar paogi (zoya tried to speak) shhh.. suno! Yeh sub mere wajah se hua, Zoya.Mei kya karta.. majboor tha par jab jab tumhe dard diya tab tab mei bhi tadpa hun..jab jab tumhare akho mei aasun aaye tab tab vo mere dil pe hazaaro zakam karte.

*THUD* Zoya heard a sound so she slowing opened her eyes..her eyes were filled with doubt..confusion..pain.

NURSE:Maam vo apko pandra minute ke baad ekk dawaai deni hai aur apke chot ko clean karke uska dressing bhi karni hai issiliye yeh rakhne aayi thi mei..sorry!

Zoya eyes were busy searching asad..

ZOYA:Sapna!?!?

She again looked around the closed room and then found a oxygen cylinder beside her..she reached the cap and opened the cylinder and rested!

Other side of the hospital asad entered the parking lot and removed a ring from his pocket.

ASAD:Zoya, mei aaj tumhe batakar rahunga ki mere dil mei tumhare liye kya hai, chahe kuch bhi hojaye.

He got down from the car and found siddiqui.

SIDDIQUI:Zoya se milne aaye ho?

ASAD:Ji (moved towards the door)

SIDDIQUI:Dur raho usse bhoolgaye ho ki vo meri beti hai.

ASAD:aur mei kabse apke baat mannelaga? mei zarur milunga usse.

Siddiqui removed a gun from his pocket.

SIDDIQUI:Abb bhi jaana chate ho? yeh tumahre liye theek nahi hoga!

ASAD:Abb tak mei zoya se nahi mila vo galti thi meri.. par abb app mujhe nahi rok sakte aur aapne kya kaha ki vo apki beti hai! Allah ne pata nahi aase kyun kiya par ye zoya ki Badnasibi hai.

He moved towards the door and siddiqui shoot! Asad cleched his fist with pain and anger but he had to meet zoya at any cost so he took one more step and felt an other bullet hitting him.

Otherside zoya was remembering all the time spent with him and she could feel the gas spreading all over the room..she felt a burn in her stomach.Zoya's breathing became uneven, she clenched the the bedsheet in pain.

ZOYA:Aa..s..aa.d.

Otherside asad couldn't balance himself anymore,he fell on the ground and he dropped he ring and it rolled from his fingers to the ground.He saw the ring rotate on the ground and the shine of the diamond teased him.

SIDDIQUI:Chalo driver

As the car moved asad saw the wheels rotating and then saw that it went on the ring and passed by. The teasing shine of the ring was no more as the angle was changed at which the ring shined.

ASAD:Zoo..oooy.ya. uhhh

He felt the pain but he still looked around around with a last hope to see zoya But he couldn't he smiled at his crazy hope..Later he found the image in front of him getting unclear. He bend forward to catch the ring but couldn't so his grip at his fist loosened.And his eyes closed.

Other side zoya was breathing harder she had tears in her eyes she again looked around with a last hope to see him..
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NOTE:Oxygen is needed for us but consuming a lot of oxygen is harmful.The carbon keeps your cells from processing oxygen to quickly. Too much oxygen is like what happens to an apple. The apple turns brown when cut. Now, imagine what happens to your brain with too much oxygen. The cells over process sugar and die. You would die quickly without a brain.


How was it? Do comment and i am really sorry i updated after some 3-4 weeks haaw how bad i am but i was helpless i was not at all well 😭

Edited by -cyndu- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update...
Very Emotional...
Hope you are fine Now...
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arshi_sunshine

Superb Update...
Very Emotional...
Hope you are fine Now...
😊


Thanks
glad you liked my update
and i am fine now 😃 thanks!
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Posted: 12 years ago
😭😭
tum bohut buri ho yaar
such mein rula diya hai mujhe
but still an awesome emotional atyachar hai yeh
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks dekho jaisa promise kiya tha ekk aur likh diya...vo os barish continue nahi kiya uske badle yeh contnue kar diya 😉
Glad you liked it.

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