asya two shots: whose gift is the best?part4page14

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ijya123

@ijya123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: janu1610
JIya awesome part . you know i can visulize this over protective Asad . spl after that interview of KSG where he wished to be a father soon . His dreamy smile ,his expectations ,his desires . plz write lengthy parts yaar . It was too short.

next part would be a long update...promise!!!😊

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Sajilisha

@Sajilisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

great update.👏 Cont soon

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ijya123

@ijya123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Hiii...i m alive...:p...sorry guys for giving such a late update...my exams were going on and so i didn't get the tym but i really loved the response m getting for this ff...

so here is the part 4. hope you all enjoy😊...

Zoya had to go to meet the gynaec with asad but due an emergency meeting in office asad could not accompany her and zoya had to go all alone.when she was returning from the doctor's place she saw that there was crowd on the road side and when she stepped out of the car she saw a lady badly injured and the lady was none other than tanveer.zoya took tanveer to the hospital

here asad was calling zoya to know what the doctor said.

asad: (on phone): zoya tum vapis aa gyi clinic se? dr.shiba ne kya kaha??

zoya: asad dr. said we both r fine...lekin aaj pata hai asad mjhe raaste me tanveer mili aur wo bhi buri tarah injured. mjhse raha nai gya to mai usse hospital leke aa gyi.

asad(shocked): tum kaun se hospital me ho? mai abhi wahan pahunchta hun!

zoya: lifecare hospital..come soon.

here the doctor came out of the operation theatre and said: mrs.khan patient ke sar me kaafi gehri chot aayi hai.maine operate to kar diya hai lekin hosh aane ke baad hi hum exact report bata paayenge.

(when tanveer's plan was exposed earlier khans knew only about tanveer's plan to break asya relation and not about her being a call girl or her razia connection).

asad arrived in the hospital and zoya told him what exactly happened. when nurse came out.

nurse: patient ko hosh aa gya hai. aap unse milne jaa sakte hain.

asad and zoya went inside only to know that tanveer has lost her memory.

doctor: patient ke sar me gehri chot ki vajah se unki9 yaddasht chli gyi hai. iss waqt wo physically aur mentally bht weak hai.agar unke dimag pe zyada strain pada to wo coma me jaa sakti hain. unki jaan ko bhi khatra ho sakta hai.isliye behtar yhi hoga ki aap unhe ghar le jaaye aur zyada se zyada khush rakhe.ummedd hai ki jald hi unhe sab yaad aa jayega.

asad: zoya hum tanveer ko ghar nai le jaayenge.mjhe uss ladki pe zara bhi yakin nahi hai. kya pata ye uska koi naya natak ho humein judaa karne ke liye?

zoya: mai aapki insecurities smjhti hun asad lekin iss baar wo koi natak nai kr rhi hai.mjhe wo uss halat me road pr mili aur abhi doctor ne hi kaha that she has lost her memory. wo aapki bachpan ki dost thi asad aur iss waqt usse humari sakht zarurat hai.aur uska hai bhi kaun iss duniya mein.dosti ke naate na sahi to insaniyat ke naate hi lekin humein uski madad krni chahiye.

asad: lekin zo..o..

zoya: lekin vekin kch nai asad. hum usse ghar le jaa rhe hai and trust me iss baar kch galat nai hoga aur jaise hi wo puri tarah theek ho jaayegi hum usse vapus bhej denge.aur aap hi ne to kha tha asad ki ateet ke binaah pr aaj ke faisle nai jaate...

asad: theek hai...tum tanu ko ready kro mai discharge paper nikalwa ke lata hun.

pheww...4th part done.tell me how was it...!

i will update the next part shortly.once you read it plz do leave comments coz they are very encouraging.

for pm buddy me...

with love,

jiyaa...

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Ravina

@Ravinanaik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Nice1 loved it pehli bar asad sach bol raha hai pata nahi woh billi kya karne wali hai aage...

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Tanzia Scott

@latanzia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Please tell me you r not planning for this witch to try again to break up Asad and Zoya.

Fantastic by the way, i am liking this very much, will be eagerly awaiting the next part.

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Hey.
This is the first time I am reading this story of urs and I can say,I am loving it.
Loved the way you portrayed Asad and Zoya's relation.
Well,coming back to the update,
yeh Tanveer ka accident mujhe toh ik bahana lagata hai.
I guess,she didnt lose her memory.
She just wants to break Asad and Zoya's relation.
These r just my views.