Ever-lasting love ll AsYa OS - Page 2

This was amazing.

I'm left speechless after reading such a wonderful and flawless work from you.

Asad and Zoya are meant to be for eternity even if the materialistic world tries to separate them.

You are an AWESOME writer and have already begged a FAV. WRITERs' place in my list.

You won my heart with this OS. I felt this story and the issue you brought or I should say pointed out. Indo-Pak marriages are still considered crime and the innocent lovers have to cost their lives to prove their love. I feel sadden when I hear such cases in the newspaper or channels. Why can't people change their mentallity?

Anyways, discussing this topic can be really controversial because different people have diff. way of thinking which I heartily respect and never intend to hurt anyones' feelings.

Well, leaving that topic aside and coming back to your work. I just enjoyed reading this story even if it had a tragic end.

You must have really worked hard for this and I bend down to you for your effort.

The way you portrayed Asad and Zoya was beautiful, touched my heart.

Please keep coming up with more such works of yours. I would be blithe to read it.

KUDOS! Sweets!

Wonderful job!

-Diya

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

This was amazing.

I'm left speechless after reading such a wonderful and flawless work from you.

Asad and Zoya are meant to be for eternity even if the materialistic world tries to separate them.

You are an AWESOME writer and have already begged a FAV. WRITERs' place in my list.

You won my heart with this OS. I felt this story and the issue you brought or I should say pointed out. Indo-Pak marriages are still considered crime and the innocent lovers have to cost their lives to prove their love. I feel sadden when I hear such cases in the newspaper or channels. Why can't people change their mentallity?

Anyways, discussing this topic can be really controversial because different people have diff. way of thinking which I heartily respect and never intend to hurt anyones' feelings.

Well, leaving that topic aside and coming back to your work. I just enjoyed reading this story even if it had a tragic end.

You must have really worked hard for this and I bend down to you for your effort.

The way you portrayed Asad and Zoya was beautiful, touched my heart.

Please keep coming up with more such works of yours. I would be blithe to read it.

KUDOS! Sweets!

Wonderful job!

-Diya

Gave me goosebumps.

Its just beautiful i m reading it over n over again ...jst amazing n heart wrenching...

Wow! You're amazing!!!👏 It really touched some corner of my heart. Please do write more...

It was amazing & awesome <3

This was superb.
Honestly i felt like someone is telling an actual, like real story. I don't know why i felt that but it is so our society.
Over all it was awsome. Keep writing.

OMG!!!! That was really a good work yar... Beautifully written...i felt each and every emotions,thats is the proof that you are an awesome writer... Keep writing...😳
Diya.