OS: A night at a hotel room - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: DKB532

Omg!! Very cute! Continue writing!

Glad you liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS! But u might wanna edit the Ashad part! Haha its Asad :)

But otherwise, AMAZING! ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: enrique

Interesting work

Would love 2 read more

Plz continue

Its 2 sweet


Thank you
I would love to write more😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: meow23

i thot asad wold toss in his sleep and fal on zoya and mitwaa magicc



Sorry for disappointing you
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

Lovely OS! But u might wanna edit the Ashad part! Haha its Asad :)


But otherwise, AMAZING! ❤️



Have already edited it.
Thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-



Sorry for disappointing you




hehehhe.. u updtng ryte.. update supa soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
*EDITED*

Hehehehehhe... I like it! Is there any way that you will be continuing this? Because I sure want to know how they will be getting back home! This was cute, short and sweet.

Do write more! We would love to read 'em all!

Annie😃
Edited by PhoenixRadar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-



Have already edited it.
Thank you


Yes but i think u missed one.

'Arshad slumped in the bed flicking the lights off while Zoya comforted herself in the floor.'



Just helping u out 😊

Do write more😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-


Yes but i think u missed one.

'Arshad slumped in the bed flicking the lights off while Zoya comforted herself in the floor.'



Just helping u out 😊

Do write more😳



Thanks yeah I missed out one.
I corrected it😊

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