OS: A night at a hotel room - Page 5

Originally posted by: DKB532

Omg!! Very cute! Continue writing!

Glad you liked it

Lovely OS! But u might wanna edit the Ashad part! Haha its Asad :)

Originally posted by: enrique

Interesting work

Would love 2 read more

Plz continue

Its 2 sweet

Thank you
I would love to write more😊

Originally posted by: neenabinu

cute OS

Thank you😊

Originally posted by: meow23

i thot asad wold toss in his sleep and fal on zoya and mitwaa magicc

Sorry for disappointing you

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

Lovely OS! But u might wanna edit the Ashad part! Haha its Asad :)

But otherwise, AMAZING! ❤️

Have already edited it.
Thank you

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

Sorry for disappointing you

hehehhe.. u updtng ryte.. update supa soon

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

Have already edited it.
Thank you

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

Yes but i think u missed one.

'Arshad slumped in the bed flicking the lights off while Zoya comforted herself in the floor.'

Just helping u out 😊

Do write more😳

Thanks yeah I missed out one.
I corrected it😊