FF: Mangalpur Madness #1 - Link to #2 on pg 1 - Page 47

Listen that was really not done...😒 I just asked for a kiss.. *Pouting* And, you not only bought a knock but Maryam has to barge inside too.. well, that was good.. There position must have been a must watch event..😆I could imagine Asad's smirk.. Oh, love him doing that..

Hopefully this time aisa na ho!..I don't want another jinda burial of Zoya..Loved you Update...and the previous one was😳ehh!!

I just love you for your quick it just keeps d reader hooked on with story unlike d others Wer u lose d track!! Awesome!!

Originally posted by: Sirit-of-Dead

OMG! i love the part where their legs were tangled with each other!!😳😳😳

i hope zoya would be the bride once again!!😆😆

n they run away lol n more scenes👏

but it will ruin the reputation of maryam house😭 so leave the thought 😉😉

anyways cant wait fro the next part !!!

plz continue sooon 😛

Haha it took me a painfully long time to write the tangled legs part :p I'm a bit too particular about making it come out just as I'd imagined it in my head haha so I'm super happy that you enjoyed it!! (:

Originally posted by: Enchantress

Listen that was really not done...😒 I just asked for a kiss.. *Pouting* And, you not only bought a knock but Maryam has to barge inside too.. well, that was good.. There position must have been a must watch event..😆I could imagine Asad's smirk.. Oh, love him doing that..

Is zoya again helping the bride to run away... Na I don't think so... But, this is mangalpur part2 then.. Still , I don't think every girl in mangalpur has an hobby of eloping on her wedding day.. But, then.. I don't know.. You better update soon.

Wese, you really update faster and I love you for that,, And, off course you are forgiven for bringing a knock before there kiss.. You just have to make up it.. I really want them to romance.. 😆 Oh, how much I want to lock them in a room...😆

Continue soon!!

Dee

Haha I will make up for it eventually! Don't throw eggs at me just yet :p

Originally posted by: ApurvaLovesARVI

Hopefully this time aisa na ho!..I don't want another jinda burial of Zoya..Loved you Update...and the previous one was😳ehh!!

Do Update soon!

P.s. can you PM me!

And do you have any Index?

Hello! Are you a new reader? Glad you enjoyed it (: About PMs, sorry but I don't send out PMs, because my updates are frequent enough don't worry. And this is actually just my second attempt at writing something haha so no I don't have an index. I've only written an OS before this, and this is the link if you wanna read it: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3514021

Originally posted by: SnigdhaGautam

I just love you for your quick it just keeps d reader hooked on with story unlike d others Wer u lose d track!! Awesome!!

Yeah that's the whole point haha so you guys don't need to re-read and refresh your memory or whatever hahaha. Glad you like it (:

Thks for d lovely n quick updt!!

haha...even i thought same as asad when he didnt find zoya...but i hope she is not in mehnaaz disguised ...cont soon