stay with me...os... update pg2

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she sat on the bench in garden looking into sky crying and lost in thoughts.suddenly she saw some one with coffee in front of her.
none other than her mr khan,her support in bitter times. she felt a bit relieved on seeing him. he sat beside her seeing her.the silence there
is broken by her loud cry.she cant control herself more.she know that he understands her and also he is the one to whom she can express her innermost feelings.
she cried and cried ...he cant see her in that state and thought of pulling her close to him.he lifted his hand to place it on her shoulder but suddenly stopped because
of the words she uttered.''i have to go back mr khan''.he is in shock tears started rolling down,as the light of his life,the only joy in life is leaving him.she did not
notice his tears.all through this convo she is looking into space.she then stood up and started to walk towards her room suddenly she felt his hand grabbing her.
she turned back and saw him who is teary eyed.she is worried seeing him like this.she cant see him crying.then he spoke out shocking her mat jao zoya...these
three words made her feel like she is the luckiest person ...but she cannot confirm that he stopped her because he loves her...then she asked him ''kyun?''
after hearing her question he realised what he just spoke but thought no taking back this time.but his brain is not letting him to confess his love directly to her.
as he is not responding she again asked kyun?'then he said i cant see u leaving...then again she asked the same question..kyun??no reply...he is just silent...
chalo..she said...i am going to my room and tried to get away from his grip but he tightened it further and pulled her into embrace.she is very happy for this act of him
but she want to hear his confession directly..so she asked what are you doing mr khan??he asked dont u know what am i doing...''no''is her reply..he then remembered her about
that bhang night and his confession...she said no...
but she is cannot wait more and shouted at him..what mr khan,why are you beating round the bush?why cant you say it directly?
then he realised her intention and started playing with her.he said nothing and released her from his grip...she was shocked of his response and stood there looking
at him ...

friends,
this is my first piece of writing...i know is not good..
this is what i actually thought seeing the precap...i just pen down my thought...
if you like i will continue...one or two more parts...sorry for gramatical mistakes...
criticism is welcome...
thanks for reading this..

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WaqtZaya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its super cute. want a part next updated very soon! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice :) will there be a second part? If yes, update soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really nice plzz do continue !! ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pl update soon...v much Mr. khan can do dis...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for reading my silly os...
thanks to all those who liked my os and who replied me...
here is the next part..

part 2

zoya thought of leaving him and go to her room but she thought this is the high time to let out her feelings.but her ego is not letting her to speak out openly.
but some how she gathered courage and spoke to mr khan.ok mr khan...i got you. but you have to say those three magical words ...''what?'' asked asad.
those,which are in your mind since long time but you are not letting them out...then asad pulled her into him tightly and whispered into her ear...''I LOVE YOU ZOYA"
then she with all her might hugged him tight and answered ''ME TOO ASAD''.at that moment their joy has no bounds...he lifted off her from ground and spun her around...
all this was noticed by dilshad who was standing at the entrance of garden.she was happy for his son who just found his soul mate.but she thought she will wait till they
spoke to her directly and went back to sleep peacefully after many years...here the two love birds sat on the bench with both their hands clasped tightly.zoya rested her
head on his shoulder and he rested his head on hers...they both recollected how they met each other,their silly fights..their painful moments...asad said that he enjoyed
all the silly things zoya done but he scolded her..listening to this she hit him hard on his shoulder...then asad said her when he saw her for first time...''in durgah
(sorry friends i dont know what they call),wearing orange lehanga,looking like an angel...''he also told her that he had fallen for her at that moment itself..hearing this
she had tears in her eyes..he wiped them off as he cannot see her tears even as if they were because of happiness...
they sat like this for hours...suddenly zoya remembered about her visa which is going to expire in weekdays..she got tensed and stoodup..asad got confused of her action.
she said about the visa..and he smiled..she yelled at him without knowing the reason for his smile..after patiently listening to all her scoldings he said her there is a
way...she anxiously asked what?? asad said ''NIKAH''..thats it she jumped into him with full force and hugged him onceagain...
now they thought that they have to speak to his ammi about marriage.but how?zoya cannot speak to her phuppi about her loving asad..other side is asad who is against marriage
and even his mother knows that.how can he speak to his mother about his love..that too with zoya..with who till date he kept on fighting...but any how they decided to
speak to her next morning as they are running out of time.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum..waitng 4 dere nikah..do cotinue soon..n plz pm me

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