FAASLE: Fan fic AsYa Part 19 pg 141 Jul 29

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janestone6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

This is so different yet so catchy.👏

I'm hooked to this ff from the very first chapter.

Your write beautifully

I love the spoiled Zoya the calm and cool Asad. Looking forward to the next update. 😃

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Soumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Bapre... Kya updt tha
mera mind ekdum blow hogaya

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Didi01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

As usual 2nd part was simply amazing. I love the courage and braveness of Zoya to escape from her father's prison even if it was meant for few days. Meeting of Asya on a cruise from Spain to Turkey ... That's very interesting. Can't wait for the next part. Update soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

I loved this update :D can't wait for the next one

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Nandiniraizaada
Lovely OS👏

thanks Nandini...this is a ff, not an OS

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: NVBGKY
Great chapter, I can see the draw for Zoya to try and behave completely differently from her upbringing, and that is why she is trying alcohol and smoking. Hopefully she realizes that freedom is not only about doing those things but living life by your own set of values.
Looking forward to the next update.

exactly...that's where Zoya has a lot of learning to do. Thanks for reading and commenting

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: sakshilksg
read two parts in one go and both are awesome.
zoya is such a kid, she acted like a brat but she failed.
liked asad's cares towards her.
cont soon.

thanks sakshi. Yes, zoya has just stepped out into the world on her own. Thank God Asad is there for her😉

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: janestone6
This is so different yet so catchy.👏
I'm hooked to this ff from the very first chapter.
Your write beautifully
I love the spoiled Zoya the calm and cool Asad. Looking forward to the next update. 😃

Thanks jane...yeah, the story is different from QH but I will try to weave in the characters from the show . Yeah, Asya are a bit different from the show

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: AsyaManic
Bapre... Kya updt tha
mera mind ekdum blow hogaya

really?? wow, imagine asad ke dimmag mein chal raha hoga phir😆 will find out in next chapter. Thanks dear

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janestone6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: bheegi

Thanks jane...yeah, the story is different from QH but I will try to weave in the characters from the show . Yeah, Asya are a bit different from the show

Your welcome. I really love this change.

Them being different from the show is hooking me to this ff