ASYA OS: Tu Jo Nahin Final Chapter PG 22 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Akilla

awesome OS Ms.Hally



Aaw thanks for the comment Ms.Akilla 😆
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Amazing it was uff the details his feelings hayeee like a lost puppy bichara god i felt for him he was missing her so much luv the shayri u added ...n the song n the end pat god

n the mangalpur scene he died seeing her like that all the yaaadein ufff

it was wow so touching yaar loved it 1st time rocking write more loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Fiza28



Amazing it was uff the details his feelings hayeee like a lost puppy bichara god i felt for him he was missing her so much luv the shayri u added ...n the song n the end pat god

n the mangalpur scene he died seeing her like that all the yaaadein ufff

it was wow so touching yaar loved it 1st time rocking write more loved it



Fiz meri yaar thanks for d LOVELY and AMAZING comment
Love u yaar 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing!!!!!!!mindblowing dear fantastic pls do upte soon i luved it ur g8 wowww nice dude i m speechless 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
IT WAS SUPERB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WAITIN 4D NEXT PART...
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Originally posted by: palakluvsabhiya

amazing!!!!!!!mindblowing dear fantastic pls do upte soon i luved it ur g8 wowww nice dude i m speechless👏👏



Aaw thanks palak love yu yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vibha01

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Next part is coming in 1 minute precisely 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updating as we speak guys
My last chapter too i really hope you like it guys
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All have made me soo happy guys
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Posted: 12 years ago
Final Chapter

Asad and Zoya were rushed to hospital. Aapi and Jiju behind them. Aapi and Jiju had been crying after everything that had just happened. Zoya was shot and Asad nearly beaten to death.

Both were treated and still unconcious. The chances of them being alive ... Only Allah knows if he wans them to survive.

Both were waiting eagerly outside the hospital wards for any news when they heard footsteps and crying.
'Bhaijaan.. Asad... Zoya' Dilshad and Najma both said at the same time crying. Anwar had rang them and told them what had happened and they both took the earliest flight to New York.

All sat waiting for any news. It had been over 10 hours now and Asad aur Zoya haven't awaken yet.

Asad who had been nearly beaten to death had bandages and plasters around his body. The only reason he is still breathing is cos of his Zoya ... Zoya who came to him while unconcious telling him to fight as she will be there when he awakes and he will live with her forever and be happily married. Asad awoke to see his Ammi, Tamatar and Zoya's Aapi and Jiju there ... But where was Zoya? All looked like they had been crying.
'Zoya?' He spoke out. All just looked down.
He didn't care about his injuries. Pain or not he had to see his Zoya.
He got up and walked to her room. There she was lying peacefully. His angel.

Zeenat, Anwar, Najma and Dilshad couldn't tell Asad that she was alive but barely. He needed to see her for hjmself and say his goodbye. How can he say goodbye when he hasn't even lived his life fully with her.

Asad looked at her tears in his eyes and went and lied next to her on her bed. He held her hand hoping for a movement but there was none. Just her breathing slowly.
'I'm sorry... Sab mere wajeh se hua tha. Agar main nahin aunga toh tu nahin iss jagah main hoti. Ek baar mujhe suna hai tere hasi, ek baat mujhe dikha smile tere chehre par aur ek baar mujhe kehdo 'Allah Miyan what's wrong with you Mr Khan?'
In between his tears he was laughing. He laughed as he remembered their first meetings and accident and how both used to say i hope i dont see you again but kismat always brought them together.

BG - Tu Jo Nahin

Zoya was slowly drifting away and Asad was feeling pain. He looked down at the bandage on his body to see it was bleeding and blood was dropping out. He held her hand tightly to his heart 'I love you Zoya'


Zoya's heartbeat is slowing down while Asad is losing lots of blood. Zoya's hand is still to his heart and he is slowly losing unconcious himself. Asad just stares at Zoya not letting her hand go.
Tu Jo Nahin Hain To Kuchh Bhi Nahin Hain
Yeh Maana Ki Mehfil Jawaan Hain Haseen Hain

Both Asad and Zoya's family walked into Zoya's room thinking Asad has had enough time but were shocked by what they saw.

Asad and Zoya lying there ... Zoya had stopped breathing and Asad... Asad had lost his life with the love of his life. All were in tears crying and saw the only thing that made them smile a bit was the fact Asad was still holding her hand as he would forever dead or alive. Thats when they all knew Zoya aur Asad ki kahani hasn't ended yet. It will live on forever.

Tu Jo Nahin Hain To Kuchh Bhi Nahin Hain
Yeh Maana Ki Mehfil Jawaan Hain Haseen Hain

THE END



How was it? I know may not be a happy ending but I had planned the ending before some of the other chapters too!
I just want to say to my readers... All you have made me happy with your comments and grown my confidence in writing and for that I love you all. I hope you loved the ending.

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