AsYa FF Ajnabi Meet Destiny Updated Pg 100 - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

631

Views

201.9k

Users

107

Likes

2k

Frequent Posters

..vidhi.. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#41

awesome part!!!!

update soon nd thnx fr the pm...

HR-DMG4life thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#42
I just read both parts and they are really good :-) please pm me when you continue
Amayaa thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#43
gr8 job again,
LOVED IT!!! continue soon m waiting...
roses.09 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Wow, such a good start. Please continue soon and add me to your pm list. :)
Ceon thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#45
It ws brilliant. Updt soon nd if possible pm me
IIdewaaneII thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#46
I was wondering why i had no new comments :P My chapter didn't even get posted yesterday!
Sorry everyone who had to wait because of me and my bewakoof Internet :P
Chapter 4 is coming today as well! (Hopefully)

Chapter 3:

The whole car ride was silent. Once they reached the hotel Zoya got out of the car.

Zoya: Thank you very much.

Without saying anything, they drove away.

Zoya: What a weird akdu man.

She walked towards the entrance and into the elevator. She hit the button "4" and the elevator went straight up. She exited the elevator and walked into her room, Room 0420. For some reason her door was open. She walked in cautiously and turned on the light. She looked around to see her whole room was a mess. The blankets were on the floor, her suitcases were wide open and her clothes were all over the floor. Clearly someone had gone through all her stuff.

She was mad, but too tired to portray it. It was almost 11:30 and all she wanted was sleep. She started to clean everything up and put everything in her suit case. While putting everything back she noticed that her money was gone. There was nothing left but 5 rupees. What the Hell was she supposed to do? She couldn't ask Shukria. Knowing her so well, she knows that Shukria will freak and make her stay at her house and Zoya didn't want to bother her of her family. She picked everything up and noticed that she wasn't much tired anymore but more hungry. She always kept a spare bag of chips with her in her bag so she grabbed it and went to sit near the window.

It was beautiful night. The stars were brighter than usual and it was a full moon. The moonlight touched her face softly showing every detail on her face. Her eyes sparkled like the stars above. If anyone had seen her right now they would have just melted in her beauty. Her hair was open and the breeze went through her hair making her hair seem likes waves from a calm beach in the sun. Anyone could just drown in her beauty.

Zoya was lost in thoughts. It was such a weird day for her.

Zoya (Talking to herself): I can't believe that Mr. Khan is my boss. After everything that happened in the bazaar he still kept me as his secretary. And today he didn't even yell at me, instead helped me in a situation that could have affected me real badly. But wait. How was he right behind me? He left 20 min before I did. How does that even make any sense. But whatever it was, because of him, I'm safe where I am right now.

*Ring ring*

Zoya :who would call at midnight?

She took her phone out of her bag and picked it up.

Zoya: Hello?

Shukria: Hey Zoya, It's Shukria, are you okay?

Zoya: Yeah I'm fine. But are you okay, I mean why are you calling so late?

Shukria: Actually, Mr. Khan just called and told me what happened just an hour ago. He sounded worried. He told me to call you and ask if everything is okay. He said he would've called himself, but he didn't have your number and he thought you would be more comfortable to talk to me.

Zoya: Hm, well, I'm fine. I mean he was there and he dropped me off safely. There was no reason to get worried. But still, that was nice of him.

Shukria: You sure your okay?

Zoya: Yes Shukria. Thank you for calling by the way, and sorry for bothering you so late.

Shukria: You know Zoya, Asad had never acted that way towards a employee ever. I mean, he actually helped you and dropped you off in his car. If Rona would find out about this, she would freak. He has never let anyone in his car other than his family.

Zoya: Well I bet no one else has been in a situation like that before either

Shukria: Thats true. Well, let's talk tomorrow. It's actually really late.

Zoya: Good idea. Good night Shukria, try not to dream about Hussain to much

Shukria: Zoooyaaa

Zoya: Haha, ok ok , Good night

Shukria: Good night.

Precap: Zoya walking in the office trying to hide her face.


Thank you who commented last time as well! I really enjoy reading them all!


NEXT PARThttps://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3511575/asya-ff-ajnabi-meet-destiny-updated-pg-100?pn=9

Edited by IIdewaaneII - 12 years ago
CrazyBilli thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#47
I hav a doubt.Y din't Zoya complained the hotel authority or the police?😕

continue soon..n thanx a lot for the pm..😃
WaqtZaya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Elite Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Waiting for the next one. It gets interesting 😉
..vidhi.. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#49

nice part...eagerly waiting fr the next part...update soon!

nd thnx fr the pm😊

Enchantress thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Hey,

so back with the update. It was really nice.

But, why din't zoya complain the hotel authority. Someone just crashed upon her things and everything was in a mess still she din't took any step. She could have filled a complain.

Hmm.. eager to read further. Zoya, why is she hiding her face in the office. something is surely up.

Continue soon!!!

~Dee~

Related Topics

Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: --Aishwarya--

11 months ago

The Call of Destiny - AsYa FF The Call of Destiny - AsYa FF

PROLOGUE Asad Ahmed Khan is a sincere police officer, who doesn't believe in destiny and holds himself responsible for anything right or wrong...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove

2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor *New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

11 months ago

AsYa FF ~ Broken Ties (chapter 5 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello everyone! Happy to be here. I was searching for an opportunity to be here with all of you as a member after a long time as writer...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: ExoticDisaster

5 months ago

AsYa OS - Unfolding Yesterday

Writer - ExoticDisaster | Graphicer - Oh_nakhrewaali | Theme - Bag Unfolding Yesterday Zoya coughed, pulling the scarf higher over her nose and...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: missFiesty_69

5 months ago

AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts. AsYa OS - Mixed messages, Matched Hearts.

This is one of the entries I had submitted for Valentine's day contest - A Bag full of love. cover : oh_nakhrewaali | writer : missFiesty_69 |...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".