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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

ankie darling ...very nice os...very cute...

zoya z crazy asusual...

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Nitz

@nits_viratholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

cant find my res..so m here all again..
first of all..u forgot my name 😡 😳
and m a big car buff too..!
u just saw it...
ASTON MARTIN is my all time fav. and I luv oders too..!
But unfortunately or fortunately My DAD is NO AMBANI or OBAMA! 😛
ok..ur OS's are supper cute..I lykd d part 1..! 😆 No importance to ASAD 🤣
awesomee piece of writing dear! 🤗 😉

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

amazingly hilarious 🤣 i loved it until it abruptly ended... i was scratching my head about would be wife thingy... lol hope you have some prequel or sequel to this :P

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Sophia

@sophie420

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Awesome!

Nicely written!

Please do make a thread for your OS's and SS's!

~Sophie :)

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Awww I loved it!! It was sooo cute ...nowadays ..Asad is actually smiling like that ...he's starting to accept Zoya the way she is ...but still in his denial mode -.- xD lol Well anyways it was a nice reflection of what is happening in the current track so far :D All the pranks and child-ish fun!

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Sara Khalid

@Saralicious

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

ankie i love ur siggi

man i watched him grabbing his butt million times lmao

it was so funny

loved the os

it was so fun to read as always love ur os'

i ddn get one thing lol

whaat was tha line

when he said isnt it second hand

she said she doesnt care he said he does and she said somehting adter that is that wife or wiee written there

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Annie

@_Annie_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Appieee...!!! :D 🤗

Another super duper cute OS by you!! :) And not to forget 10th :P
I mean...10th??? Aww...I am so proud of my Appie :)
I so loveeeddd this OS!!
The starting scene with everybody against Asad was so cute! :)
My poor Asad! :( who was trying to hide his grin :P

Then the 'jeep' scene was too adorable!! :)
Loved how Zoya entered his room, throwing her shoes and sitting like a mallika! :D
In short, I loved everything in this OS!! :)
Very well-written! And simply purrrfeect!! :D

Index? Is this even a question to ask??? Of course, you should! :D
I'll be waiting for it :):)

Ps. I know I am late in commenting...but kya karun?? My exams will be starting soon! Doing lots of parhayiii :P

Edited by sweetypie_16 - 12 years ago

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Priya

@-Serene.Rose-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

awww super cute OS! U are on a roll Ankie... lage rahooo👍🏼🤗

gosh... I can imagine asya in dis OS! so adorable! aur likho na... <3

thnx for pm :)

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

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Thank you you soo much for such great and lovely comments, makes me feel soo good. and also encourages me to write more and more shits like this to annoy you guys 🤣 🤗 thank you once again! ❤️

Sautelaa : Thank you soo much 🤗

Baacha jan : Awlee babu, such a cute comment thank you soo much 🤗 🤗 yupp yupp koi nahi i will make one soon 🤣 :*

Didoo : Fact Meets Fiction like i said, wanted to write something, and hence i wrote something very much and highly inspired from my life 🤣 Thank you soo much didoo, i hope you really liked it. Yupp indeed Mr Khan is a changed man. Hence he is a changed man in my OS too 😳

Mature Armaan he is 😆

--Kriti-- : Thank you soo much deary 🤗

Surya.Ravi : Thank you soo much 😳

Maggii : 😆 😆 Thank you Maggi, you are too cute 🤗

sowmy18 : Thank you soo much 😳 This was an OS dear. 😆 Well i will write more, you might get a sequel maybe :P

ASADsweetZOYA : Thank you soo much 🤗

scarletgirl : Really do i?! Thank you soo much 🤗

nihamrm : I so so so want! .

flowergarden : Dost did you like the OS? it was for you!! Ohh my my Salluu wala Avi that even kissy??! thank you

Gurmeet4Drashti : Thank you soo much 😳

ojaswi_kajen : Thanks you 😳

loveQH : Thanks deary, i will really consider that lovely suggestion 🤗 Hope you enjoyed it 😳

Eternal1234 : Thanks deary 🤗

freya123 : Thank you 😳

Far : 🤗 Haan jii! yea appke liye tha! ^_^ Hope you liked it 😳

I am soo soo soo loving Jeeps now a days Not to forget MSK ki JEep ki Jawani too add fire to it 😳 ☺️ Wissha AAK drove a Jeep too

veenisha : Thank you soo much deary 🤗

shreya11mehra : 😆 😆 ISpired bhi toh Crazy wale insan se huye hai 🤣 Thank you soo much 🤗

Nits : Read our chats in FB for more details 🤣

Maaneet099 : Did it end abruptly? 😕 Ohkay when you say it did, it must have :P 😆 Thank you soo much! well, i kept Zoya and Asad to be fiance here, she would be his wife in a few months or so 😆 😆 . Thank you once again deary 🤗

arnavkhushi-12 : Thanks dear 😳

sophie420 : EE Thank you soo much 🤗

irock321 : Yeahh exactly, he will soon open up dont worry, Asad ke liye gussa karna normal hai, pyaar karna hai, izhaar karna toh door ki baat hai 🤣 Thank soo much once again 🤗

Saralicious : That was adorable. Thank you 🤗

jazmeen : Yaar Jazmeen I loved the way he just grabbs his butt up 🤣 ahahahha!

Okhay, Asad was shocked that the Car was second hand. so Zoya said that she doesnt care if the car is, second hand cause she, his would be, had decided and thats final 🤣 Hope i was clear, i should have been more clear, thank you soo much once again 🤗

Annie : 🤗 This one for you baacha 🤗 Ayee Hayee thankish 🤗 😳

STUDY orelse i will turn into Mukka Ahmed Khan. you can comment laters 🤗

Priyamvada : Thank you soo much deary, i am glad that you liked it. 😳