~Saiyaara~ an AsYa FF THREAD 1 - Page 82

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: me2you

<font color="#0000ff">Loved it, loved it, loved it...</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Kya dialogues, what a scene, what a pain,heart wrenching...</font>
<font color="#0000ff">So intense, so true and so real...</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Today you showed us avulnerableAsad Ahmed Khan and, as a reader, I could feel his pain. Now that's what true talent is called; to let the reader feel the pain through dialogues and words, which is very rare.</font>
<font color="#0000ff">The CV's of the show should learn something from your dialogues and writing skills. Truly, you are wonderful and amazing. So talented and skilled. Proud of you!🤗</font>


Aawww...thank you sooo much !! I cant tell you how I'm feeling after reading ur comment ! Really overwhelmed ! 😃 [:D/]

Being a writer, its my responsibility to make you guys feel what I write...and I'm really glad that I succeeded !

Thank you so much once again ! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mochhug

Beautiful. So raw, so sweet how she feels his pain, his anger, his loss... You made me tear up. Cant wait for the next update :)



Originally posted by: irock321

That was heart wrenching! Just beautiful!!! Mann ...that really touched my heart!


Thanks a lottt guys... 😊
Sorry for the pain caused... 😳

Edited by _Aaniya_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahi982

<font color="#0033cc" size="4" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">That was a beautiful update but honestly if I was Zoya I wont forgive him tht easily!!!!!! Probably because I read ur whole story from the beginning and saw how much Zoya went thro cuz of Asad!!!! and on top of tht he said after everything his dad he didn't believe in love then how did he have a girlfriend Ayasha but make Zoya go thro so much becuz he was scared!!!! ohmygod I really wonder how is Zoya gonna react after she finds out about his EX...</font>


<font color="#0033cc" size="4" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">PLZZZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!! I CANNOT WAIT TILL NXT PART!!!!!!!</font>


First of all...thank you soo much for reading and liking my work !! 😳

Let me tell you...its not over yet ! Asad is just confessing and Zoya is listening as well as supporting him at this moment.
She's also not gonna easily forget what he did to her.

You'll get to know more about the Aayesha thing...dont worry..😉

So... I wud just say...have patience and keep reading ! 😃

Thanks for the lovely comment ! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
pleaseee do long updateees
update soon...i loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice confrontation by asad.no precap. eagerly waiting for another update😛😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update !!!!!
beautifully written the asad's state, the way he expose his past, his hurt, pain, anger infront of zoya & her understanding of his state so nicely written
Zoya understand his hurt & support him, like the way u narrate his pain through her tears but what will happen when she knows about his girlfriend ? can't wait for next update plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _Aaniya_


hahahaahaa...thanx for the new name ! ;D
and i love u...:P

You never know when things might turn upside down ! ;)

love, aaniya :*



😆you are most welcome! u totaly DESERVE it! Hanger is ur name and personality 😆 ahh don't love me babe i'm to demanding to be loved 😆😆😆

awww i know things wont but i'm sure you will MAKE it turn upside down 😆 after all u r a writer, its ur job to make all these twists😆😉


Originally posted by: _Aaniya_


I just love the way you can be so sure abnout my Zoya... It actually shows that you've completely inderstood her character ! 😳 😉

love, Aaniya 😃



hehe it's because since i'm reading ur story im like so into her character!! when ever im reading ur updates u give so many details that u can actually feel and understand her POV or character!! so this ones for u * standing ovationg😉😆*

BTW question out of nowhere 🤔 im just wondering eummm when are you updating next?
🤔😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update...hope asad gets the chance to also reveal his history with ayesha too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...Beautiful...Can't wait for next up-date...to find out if he will tell her about that witch...I have a feeling that if he didn't, they will have face a lot of problems because of her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow i loved it, i loved how she was there for him while he was revealing himself and his life to her...so sweet and congrats on passing 100 pages on your thread 🥳
Edited by Alveena12 - 12 years ago

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