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Part I: Page 1; Part II: Page 10; Part III: Page 17; Part IV: Page 23

Thanks for the overwhelming response: 11,000 views. This is a lengthy one.

Part V: It happened one passionate night.

In the hospital:

Zoya had requested everyone to leave. She had asked Phupi to take Armaan with her. Zoya remained by her daughter's bed side. She was crying as she had nearly lost her daughter. How could she have been so careless? Was she a bad mother? At that moment, she felt a reassuring hand on her shoulder. She looked up and saw Mr. Khan. She hugged him tight as she thought he had left. Asad asked Zoya to rest and offered to watch Zainab. She refused and Asad did not argue. He convinced her to eat but she refused; but agreed for coffee. He assured her that her coffee will be with milk and sugar. Zoya was touched that he still remembered.

As he left, he and Zoya thought of the night: a passionate night filled with love and hope.

Rewind: The night

Asad was fuming at Zoya. Tanveer had just told him that Zoya had forgotten an urgent errand resulting in chaos and mayhem in the house. He could just not get her and her irresponsibility. Yet his heart beat at her smile, at her entry and at silly poem recitals. He wanted her so much. He wanted to hug her, erase her pain, clean up her mess et all. He wanted to justify to his head that his heart was right. BUT Zoya Farroukhi always proved his head right. She was a MISFIT for him. Just then Zoya walked in with a smile. Asad's wrath knew no boundaries and he shouted at her like he never had. He called her an insolent brat with no tehzeeb. He asked her to get out of the house although he did not mean it. Zoya Farroukhi brought the worst in him. Dilshad and Tamatar were shocked and tried to stop him. He screamed at them also for housing an irate person like Zoya.

An hour later, Asad's phone rang. It was Ayaan wanting to know if Zoya had reached as he had not heard from her after their meeting. Asad got curious and enquired about the meet. Ayaan refused to divulge the secret. But he sensed Asad' tone, he blabbered about a surprise party for him to celebrate his Business Man of the Year award. Hence he and Zoya were busy making plans. Asad realized that Zoya could not have known about the errand. This meant that either Tanveer had lied (why would she do that?) or there was some confusion BUT ZOYA WAS INNOCENT. He slapped his head at his harsh words. He had to apologize again (he was doing that often). He tip toed around the house to check if all were asleep before entering Zoya's room. He had planned a special something for his special someone. On entering Zoya's room, he could not find her. She had written a letter for his ammi. He opened and read it. Zoya had left and Asad was upset. He had to bring her back.

Suddenly, it started to rain. Asad was worried for Zoya. Where was she? He had checked the airport, rail station but no avail. Then it occurred to him to search the bus station. There she was, wet to the core and bawling away. Some man was trying to comfort her and she was reciting her poems. Asad was jealous. Zoya saw Akudu Khan. As soon as she saw him, she started to run. Asad ran behind her. In minutes, both were lost. Asad tried to calm Zoya but she pushed him and ran towards a dilapidated house. Asad gathered himself and followed her. She slammed the broken door on him which did not help as he was Jahanpnnah Six Pack.

He tried to hug her but she resisted. He continued until she gave in. Zoya was bawling when she felt his lips wipe away her tears. HIS LIPS. Did Jahapannah Six Pack use his lips? Zoya was stunned. She blushed and looked up to him. He smiled. Allah Mia, his smile had a devastating effect on her. Asad took her in his arms and said "SORRY". For some reason, neither wanted the moment to end. Zoya forgave him as she could NEVER EVER be angry with him. DAMN HER HEART. Suddenly Asad withdrew as he did not want his emotions to overcome his brain BUT Zoya always acted with her heart. As Asad moved away, she held his hand. Zoya asked Asad : " Mr. Khan, why can't you let your heart think for tonight". That did it. Asad pulled Zoya into his arms and she willingly came. He lifted her face, played around with her hair and then kissed her with intensity and passion. Until now, Zoya had not known love or passion. Neither did Asad. Both knew they were flowing in their emotions but the dam had been broken and could not be stopped so they went with the flow.

One thing led to another. Before Asad or Zoya could stop, they were making passionate love. Never in her wildest dreams did Zoya think that Akudu Khan would be so desirable and great. She had imagined but now she was experiencing it. Asad knew Zoya was beautiful both in and out. He loved her but for the first time he lusted for her too. Asad Ahmed Khan had met his match in Zoya Farroukhi. In that dark, rainy night, Asad and Zoya became one as their hearts and bodies beat in unison.

The next morning Asad woke up to watch the sun rays streaming on Zoya's face. She looked beautiful and happy. He smiled. Zoya stirred in her sleep, hugged him and called his name. Not Mr. Khan but Asad. When she called out his name, it felt magical and musical. Asad did not feel guilty about breaking norms and conventions. This was so unlike him. In fact he felt content and complete. Why was that? He would ask Zoya as she claimed to have answers and solutions for every question. He thought about their first encounter. HOW THINGS HAD CHANGED? HOW HE HAD CHANGED? HOW THEY HAD CHANGED?

Zoya woke up to find Asad deep in thought. She just stared at him and felt happy and complete. He was stubborn, short-tempered, suffered borderline OCD but he was hers. To disrupt his thoughts, she began to recite a shayari but could not complete as Asad kissed her and their love making began. SHE LOVED HIM WITH ALL HER HEART AND SHE JUST WISHED HE DID TOO. She felt it but wanted to hear it. Asad sensed her thought and smiled (he was doing that a lot now). She whispered in his ears "Asad Ahmed Khan, I LOVE YOU. ALWAYS HAVE AND ALWAYS WILL". Asad wanted to respond but his mobile rang. He had to save his response for later.

NOW: In the hospital.

Zoya cried as she thought about the night and its aftermath. Asad noticed her whimper and knew she was thinking about it too. He had tears AND that moment, decided to bring Zoya back into his life. He needed her not just as a lover but as a life-partner. Their children just added to the relationship.

He would make sure that Zoya Farroukhi would become Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan.

(Hope I am meeting your expectations and hope against hope that something similar happens in QH). Part VI soon in the next 24 hours.

Edited by UK_VS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hai.. First to comment..on part 5..actualy started readng ur work ystrdy.al 4 n a go...nyc...i knw u wil continue...waitng 4 nxt part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another awesome update! Btw I love the fact that you update a chapter within 24 hours... it gives something to look forward to everyday! As always amazing work and can't wait to read more :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
what an update, great, waiting for the next part to see Zoya come back into Asad's life

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