'Oh shit!'| SS by Fizzi and Raina| Part5, Page13! - Page 6

Originally posted by: CutielovesChocs

Startruck and StarryDee - Unres sooon! 😆

un resed mine check it 😃 1 comment on pg 2 n 2 on pg 4 😊 btw u can call me tanya 😊

I love this story!! asad really needsto be thought a lesson after everything he did to Zoya!!! i love Asher!

amazing update...can't wait for the next one...

This is the first AsYa FF that I have read, and its very funny! Like the idea of Asad getting paid back in his own coin!!

Okay now do I need to tell you guys that I love you more than anything in the world! *don't burden your single track mind! I m completely straight*

Raina you toh already know this but Fizzi! Damn good girl! I have been silent reader of all the works in qubool hai coz I m unable to comment from few time! Heavy schedule and also my comments are never short! It's only in the case when an update leaves me speechless!

I have read all your works dear and they are mind blowing! And this one is going in the list of my favorites! The way you both have sculpted out Asher's character is amazing! I was literally reliving my memories my two bestest friend. How we three did all these kind of antics and made a person life hell when he created problem in our friend's life!

Zoya and Asher's friendship is treat to read and the way Ayaan is possessive of Zoya as a friend and also as future brother in law was a nice thought! The updates are undoubtedly hilarious but the way you two didn't lost the track of practicality is amazing because often writers, while writing something funny, lose the track of practicality which irks me sometimes as the updates becomes over the top for me!

And not to forget Raina the whole Jam, jammy and jammies scene was too hilarious!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Ab jaldi jaldi continue karo guys!

AWSM in one word... and you two should write the script instead of those current writers. May I request to update soon...Please...PM me.

This is too good. I could not stop laughing...man i wish i could keep reading on and on...great job :)

Loved it!!!!! <3 Please continueee!!! 😃

OMG OMG

You guys have updated man simply awesome
Loved it
Love asher man he rocks
And plz plz pm me when u update next time plz update spoon plz plz plz plzzz