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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
This was super awesome!!! Better than what I had in mind for sure Raina!
I'm like absolutely stunned. So glad that I managed to join hands with you 😳
Loved the part where Asher says "We get into our jammies before we got to bed!" 🤣🤣
Tanveer needs to let go of that word before they embarrass the shit outta her! :P
Make Asad slog and cry in pain until he's forced to accept his mistake and love for Zoya 😡
I'm so proud of you Rainuuu! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Fizzi-

This was super awesome!!! Better than what I had in mind for sure Raina!

I'm like absolutely stunned. So glad that I managed to join hands with you 😳
Loved the part where Asher says "We get into our jammies before we got to bed!" 🤣🤣
Tanveer needs to let go of that word before they embarrass the shit outta her! :P
Make Asad slog and cry in pain until he's forced to accept his mistake and love for Zoya 😡
I'm so proud of you Rainuuu! 👏


Abhi toh siiirf shuruvaat hai! Tanveer ki bashing hasn't even begun! 😆

And you better tell me via PMs about the ideas that you have. 😃 And yea! I had to have Asher make fun of 'Jammy'. Obviously, since he's a guest, Asad would 'behave' and not say anything, haina?😃😉

Asad is going to CRY. And he's gonna be SO freaking guilty! 😃
Thanks Fizzuuu! 😳😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nysh stry..
waitng for de next ruckus to b created.. luvd de jam-jammy joke..poor asad nyways serves him ryte for treatng zoe so badly
plz update karo soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: CutielovesChocs


Abhi toh siiirf shuruvaat hai! Tanveer ki bashing hasn't even begun! 😆

And you better tell me via PMs about the ideas that you have. 😃 And yea! I had to have Asher make fun of 'Jammy'. Obviously, since he's a guest, Asad would 'behave' and not say anything, haina?😃😉

Asad is going to CRY. And he's gonna be SO freaking guilty! 😃
Thanks Fizzuuu! 😳😃


I did write a part. I'll PM it to you! See if you like it or otherwise you can make the necessary changes :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: meow23

nysh stry..
waitng for de next ruckus to b created.. luvd de jam-jammy joke..poor asad nyways serves him ryte for treatng zoe so badly
plz update karo soon


Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! I was afraid it wasn't funny! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Fizzi-


I did write a part. I'll PM it to you! See if you like it or otherwise you can make the necessary changes :P


You DID!? Then why the hell did you let me write this not even funny part?😕

Accha send it to me asap! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woah. We seem to be on a roll here!

Here's part 4 by Fizzi! 😳

oOo

"So Mr. Jammy, what do you do?" Asher muttered to Asad shamelessly while Zoya chocked on to her water. Had he really called him Jammy?!

"Excuse me?" Asad looked at Asher with a dirty look. Was he trying to make fun of me and Tannu?

"I heard Tanveer calling you that. So I thought maybe that was your pet name! Like how I call Zoya Zoe!" Asher clutched her hand on the table shocking everyone, specially Asad.

"Zoe?" Tanveer looked away and giggled, maddening Asher.

"Yeah! Because it sounds like a short form of her name. Wonder where you got Jammy from" Asher threw back at her.

"I call him that because he used to eat a lot of jam when he was small!" Tanveer replied, slightly offended as she realized, it really does sound horrible!

"Sweet." Asher said with a grin and looked at Zoya, whose eyes spelt murder.

After lunch everyone had gathered in the living room. Asad was watching the one hour news bulletin while Zoya and Asher sat on the couch, catching up. All Asad wanted to do was skin the man alive. He couldn't help but let his ear reach out to their conversation on the opposite couch. He heard 'I missed you, Ashu.' From her mouth and BAMMM!! His head exploded.

"I'm off to my bedroom. If you guys need anything, lemme know." Dilshad and Najma nodded while Asher and Zoya didn't even hear him.

"Jammy I need to talk to you about my designs. Can we talk now?" Tanveer insisted.

"Not now Tannu. My head's aching really bad." He lied. Somehow he didn't want to be near Tanveer. He wanted to be alone if he couldn't be with her.

"Headache? Asad, I guess Zoe will make you some hot soup! She makes it for me every time I have a headache!" Asher suggested making everyone go back to the past, when Zoya had ummm..cooked for Asad.

Asad looked at Zoya who looked apprehensive. "Sure! Why not?" He said, trying to amend his mistake back then.

"Come on Zoe! I'll help you! Make him the one you made for the night you stayed over after the party!" Asher commented making Asad go whaattt?!

"Ashu, not a word now! Lemme make the soup! You want some?" She asked him.

"Anything you make increases my appetite Zoe! You know that!" Asher winked at her as Zoya flushed slightly and smacked his arm.

"I'll be right back!" Zoya walked past Asad without giving him a glance.

Asad walked behind her to the kitchen, thanking his stars they were alone! They needed to talk. About what? He didn't know.

"Umm..Miss. Farooqui?"

"Please temme if you have any other allergies before my food kills you." She said truthfully.

"Apart from peanuts there's nothing. I'd like to-"

"Okay! Now please if you could leave me alone?" Zoya said without looking at him making Asad stunned. What would he do waiting if she herself asked him to leave her alone? He walked out with some more burden on his already burdened mind. Or should we say heart?

oOo

"Tanveer, could you please give this to Mr. Khan?" Zoya gave her the bowl as Tanveer nodded and headed for Asad's room.

Asad was working on his laptop and the aroma of the freshly made soup was making his mouth water. He was just waiting for Zoya to come and give him the soup already! And then he heard a knock on his door.

"It's ajar Miss. Farooqui, come on in!" Asad assumed. Oh this man and his assumptions!

"Jammy it's me!" Tanveer said, slightly disappointed.

"Oh, Tanveer." Asad said with a fallen face.

But before anyone of them could converse, a loud yell was heard from the living room. Asad and Tanveer heard Zoya screaming Ashers name out loud. They both rushed out to find all the mates surrounded around Asher as he was on the floor coughing furiously and others looking at him worriedly. Zoya screamed his name again and began to sob!

"Ashu! Oh My God! What happened?" Zoya cried trying to let him up.

"Wa-water!" He muttered breathlessly and Najma got him water while he now sat on the chair slightly relaxed.

"What had happened beta?" Dilshad asked him as a feeling of deja-vu gathered her mind.

"Zoe did you put pepper in this?"

"Yeah I did but when did you-?"

*cough cough cough* Asher started to cough again, making Zoya's condition miserable! Why did she have to do everything wrong! God!


Ayaan looked at Asher and nodded, his mind going back to the time when he'd skyped separately with Asher, telling him everything that Zoya had told him regarding the kebab incident. Asher felt it was time to make Mr.Ogre a spectator to a similar incident, effectively making him realise that Zoe wasn't to be blamed. How was she to know that he had a peanut allergy? The way in which that ogre had erupted, shouting at Zoya was something that Asher hadn't forgiven.

Zoya, who was oblivious to the entire scheme, ran up to her room once she realized Asher was better now. Asad saw the expression change on her face instantly and remembered their encounter. He followed her to her room along with Asher.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

will comment tomorrow for both 3 n 4th part

1 n 2nd i commented on fizzi's post! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i simply love u two for this os!🤗

im really really really enjoying this so much!

wish it was in d show too...kitna mazaa aata seeing akdu like this!


so cant wait for more


continue it pleej
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesomeee fizzi n raina i love u guys for this SS 🤗 it just to funny n asher ya he is a cutie pie i hope mr .khan se chun chun ke badla le 😆 but not too hard on mr khan 😳 UPDATE SOOON ok 😃
n last but not d least pm me 😆
p.s check my comment on pg 2 for part 3 also i have updated that too guys n yes i was first to comment there

Edited by Starrydee - 12 years ago

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