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Posted: 12 years ago
hey
nice update
cant wait to read more
thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi!! Amazin update!
Luv ur story 😊
Vil u plz pm me wen u update next??
Thnx
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update yaar👏👏
continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey, sorry for the late update, i was really busy. Anyway's as you can all see, i have changed my user name from arnavkhushi-12 to asadzoya-12 as i wanted to have that name since qubool hai started but could not due to some reasons. Anyway, here is part 11, i hope you like it and plz do leave your comments behind and also, i my ss, tanveer(billo) is not pregnant.

Part 11:

tanveer(billo) was going upstairs thinking of how zoya escaped from such a solid proof plan when suddenly she slipped and rolled down the stairs.

Tanveer(billo):AAAHHH!

All the four go up to her.

zoya(pretending to be surprised and also trying to hide her laughter): kya howa tanveer, tum gir kese gai?

tanveer(billo): kis kambakhat ne oil stairs pe dala tha? (few seconds later realised that she had swear and that to in front of everybody and most importantly she had called herself that).

Tanveer(billo): woh mera matlab hai ke stairs pe oil kaha se aya?

najma(predending): pata nai, shayad kisi se galti de gir gaya hoga.

tanveer(billo) is trying to get up but cannot.

dilshad(pretending to be worried): bohat dard ho raha hai kya?

tanveer(billo): aahhh, gi khala, jammy please mujhe mere kamre tak jane main help karde please.

zoya:NO!

All looking at zoya including asad ho has a smirk on his face.

asad(making zoya jealous): sure tanu, way not(asad goes up to her when zoya comes in his way).

zoya: main ne kaha na, no...i mean ke ap rehene dija main tanveer ko room main le jao gi, ur...ur najma bhi to hai...kyu tamater?

najma: gi zoya.

zoya quickly goes up to tanveer(billo) so that asad does not get the chance to stop her.

Both najma and zoya help tanveer(billo) to go up to her room.

tanveer(billo): shukriya(thanks).

zoya and najma: no problem.

zoya: chalo tamater.

najma: gi.

zoya and najma leave the room and just after a few seconds billo's phone starts to ring.

Tanveer(billo): hello?

Razia: billo rani, kaha ho tum, kam howa?

tanveer(billo): woh...woh actually.

razia(angry): woh woh kya laga rakha hai, saf saf bolo jo bolna hai, mere pass tumhari bakwas sune ke liye waqt nai nai, samjhi!

tanveer(billo): tum samgti kya ho apne ap ko bi, tumhari dor mere haat main hain, janti to tum bhi khub achi tarha se ho, kyu?

razia: main ne tumhe ye sab phone karne k lye phone nai kya, kal court main hearing hai, agar woh guriya un logo k haat lag gai to sab kuch khatam ho jai ga, samghi!

tanveer(billo): are bi, ghabrao mat, main ho na, kal tak tumhe guriya mil gai gi, ur billo ka tumse wada hai.

razia: hahahaha, tum..ur wada? pagal samaj rakha hai mujhe? mujhe woh guriya kal kisi bhi kimat pe chahiye, samghi tum!( cuts the call).

Next Day:

Zoya comes in the house from the front door yelling.

Living Room:

zoya: Mr. khan...phuppi...tamater... kahe sab.

Dilshad comes running.

dilshad(worried): Ya Allah, kya baat hai zoya, kya howa?

Tanveer was watching from her bedroom window what all the commotion was about.

zoya: phuppi guriya mill gai hai.

dilshad(shocked): kya?

zoya: han phuppi main sach ke rahi ho.

tanveer shocked aswell.

dilshad: lekin tumhe kaha se mili?

zoya: puppi ye sab in bato ka nai hai, hame abhi court jana chahiye.

dilshad: han, ek minute main asad ko office phone karke bata deti ho ur najma se bhi collage se sedhe court ane ko keheti ho.

dilshad on the phone tells both asad and najma about the doll as tells them to reach the court.

Both zoya and dilshad leave.

tanveer(billo): mujhe razia ko phone karke batana hi hoga.

She calls up razia.

billo: hello.

razia: guriya mili?

billo: han..woh.

razia: shabash billo rani, shabash.

billo: woh zoya ko...mil gai hai.

razia(shocked): kya?

billo: han ur woh dilshad ko le kar sidhe court ki tarak nikal gai hai.

billo: hello?...hello?

billo: lagta hai phone cut kar diya...chalo koi baat nai, mujhe bhi jana chahiya razia ko jail jate howe...are nai, agar ko jail chali gai to mere pese kon dega..ur agar usne sab ko mere bare main bata diya to? nai, main aisa nai hone do gi.

she leaves for court.

Siddiqui mansion:

razia is hurrying to go to the court and does not even hear her husband calling out to her.

Mr. siddiqui: ye razia itni galdi main kaha ja rahi hai, woh bhi itni ghabrai hui, mujhe bhi uske pecha jana chahiye. (just then humaira come)

humaira: abu ap ne ammi ko kahi dekha hai?

mr. siddiqui: kyu, koi kaam tha kya?

humaira: nai, main bas yahi batane i thi k hum ayaan ur baki sab k saath court ja rahe hai, woh aj hearing hai is liye.

mr. siddiqui: thik hai jao, main bhi kahi kaam se ja raha ho.

humaira: gi

humaira leaves and right after that siddiqui also leaves to catch up on razia.

Precap: revelations

Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update Specially zo jelousy

Thanks 4 pm

Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome👏👏
loved it🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!! Just wow!! You have a very wild mind! Love the amazing asya and humYan scenes!! They were adorable!! Loved evry bit of the story!!


You deserve a big round of applause hehe!! I have to say that was one amazing FF!! I cant wait for what happens next!!


The brother and sisters talking and bonding was so cute!! Also asad knowing everything and caring about zoya was very cute


& i loved how tamatar and dilshad was involved and the group hug bit was very cute!! And the bit where asad brings zoya food and she feeds him and all the mitwas were amazing hehe

Everything about this was amazing!! Loved every bit i read hehe!! Please update soon and please add me to your pm list!

Mwaah x[B][/B]
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's amazing and getting more and more interesting. I'm eagerly waiting for the revelation
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey, really nice parts. sorry for being late in commenting on the previous 3 parts as well. dey were really nice. I love da jealous Zoya a lot n Mr. Khan knows it too. plz keep me in ur pm list, i'l surely comment once I read dem, actually m a bit busy so plz.
love,
Nimra.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful part.
Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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