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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: webuser7

Loved it. Hope they have a similar confession soon on the show!


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Thanks a lot 😃 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rennie

good one...<div></div>

thanks 😃 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG OMG!🄳
THIS FF WON THE FF OF THE WEEk! 😳
I cant just beleive it!
I hav 3 gud news!
1. I am a IF DAZZLER now🄳
2. This FF won the FF OF THE WEEK🄳
3. This FF is gonna complete 100pgs soon i.e a century🄳

So here is a gift!
An ASYALIOUS UPDATE gor you all!





They all got seperated from the family hug.

Karan: I guess humein love birds ko thodi der akela chod dena chahiye after all kal jaane se pehle vo ek dusre ke saath time spend karna chahenge nah?

Najma: Zoya aap saachi jaa rahe ho? Mat jao!

Karan: oohhhooo! Najma dear vahaan bhi toh iss rishte ke baare mein acchhe se baatana chahiye na! Ye thoda sensitive matter hai jo Zoya ko handle karne do warna bura bhi lag sakta hai!

Zoya: Haan tamatar! Iss baar aapi badi ummed ke saath mere intezaar kar rai hongi! Unka dil tut jayega!

Dilshad: Hum unhein yahaan bulalete hai! Haina Asad?

Asad: Ji Ammi!

Zoya: Nai phuphi! Mera nikah aapi ke liye bahut extra sensetive matter hai! Muje khud vahan jaake batana chahiye! Unhone kitne kwaab sajaaye honge khuda jaane! Do saal se mera sar kha rai thi nikah kar le bol bol ke! Aaj jab mai nikah karna chahti hoon tab mai chahti hoon unhe vahaan jaa ke acche se kahoon! Aur mai yahaan aise hi aa gai hoon! Meri job mera ghar sab chod ke vo sab bhi thik karna padega vahaan jaake! Bacha khucha kaam hai mera vahaan vo complete karke vapaas yahin toh aana hai haina?

Asad was silently listening what else could he do in front of the whole family!

Dilshad: Sahi keh rai ho! Mai thodi selfish ho gai thi!

Najma: haan! Aap jaldi jayengi toh hi jaldi vapaas ayengi nah!

Karan: Thank god yahaan rona dhona nai hua! Mai toh dar hi gaya tha!
Waise aunty bahut bhook lagi hai kuch khane ko hai?
*winks at Zoya*

Dilshad: Haan hai na beta chalo!
Najma tum thoda padh lo taki baadmein Zoya ke saath time spend kar sako!

Najma: Ji ammi!

All of them left one by one.

Zoya turned around to Asad who seemed very sad!
Asad goes and sits on Zoya's bed where she was doing her last min packing!

Zoya: Kya hua?

Asad: Mat jao!

Zoya: Mr. Khan kyun mere liye isse aur difficult banna rahe hai? Waise bhi mere liye mere hone wale sasural se dur jaane bahut difficult ho rha hai!

Asad: Accha!? Hone wala sasural? Normal ladkiyan aisi baton par sharmati hai!

Zoya: Kya kar sakte hai Mr. Khan aapki choice hai hi tehzeeb less!

Asad: Voh bhi meri galti ?

Zoya: Jee haan! Blame game khelna muje bhi aata hai!

Asad: Jaana itna zaroori hai kya?

Zoya: Haan! Aur vo nai kehte duriyon se pyaar bhadhta hai aur ghehra ho jata hai!
Pyaar gehra karne jaa rai hoon!
Waise Mr. Khan kal mein ye red yaa purple top pehnu?

Asad: Red! Aap pe jachta hai!

Zoya: Lo meri packing toh ho gai!

Zoya comes and sits near Asad. She interwines her fingers with his!

Zoya: Aapko pata hai aapke muh se pyaar ka iqraar sunne ke liye mai kabse bekarar thi? Finally aaj vo din aa hi gaya!

Asad: Aur ussi ke dusre din aap jaa rai hai!

Zoya: Haan toh hum apne bachho se kehenge na ki hum kitni baar bichad ke saath aaye hai! I mean hamari story mein masala toh hona chahiye nah warna mai apni beti aur bete ko kya bataugi ki uske aami aur abbu ki love story kya thi?

Asad: Aapne ye bhi decide karliya?

Zoya: Aur nai toh kya! Hamare 2 bachhe honge! Ek thoda emotion wala ladka aur ek pyaari si beti! PERFECT!

Asad: Muje bhi uss din ka intezaar hai!

Zoya looks down and blushes!

Karan: *shouts from outside*
Bhook lagi ho toh bahar aa jaana!

Zoya: Bhookad kahika!

Asad: Aap hi ka toh dost hai!

Zoya: Waise muje aapse jaane se pehle kuch kehna tha!

Asad: Abhi kal ka din hai!

Zoya: Phir bhi!
Mai kehna chahti hoon ki mai chahe jitni bhi mordern hoon yaa jaisi bhi hoon! Aap mera pehla aur akhkri pyaar hai! Infact mere 2 boyfriends the par maine timepass ke liye rakhe the! Roz nayi movie dekhne ko mil jaati thi!
Pyaar ke baare mein bahut padha tha par wo kya hai ye aap ke hone se muje mehsoos hua hai! Thank you!
Iss musibaat ko jheelne ke liye!

With that she quickly pecked him on his lips and tried to run away but she was unsucessfull as Asad already had caught her by her wrists!

Asad: Itna pyaar mai deserve nai karta Zoya! Maine tumhe hamesha galat samja!

Zoya: Par hamesha musibaat se bachaya bhi nah!?

Asad: Woh sab chodo isse bhi koi kiss kehte hai?

Zoya: *blushes hard*
Aap mein kuch zyaada himmat nai aa gai?

Asad pulled Zoya towards him and caught her by her waist.

Zoya: Ye aap kya kar rahe hai?

Asad: Adhura kaam pura kar raha hoon! Jo aapne shuru kiya khatam mai karunga! Akhhir husband wife ka yahi toh dharm hota hai jo pehla ahura chode woh dusra complete kare! Haina?

With that he smashed his lips on hers. Zoya could not take the force so they both fell back on the bed.
Asad and Zoya were in their different world.
After sometime they broke the kiss and found them in an extreamly akward situation with Zoya lying under Asad!

Najma: *shouting from outside*
Bhai bhabhi dinner is ready please jaldi aa jaye agar aapki personal talks ho gai ho!

Zoya's face was flushed whereas Asad was smiling to her.

Asad: Tum sharmate hue aur bhi zyaada khoobsusat lagti ho.

Zoya: Thank you! Ab muje uthne dijiye warna koi aajeyega!
Aachanak se aapki saari tehzeeb kahaan chali gai?

Asad: Tanveer le gai!
( sorry kal ke epi ke baad muje ye add karna thašŸ˜†)

Both get get up and make their way to the dinner table.
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This was a long and ASYALIOUS UPDATE!
M so happiiee dats a kind off romantic update😳

I didnt have tym yet i wrote coz if this FF won FF OF THE WEEK then i wanted to update this week only!




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Luv Ani <3
Edited by aniiee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeyeyeyyeye...m d frst one to comment
dekha m kitni fast hu...i was stalking ušŸ˜Ž
i mean ur storyšŸ˜‰

vo sb chodo...kya update thi yaar...i was cntinuously smiling while reading the update...if anybody could hv seen me then they wud surely took me to agrašŸ˜†šŸ¤£

so now we will get to read their romantic talks on phone wow
jst imagining asya's late nyt talks...n then both slept while talkng haaye so romantic😳
but but but time differencešŸ˜•...so dis cant be happen

koi na i know we will get dhinchakk updatesšŸ˜‰

n ya congratulations to the new dazzleršŸ¤—
uhi ache ache updates dete rho...aur bde bde comments paate rhošŸ˜›

n ya i want nxt update asap or i will stalk u...n dis tym u not ur storyšŸ˜Ž
Edited by pinkks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum update luvd it...congrats...
Plz pm me wen u update nxt plzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super amazing.

First of all, congratulation. You definitely deserve it. This ff is amazing. Hope this encourages you to write more. Wish u all the best.

Secondly, loved this chapter. Asad sharing the passionate kiss. Omg!😳
Though I hate to see zoya leave right after their confession. It would have been better if asad and the whole family joins them.

I would like to see zoya's appi expressions when zoya gives her the news of her nikhah.

Update soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
are wah fab update!šŸ‘
oh ho zoya wapas ja rahi hai...😭 hope uske wapas aane tak sab kuch thik rahe...!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww. so sweeet. really nice. plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey plz send me pm re.. I m not able to buddy due to some reason.. plz pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow yr
Congrats fr dis
N dis part ws awsm... Bt zoya leaving...I Jst wish asad also goes along wid hr...somehow...

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