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thanks 😃
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Originally posted by: scarletgirl

lovely update...i just love Karan n najmaa jodi too...mission asya love starts waiting for it n thnkz for d pm

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Gosh!!!! Fiffty pages for 7 chaps jismein meri comment bhi zyaada hai ofcouse 😆
But yet for a first timer!
I luv u all!
Pleejj aise hi pyaar barsate raho!
Aur haan i figured out koi bhi OS 7 parts ka nai hota hai🤣 so i made it a SS!
My first one😳
Completed a half century!
Toh ye lo ek emotional chapter!
TA-DA🤣




ASADS ROOM


Asad was busy doing his some office work when he hears a knock.

Knock knock!!!

Asad: Come in.

Its was najma his sweet lil sis! 😆

Najma: Bhaijaan?

Asad: hmm..

Najma: Aap kya karne wale ho?

Asad: Kisike baare mein tamatar?

Najma: Zoya ke baare mein bhaijaan

Asad: *Worried*
Usse kya ho gaya?

Najma: Kuch nai hua usse bhaijaan! Aap samajte kyun nai bata kyun nai dete Zoya ko!

Asad: Tum nahi samjogi Tamatar itna aasaan nai hota.

Najma: Shayad sahi keh rahe hai aap nai samjungi! Par itna zaroor samaj ti hoon ki din dhal chuka hai aur uske saath Zoya ke new york jaane ke din bhi paas aa chuke hai! Parso raat ki flight hai uski bhaijaan! Kuch kariye!

Asad: Jaanta hoon mai najma par waqt ke haaton bandha hua hoon!

Najma: Kya matlab hai aapka?

Asad: *Thoughtfully n Teary*
Zoya parso hamesha hamesha ke liye New York wapas chali jayegi! Aisa toh bilkul nai hai ki mai usse apne dil ki baat keh doon toh vo ruk jaaye. Vo ruk hi nai sakti uska visa jo expire ho raha hai. Maine baith ke bahut socha najma par mai usse pyaar karoon iska ye matlab toh nai na ki vo bhi mujse pyaar kare shayad vo kisi aur ko pasand karti ho!

Najma: Par bhaijaan vo toh..!

Asad: *Teary*
Jaanta hoon najma pansand toh vo bhi muje karti par kis tarah se ye paata lagana maine zaroori hi nai samja! Sahi kehti hai vo mai sirf apni feelings ke baate mai sochta hoon meri soch choti hai jismein maine apni feelings ke liye jagah bana li par ek ladki ki zoya ki feelings jaana bhi nai chaha! Sahi kehti hai vo mai ek mostly male dominant society mein hoon jahaan kisi ki feelings ko maine samjne ki koshish hi nai ki!
Mai kya karoon najna kya karoon?
Muje har samay uske saath aisa kaise kar sakta hoon?
Ab nahi mere paas itna waqt hai ki mai usse samju nahi usse kehke uski aasha badha sakta hoon! Agar mai usse keh deta hoon toh vo kabhi zindagi mein aage nai badh payegi.
Mai usse khush dekhna chahta hoon! Aur vo kabhi na aane ke liye jaa rai hai kaise roku najma kaise roku?

Najma: *Teary*
Ye kya soch rahe hai aap bhaijaan aapse aacha dil wala imsaan Zoya ko kahin nai milega aap kyun aisa kar rahe ho ? Agar Zoya bhi aapse utna hi payaar karti ho toh?

Asad: Sochna pada najma aaj karan ke saath kitni khush lag rai thi! Jaise vo purani Zoya vapas aa gai hai!
Aur agar hum dono ka pyaar sacha hai toh vo ghum phir ke puri diniye mein mere paas hi ayengi! Intezaar karunga! Mere pyaar tab tak sacha nai jab tak vo bhi mujse pyaar na kare kyun ki ek darfa pyaar Kabhi sacha nai hota!

Najma: *Thinking*
Aapko aisa haar mante nai dekh sakti bhaijaan. Behaan hoon aapki bahut pyaar karti hoon aapse infact aap done se. Aapne Zoya ki dil ki baat nai jaani toh kya maine toh jaani hai aache se jaani hai. Vo bhi aapse beintehaan pyaar karti hai !
Pehle toh muje laga tha ye sirf ego hai par ab lag raha hai ego ke saath kuch aur doorniyaan bhi hai jinne mitana ab zaroori ho gaya hai! Ye sab karne ke liye surf do din hai!
Sirf do din!
*Teary*
Mai chalti hoon bhaijaan!
Aur haan aapko apna sacha pyaar zaroor milega!
She smiles assuringly.

Asad smiles sadly.

Najma leaves!



ZOYA'S ROOM


Zoya was sotting and packing her stuff all while in the thoughts of her jahapanah!

Zoya: *Sadly*
Kya karne aayi thi aur kya ho gaya! Rishta jodne aayi thi so toh nai juda upar se dil bhi tudva liya! Wah Zoya kya two in one offer choose kiya hai!

She saw her essentials. All related to mr.khan after all he bought her all of these when she lost it at mangalpur. That ipad he bought only for her!
That ipad seeing which he got so worried at the car accident spot!

Everything related to him perfectly then how could she forget him?
It was impossible!
YES! Its was impossible for miss Zoya farooki who claimed that she could hell do anything over the globe!
She had lost!
Not any simple thing
She had lost her heart to a heartless person!
Thats what she thought atleast!



NAJMA'S ROOM


Najma quickly dials karan's no. as now she needs a lot of help!

Karans picks up.

Karan: Hey young lady!

Najma: Muje tumhaari bahut si madat ki zaroorat padne wali hai. Yahaan sab plan se ulta jaa raha hai! Maine socha tha ab bhai ne mere samne admit kar liye! Toh sab chod ke chota sa par confession toh ho jayega! Par yahaan toh pasa hi palat gaya. Bhai bahut dukhi hai. Mai unhe aise nai dekh sakti karan kuch karna hai humein jaldi. Parso ki flight hai.

Karan: Najma calm down! U know some how i knew asad confess nai karega but iski vajah toh batao varna hum ASYA ko saath kaise layenge!

Najma tells him everything!

Karan: Maa kasam! Ye dono saath kaise aaye. I mean Zoya ek independent ladki aur asad ek purane kyaal wala banda! I mean no offence but yea ! I mean...

Najma: Mai samjti hoon tum kya kehna chahto ho. Par mere bhai bahut acche hai thodi purani soch hai par utni bhi nai. Mere bhai Zoya se bahut pyaar karte hai aur Zoya bhi yahin matter karta hai mere liye! Baas!

Karan: Haan haan janta hoon! Par Asad ka aisa feel karna banta hai najma! Vo pehle apne baare mein soch raha tha ab Zoya ke baare mein soch raha hai and i guess thats a good sign! I mean vo confess kar rah tha par tab usse realize ho gaya ki he does not know how Zoya feels you see! Aur agar Zoya na kehde toh apna poppat hone se bhi bacha raha tha!
Thats a totally guy thing!
I understand!

Najma: *angry*
Vo Zoya ke baare mein soch rahe hai kisi bhi cheez ke bare mein nai! Get it!

Karan: Got it sweety!

Najma: Toh hum kya karne wale hai?

Karan: Situation aur time limit dekhte hue muje ye lagta hai ki yahaan sirf ek mission kaam ayega and that is mission aag lagao!

Najma: Kya keh rahe ho tum?

Karan: aag lagoa in the sense vaat lagao! Mai Zoya aur tum Asad ko ye ehsaas dilao ki dusra usse pyaar karta hai par ego ke kaaran nai bol raha. Dono ke ego levels high hai aur pateince bhi! Dono ke ego takkar marenge so koi nai koi frustate hoke confess kar hi dega!
Full prooff plan hai!

Najma: Kya ye work karega? Tumhare paas koi aur idea nai hai?

Karan: Hai na! Parso thode aaso ke saath tata bye bye karte baithte hai!
Kya najma apne bhai ke liye itna bhi nai! Itne waqt mein isse better aur koi plan nai ho sakta!

Najma: *sigh*
Thik hai!
Tum apna kam chalu karo mai apna!

Karan: Yes boss!


Asad and Zoya have lost hope in their relationship now but i guess destiny always plays a hard game. They have no idea what is gonna happen now.

Lost in thier own world Asad and Zoya drift of to sleep for yet another morning which makes the days to separate come more and more nearer!
***




Sry guys i knw late update but guys m on a trip so no tym plus smetyms no internet! Bear wid me! Luv yaa!

Comments mein dher saara pyaar dena! *eyelashes*




Guys plz check the UPDATED ALPHABETICALLY PM LIST ON PG 18! Check out ur names in it!




Buddy me for pms n also leave a one line comment dat u wnt a PM


GUYS WHILE SENDING PMS I FOUND OUT THAT SOME PPL ARE IN MY PM LIST BUT NOT IN BUDDY LIST! THOSE PPL WONT RECEIVE PMS COZ I DNT KNW WHO R DEY NW! THERE R ALMOST 10 PPL! PPL ON MY BUDDY LIST WUD ONLY RECEIVE PMS! COZ WEN I SEE COMMENTS I SND A BUDDY REQ BUT SOME PPL DO NT ACCEPT DEM SO I CANNOT SND DEM PMS! SRY PPL! TO THOSE PPL WHO R MY LIST AND DIDNT RECIEVE PMS PLZ ADD ME !




Luv Ani <3
Edited by aniiee - 12 years ago
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PMS araam se toda bhejti hoon 😛
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Originally posted by: hummi16

Luv da story xxx [:D/]

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Loved all the updates. Great job.
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Originally posted by: kandygrover

Loved all the updates. Great job.

thanks 😃
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Awesome update!!! 👍🏼
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Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

Awesome update!!!👍🏼

thanks 😃

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