an jealousy os(tanveer entry!!!!)promo: page 32

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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys so sorry for disturbing u guys...my exams are going on but still i am writting this crap coz i cant sleep anymore...

guys if u like it i will continue...and this story includes ayaan too just for jealousy...hope u guys like it..

i will start from todays episode where all trio are home after the accident...

at the dining table...

zoya was lost in her thoughts and her mind was replaying the scene where asad ignored her and hugged tanveer๐Ÿ˜ก...she did not still touch her food ..

dilshad: zoya what happened u are not eating...๐Ÿ˜•

zoya: no puphi i am not in a mood...she trailled off as she saw asad walking towards the dining table...

whereas asad was guilty for not noticing her at the accident spot ...

phupi: zoya comparing to other days u are eating only a small amt of food...

najma: haan ammi i too noticed ...are u alright zoya...

zoya thought of not showing her feelings infront of others...so she came back to her chirpy and bubbly mode...

zoya: aree phupi i am eating naa u two now dont worry...

and she reached to get the jug of water instead asad helped her and they had a eyelock๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ...and it was suddenly disturbed by a beep sound from the mobile...

as zoya came out from the eyelock she poured some water in her glass she took her phone too see her msg..

AT AYANS PLACE:

he saw his ammi broken down in front of him...he could not take it ...however difficult he decide to get his abbu out of jail...and he was so dissapointed towards his bhaijaan...so he thought of getting zoya's help

ayan: i want to meet zoya now...he thought..

so with that he sent a msg to zoya

KHANS MANSION:

as zoya was drinking the saw the msg...as soon as she saw the msg she spit out the water she drank ...and she stood up and shouted KYA!!!!!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

the msg was:

mona darling!!!i want ur help... i want to meet u now ..plz dont stress urself i am in ur room only so plz come before somebody sees me...i am waiting for u...

asad : miss farroki...what happened any problem?๐Ÿ˜•

zoya: i..am sorry mr khan that i made ur table dirty

asad : no its okay ...soo...any problem

zoya: thanks mr khan ...if its a problem also i can manage it..

dilshad and najma sensed a tension between them and glared towards each other ...๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜•

tanveer: asad do u want anything ...u did not eat well

asad: no...

zoya: haan keep him lots as he wabt lots of strength na and mumbled to herself to save u..๐Ÿ˜ก

and in an instant another msg came telling

mona darling come soon ...the servant is coming to ur room to clean...i think i will be caught

and with that as she got up from the table but she stumbled and before she fell she balanced herself...

asad: zo..miss farroki careful...he shouted...as zoya was some how touched by his concern..and she ran towards her room...

dilshad was suprised by his sons reaction..

dilshad : zoya eat and go...

zoya: dont worry phupi i will come back within some minutes...

dilshad: its zoya who had gone why u had stop eating asad ...eat soon u told u have some work na..

here asad was curious and thought..who is the one who send her the msg...i think that msg will be of that RABART...to hell with him

as asad thought of this he got up from the table without eating..

tanveer: asad what happened? why did u not eat

asad: no its okay...i dont feel like eating..

dilshad thought some thing has happened...i have to find out and najma too joined her...

PRECAP:

LOT OF JEALOUSLY FROM BOTH SIDESโค๏ธ

AND ZOYA OPEN UP TO AYAN ABOUT HER FEELINGS AND AYAN THINKS OF PLAYING A CUPID FOR ZOYA AND LATER HUMERA TOO JOINS HIM


SO GUYS HOW WAS IT? ๐Ÿ˜• I KNOW IT WAS A UTTER CRAP...BUT NOW ONLY I AM ABLE TO GET SOME SLEEP๐Ÿ˜ณ...UR CHAPPALS AND JOOTHAS ARE WELCOMED๐Ÿ˜†

PLZ DONT FORGET TO PRESS LIKE BUTTON AND GIVE UR OPINIONS

PART 2 : PAGE 6

PART 3: PAGE 8

PART 4: PAGE 10

PART 5; PAGE 15

PART 6: PAGE 20

PART 7: PAGE 24

PART 8: PAGE 27

PROMO: PAGE 32

PART 9: PAGE 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
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go ahead...that was promising...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

waiting for the next part...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrunal1987

go ahead...that was promising...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

waiting for the next part...๐Ÿ˜Š

thanks ...

this is what i was waiting for

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please continue writing and please PM me when you post more :) Wonderful job :):):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it...do continue...at least it will keep our spirits up...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was very cute dear! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Please continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its better than the current story line ๐Ÿ˜‰


Edited by VenusFlyTrap - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWWW!
Thanks for the PM! :D
This is so damn cute. :D I loved it! Sacchi. :)
Other than a few typo's here and there, this is perfect. ;D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMGGG, PART TWO PLEASEEE. You write real nice :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG! Dis is awesme! Plz continue soon n do pm me! I added u in my buddy list ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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