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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg i loved this part zoya kidnapped cant wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW

amazing update!

the dance scene was very cute!

continue soon!

the precap is scary! *shudders*
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was so cute...
Amazing update!!
Loved the way Asad and Zoya were stealing glances at each other.
And then their romantic dance *goes to AsYa wonderland*
*comes back as she sees she hadn't commented on the last few updates* I sincerely apologize for not commenting on the last few updates. Had been busy with exams and now they are finally done *phew*
The precap looks serious.
Continue soon and do PM me.

Love,
Diya
Edited by asyaforlife - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovley update...Asad saying a lie to his mom...thn d song was superb n wts this zoya kidnapped?i wnt to read it soon plz update soon n thnkz 4 d pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
The story is very interesting.. 😊 I think it is nice if Ayaan gets together with Muskaan.. And at the same time, it will be nice if Humera find someone to replace Ayaan's place in her heart.. Please pm me if u have updated the next part.. Thank u 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww Amazing Update!!..
Loved the dance & the song...lovely!!...
Precap!!...who kidnaps Zoya??...
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one...pls will you PM me?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys,sorry thats it took a little longer to update,actually I go to school everyday and then I have to go to toutering on Mondays and Thursdays and I get a lot of homework,but I think week after next week I have no school for a week so I will update everyday first thing,but remember to keep commenting after every update if you want a PM anyways heres the update,enjoy!
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~Destiny~
In the morning in the khan house-
Asad was the first one at the table and had a his favorite black coffee mug in his hand and his newspaper in the other. Muskaan came and said good morning to him and Asad said Good morning back. Muskaan noticed Asad looking over at the stairs and then asked,"bhaijaan who are you waiting for?"
Asad said,"Ammi." Truthfully he was waiting for Zoya.
Then Dilshad came with Najma and Muskaan said,"here is Ammi." Dilshad said,"Salaamikum." Asad wished her back looked at his newspaper,but he wasn't focused cause he was waiting for Zoya and her sheyaris to start. Ammi noticed this and asked,"kya hua Asad?"
Asad said embarresed,"Nothing." Then Zoya came and Asad smiled in his head. Asad pretended to read his newspaper. Then Zoya said,"salaamikum."
The 3 ladies said salaam back.
Then Zoya said,"phupi I have some important work so I have to leave immediently after breakfest." Then Dilshad said,"Ok."
Then Asad said normally,"If you want I will drop you off wherever you are going." Then Zoya hesitated,"No Mr. Khan I am fine."
Asad was hurt inside when she said that then Muskaan said,"Zoya its ok I mean its not a bad thing if bhaijaan takes you." She continued her breakfest after saying that and after a while Zoya nodded and said,"Ok" Asad felt a warm feeling inside when she said that and Muskaan noticed and smiled secretly.
Zoya and Asad stood and left. Muskaan smiled to herself and said to herself,"Impossible."
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In the car-
Asad and Zoya were in the car and Asad was driving. Zoya was bored and started on the radio and then Teri Meri came on. After the part ik ladka aur ik ladki ki yeh kahani hai nayi, Asad and Zoya somehow felt unconfortable and Zoya closed it.
Suddenly a car came in and almost hit them,but Asad went to the side and the car dangerously went to the side,but Asad covered Zoya and scratched himself. When they were safe Asad went outside and said,"What the hell?!" Zoya came out of the car and calmed Asad down and saw his hand bleed and went to the car and got out a hankercheif and grabbed his hand a tied the hankercheif around his wound and Asad looked at her. (Mitwa) Then when Zoya was done and then locked at Asad and their eyes locked. Then their eyes unlocked when a car went passing by really fast. Zoya went to the car and Asad followed. Zoya closed her eyes when she sat down on the passenger seat. She opened her eyes and looked at Asad and then looked at the window.
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After a couple moments they reached Zoya's destination
Zoya went out of the car and then looked at Asad and Asad looked at Zoya. Asad felt somehow scared and didn't want Zoya to leave,not even for a moment. Zoya slowly closed the door. Asad felt like grabbing Zoya's hand and pulling her close to him. He didn't want her to leave him. He felt like something was gonna happen that would seperate him and his Zoya. Asad started the car and looked at Zoya who disappeared while walking somewhere else. Asad felt like he lost Zoya. Then he whispered,"Zoya"
Asad slowly drove the car away still in fear that he would loose his Zoya forever.
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Zoya walked and felt like something bad was gonna happen to her,but she ignored the feeling and continued on what she was doing. Zoya had a secret, a secret she could not tell anyone. It was that years ago her abbu left her for another woman and he killed her ammi. Zoya secretly came to India in order to search for her abbu. She had a place to stay,it was her abbu's old home. When she realized the house was burnt down when she came,she had nowhere to go. Thats when Dilshad came and took her to her home. Zoya was searching for her abbu to learn why he killed her ammi. She was in tears and then a man came to her and said,"Follow me,I will take you to your abbu." Zoya was confused and said,"Who are you?" The man said,"No questions,you want to know the truth? Then follow me." Zoya didn't budge. Then man sighed and said,"You want to know why your abbu killed you ammi and who your abbu is?" Zoya nodded slowly. The man said,"Trust me,I will tell you everything." Zoya felt desperate and then the man said,"You are Zoya Farioqqi right? You are trying to look for your abbu right?" Zoya nodded and the man took out a picture just like Zoya had and said,"I have the same picture." Zoya was shocked and the man said,"Now you trust me?" Zoya nodded and then followed the man. Zoya felt insecure about the man,but she was desperate.
The man led her to a dark place. Then the man said,"sit here." He pulled out a chair and Zoya sat down and then suddenly something hit her head,very hard and then she almost fell unconcious and then she saw the man smiling and a woman came,It was Razia. Zoya then whispered,"Asad" and fell unconcious.
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In Asad's office he felt something happened to Zoya and stood and said,"Zoya"
Precap:Asad yelling Zoya and trying to find Zoya
Hey guys,I hope you enjoyed this part! Please comment and like oh and remember if you want a PM comment on every part I update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Perfect!!!! I love it ...omggg I'm scared for Zoya! That biatch Razia always ruins everything ...I hope she dies cause she deserves it -.- !!! Imma stop myself right here otherwise I'm gonna start ranting xD loll Please coninuee :D I love it!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful! I cant wait to see Asad's reaction! Love it hehe

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