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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow really it was a breathtaking update dear

the way u place the situation so nice finally truth is out !!!
egarly waiting what will the next turn... others reactions probably ayan's ?
I like that asad confess but zoya is not in the state to realize that
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: skavya

Wow really it was a breathtaking update dear

the way u place the situation so nice finally truth is out !!!
egarly waiting what will the next turn... others reactions probably ayan's ?
I like that asad confess but zoya is not in the state to realize that
continue soon


thanks a lot dear... will update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey all lovely readers, here is the next update, a bit long one... but solving a lot problems... hope you all will love it...


Part-22

Asad was waiting for Zoya's decision in the car watching his watch, he knew, zoya too knows he is too punctual, he will definitely leave within ten minutes'.. As ten minutes passed, he started the car in disappointment, suddenly zoya came almost freshen up and sat beside him on passenger seat without speaking a single word'..

Asad took a breath of relaxation, he held zoya's hand and said, thanks zoya'' Zoya shrugged his hand and looked outside the window, on the way, zoya didn't utter a single word'just kept looking outside with tears in the eyes''..

As they reached the farm house, Zoya opened the door of car and went inside without even looking at Asad, while Asad came after her'. but to his surprise, he could see her signature smile on her face on looking at the family'.

When Nazma, Nikhat, Humaira and Nuzzrat came''.. hey love birds, app dono to gayab hi ho gye the'' Nuzzrat chided to zoya'.

Nahi nuzzrat, esa kuch nahi tha, wo car kharab ho gyi thi''..

haan haan, humein pta hai, kuch to hone hi tha'' ese thoda na pura time ap hamare sath bitate, car itni buri tran se khrab huyi ke subah se sham ho gyi? Said Nikhat'

Zoya punched her laughing and all the girls started giggling. when zoya said'. well isi baat pe ek shair rj hai'

"Car hamari kharab huyi to hamari kya mistake hai?

Car hamari kharab huyi to haumari kya mistake hai?

Lets enjoy the life, ye to beautiful cake hai'''.

Asad was enjoying Zoya's smile from a distance and was a bit relaxed as well as surprised to see zoya smiling like this in spite of all tensions in her life'. and they moved towards Rashid , Shirin and Dilshad who were relaxing near the small pool in the lawn'.

When Zoya came to them , Dilshad said are zoya aa gye aap log? kuya huya?

Kuch nahi ammijaan, car kharab ho gyi thi''.

Ohho.. thik toho na aap log? asked Shirin,

Ji ammi, aap itni fikar mat kijiye meri, amin to pehle hi itni pampered hun, aur bigad jaungi'

when Nazma came, bhabhijaan, yekya aap enjoy karne ayi hain aur fir bhi itna haevy anarkali suit , mujhe pta hai aap isme comfertable nahi hain? why don't you wear jeans? jab se apki shadi huyi hai aap ese hi kapde pehnti hain?

Nazma Shhh'.. zoya made her quite,

Kuon isme galat kya hai Zoya, said dilshad''.. vaise bhi tum mujhe in sutis mein badi ajeeb si lagti ho, mujhe to meri purani zoya wapis chahiye'.

Han zoya, thik hi to keh rhi hai dilshad, izzat dil mein hoti hai aur kapdon mein nahi. tum wo pehno jo tumhe acha lge''. aur yhan to waise bhi hum log relax karne aye hain'.. Said shirin, Nazma, zoya ko le jayo aur ise kaho jo ye pehnna chahe pehn le''.

Ji chotti ammi, said nazma , lekin kya hum log bhi? asked nazma fearing looking towards rashid''.

Rashid gave a smile, when dilshad also looked towards Asad , he too nodded his head in yes as a big surprise too all''.. All the girls were too happy that they ran inside for change'.

Esa lagta hai ye ladkian puri tayari ke sath ayi thi, dilshad smiled''.

Han dilshad, aur zoya ke naam pe fayada utha gyi''.

Chaliye shirin , kya farq padta hai, yahi waqt hai inke enjoy karne ka, aad mein kya pta inki takdeer kya le aye inke liye'.

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After some time, all the girls were having fun wearing clothes of their own choice and running here and there while zoya was a bit tired and was sitting due to weakness'. when humaira came to her''

Kya huya aapi?

Kuch nahi bus thoda thak gyi thi..

Main ye nahi pooch rhi' main ap aue asad bhaijaan ki tension ki baat kar rhi hun'

Nahi Huma esa kuch nahi hai'

Appi meri taraf dekh ke boliye''. zoya looked at her and lowered her head''

Appi main aaj se nahi balki marriage ke agle din se hi note kar rhi hun, kuch to hai jo galat hai, kyonke, ap sab e sath to bdi khush lagti hain par jaise hi ap Asad bhaijaan ko dekhti hai, kuch to badal jata hai, aur mujhe wo pehle wala pyar najar nahi ata asad bhai ke liye apki ankhon mein''

Huma ek baat batun, sirf hum dono ke beech rahegi''.

Appki apni choti behen pe itna bharosa to kar hi sakti hain?

Zoya hugged her , Huma, i am Pregnant'

Appi iska matlab hai main khala banne wali hun? humaira exclaimed with excitement'.

Sirf itna hi sach nahi hai huma, then zoya told her everything. infect she was feeling too light after sharing her heart with some one''

appi, itna kuch ho gya, aap sab kuch akeli sehti rhi, kam se kam mujhe to bta sakti thi?

main batana chahti thi huma, par kabhi chance hi nahi mila''..

to aj kyon?

Aaj Mr. Khan ne mujse kha ke he loves me''

then where is the problem appi? god is giving you second chance, Asad bhai loves you and you two are married now'

but huma, mai wo sab kaise bhool jayoon? jo unhone kiya hai aur mujse pucha tak nahi?

Aapi, main yahi kahungi, please asad bhaijaan ko ek chance de dijiye, wo apko bhut pyar karte hain' aur ap hi kehti hain na, pyar ko kabhi jane nahi dena chahiye'

when Nazma called humaira and she had to leave'.

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There Asad had gone inside the home and he was looking for Ayaan to tell him everything. Ayaan Was inside the room playing his guitar having earphones on his ears, when Asad came there'

Bahijaan aa gye aap? ye suniye' kitna acha song hai'..

Ayaan listen to me ,its urgent'

Bahijaan pehle ye song suniye, kya beautiful lyrics hain'. Ayaan was speaking in his own hapiness and tone''

Ayaan was still dancing on his own music, Asad stopped the music, pulled his earphones, Ayaan listen to me, wo bacha mera hai'''..

what? Ayaan was shocked''. aap kya keh rhe hain bhaijaan?

haan ayaan, wo bacha mera aur zoya ka hai''

Lekin aap ne to kabhi bhi nahi bataya ap zoya ke itne karib the''

Ayaan main''.

Bhaijaan? ap aur zoya? nahi aap jhooth bol rhe hain? kyoki ab ap ko zoya se pyaar ho gya hai aur ap use chodna nahi chahte, isi liye ap mujhe jhooth bol rhe ho?

Nah ayaan esa nahi hai, infect'

no , I don't want to listen anything'..

Ayaan please trust me, yahi sach hai, us raat main aur zoya sath the'' aur''..

NO'''. shouted ayaan''.

Asad bahijaan sach keh rhe hain ayaan, Humaira said coming inside the room'..

Humaira? Asad was shocked''..

Haan bhaijaan, Appi ne mujhe sab kuch bta diya hai'

to please tum apni appi ko samjahao esa koi step na le jo uske aur baby ke liye thik na ho.

Bhaijaan, appi bhi to apni jagah pe thik hai, ye to ap hi hain, jinhone apni mohabbat ka izhaar karne mein itna time lga diya tha, aur agar kiya bhi to bhul gye. appi ne to hamesha se hi apse hi pyar kiya, kabhi kisi aur ke bare mein socha tak nahi''.. she said looking towards Ayaan

Humaira tum ye kya keh rhi ho? ayaan shouted holding her from her shoulders.

Han ayaan main sach keh rhi hun, appi ne hamesha se hi asad bahijaan se hi mohabbat ki ha, apse nikah hone ke bhi pehle se, infect asad bhaijaan hi appi ki pehli aur akhri mohabbat hain'''

Lekin usne mujhe bataya kyon nahi? wait bahijaan kya apne hi zoya ko kisi bhi family ke liye misfit kha tha kabhi? Ayaan asked remmebering his discussion with her before their divorce when she told him about her love''..

Asad nodded his head in yes with embarrassment''..

to fir ye achanak se mihabbat khan se aa gyi ap dono ke beech?

Mohabbat o tab bhi thi Ayaan, lekin main hi samaj nahi paya, aur jabtak pta chala, wo tumse nikah kar chuki thi''. jab tum dono ka divorce ho gya, main tanveer se sagai kar chuka tha'.. isi liye kabhi bhi main use bta hi nahi paya''..

To fir ye sab kaise huya''

the day, you all shifted to our home, I went to leave zoya to her home'''. and''.. then Asad told him everything how due to intoxication, they forgot everything na djust rem,embered their love for each other and how tanveer planted everything to apart them and to create MUs between them, she used ayaan'

Ayaan was all shocked on listening and he went away fom there..

Humaira? asked Asad''.

I know bhaijaan, what you did was for appi only but you really did in a wrong way..she is really hurt and now ayaan too''.. give ayaan some time, he will understand'''.

and zoya? asked asad hoping for some help from her'

I am with you baijaan, as I know my appi's happiness lies just in you and you will give her all the happiness she deserves in life but could not get due to my ammi-abbu'''

Asad gave her a hopeful smile'.

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ayaan was in his room puching badly on punching bag''. when humaira went there'.

Ayaan, please listen to me''

now what humaiara , I know you will take Asad bhaijaan's side''..

no, I am not taking anyone's side, I am taking side of truth and the truth is those two love each other and that baby is their'.

and what about me?

I know you like appi, but she never loved you and you know very well''.

you knew, she loved bhaijaan?

yes, I knew from the day I called her appi, and I had seen love in their eyes for each other'.

and I was fool in all this? Ayaan shouted''.

no ayaan, you were just a cupid sent by god as god knows they can never confess their feelings directly, today too asad bhaijaan confessed when it was last point for him, he sent you to make them marry, to be together, to realize their love'

no bhaijaan chated me, he never told me'''

no ayaan, he did not cheat you, see other side, he was sacrificing his love by divorcing zoya, the only love of his life'''

Ayaan looked at humaira in surprise leaving his punching bag'when she said so'''.

Humaira could see his expressions softening'''

Yes, Ayaan, it was always their story'. It was always Asad and Zoya, no where was ayaan, you were just God's gift to unite them. and all this mess was created just because tanveer used you in their life' so now its your duty to unite them. to make appi fall in love with Asad bhaijaan again''..

and me? ayaan asked having tears in his eyes''.

Humiara didn't say even a single word.she just wiped his tears. ayaan hugged her and cried to his heart''.humaira's heart was weeping for ayaan but she knew, she is doing right'. right for everyone, for these three souls, otherwise noone from them will be happy, if ayaan's heart doesn't break, then three hearts will break, three lives will be destroyes and two most beautiful relations, relation of two brothers as well relation of husband-wife will be destroyed''

After some time ayaan was fine, yes Humiara you are right, I was never part of that story'' it was always theirs''. and bhaijaan? how much he would have suffered on seeing zoya with me? I am reacting too stupid, but he always stood by me without even letting me know how much he sacrificed for me'.

That's like good ayaan, said humaira putting a smile on her face'..

both shared a smile when Asad came there. Ayaan'''.

Ayaan turned his face without replying'

Ayaan, please I am sorry what I said in a wage, I promise'. once zoya gives birth to baby I will divorce her, then you may marry her but just request, please give me the baby, I will get a reason to live'. and Asad turned backto go''.. Humiara was again shocked, one more harsh decision by Asad and that again without letting zoya know''.

Kyon? suddenly ayaan said''.

what? asad turned back in shock''.

Kyon? har baar ap hi mahaan banenge? kbhi to hamein bhi mauka dijiye bhaijaan''. Ayaan said with tears in his eyes''.

Ayaan'.. Asad was surprised''.

Bhaijaan, main samaj gya hun, it was never my story it was only you and zoya.. it was always ASYA ad never AYAA' infect AYAA doesn't look nice' ASYA lookes too good'' Ayaan giggled with a smile on his face and Asad hugged him with tears in his eyes'''

bahijaan isis baat pe ek share arj hai...

phir kya huya humien hmari mohabbat na mili

phir kya huya humein hamari mohabbat na mili...

chalo ek achi si bhabhi to mili...

waise bhi humpe to itni ladkian marti hain, ek bach bhi gyi to kya farq padta hai,... kyon humaira begum? ayaan asked giving a big smile to humaira...

Asad laughed on listening his shayari and ayaan joined him...

while Humaira was looking at both the brothers with happiness thanking God now her sister will get her true love, but the big question was, how? how will they make her fall in love with Asad again?

So how was it? don't know about others but i really loved writing this part... hit like and do leave your feedback
Edited by jeenia123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum..luvd ut..waitng 4 some romantic scenes of asya..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

Awesum..luvd ut..waitng 4 some romantic scenes of asya..


just wait for next update dear. may be you get some ones...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really , very very very very very good...
Please update soon 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was just amazing.
I loved it to the core.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey..nice part.⭐️..good to see everything sorted atleast between the two brothers...loved the bond of zoya & humera and the way humera made ayaan understand everything and ayaan too behaved like a sweet brother who can do anything for his bhaijaan😊..uff ye asad phirse gadbad karne wala tha.😡.thanx to ayaan,,warna is bar zoya ko pata chalta to she would have surely left him forever...waiting to see what will be their next plan to make zoya fall in love with asad again.😉..but pls make it little bit harder for asad...i guess everyone would love to see his romeo avatar.😆..do update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutejerry

Really , very very very very very good...
Please update soon 👏


thanks dear...
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Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR

It was just amazing.
I loved it to the core.


thanks dear.i too loved this part very much. infect i enjoyed too much that i wrote five pages and just wanted to write more...

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