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delena90

@delena90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

I really loved this OS. Sweet and poignant! You write really well! Thanks for the pm 😊

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Sona

@sparikh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Beautiful OS...loved the role reversal bit...

-Sona

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@havokhotline

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

After watching today's episode on this scene, i'm wishing i wrote it better. -.-

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Soumya Singh

@soumyasingh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

that was so awesome I want to hug you right now...

*Salute*

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fee-fee

@fee-fee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Wow. Really good job. This was an amazing piece of work. Please write more! (Is there a continuation- if there is will u PM me so I know).

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Indidesi

@Indidesi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

No need to cry and make a havoc 😉".. Ur story is simply superb... Wanted it in today's episode very badly.. But bad luck... What to do..lets hope this scene in next time 😉.. Plz continue ..if possible pm me 😊

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Crazy! :P

@AdorableTrouble

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

I'm legendary ? YOU'RE FRIGGIN DOWNRIGHT AMAZING ! Fantastic, fab, and there's so much I want ti say but my mother is nagging me about my test tomorrow for which I still have to study a 100 pages...literally 😆

So yeah, this is a res. Tomorrow, there's gonna be a cyclone here. A tornado. Trust me.

YO !! See the tornado ? ^^ 🤣🤣🤣

So, yeah, the tomorrow did FINALLY come :P

Yeah I know what you must be feeling right now -

But I am SERIOUSLY verry sorry yaar !!

Sacchi, I had written such a MAST looong essay

And then the stupid net !! 😡

Believe it or not, today is the FIFTH time I read it...OMG HOW is it as beautiful as NEW even yet ?! I mean, its simply MIND-BLOWING !!

Originally posted by: havokhotline
He was ferocious, quick and incredibly stealthy. He was protective to a level that was borderline mental.
He even looked like a lion. Be it his hair, combed back, yet glossy like a Lion's mane or that steady and firm jaw. And his body, she wasn't even going to go there.
And his persona? It was stylish, confident and well-groomed.
Yet, he was just raw. And he reeked of power. You couldn't not notice him in a room.
He was so brave. He had picked up a gun and threatened to kill his very own father.
Infact, he was so brave that she thought sometimes that he was just downright stupid.
Asad never picked up a fight unless he had a really good reason.
But, she also knew that he was always willing to fight.
He sounds like a Lion!"
Yeah, he so did. When he spoke in general, it was always in that baritone of his. Calm, collected yet lethal.
And when he was angry? Gulp.
He growled. Like actually growled.

Now THIS is what I call FLAWLESS. And AMAZING. And FABULOUS. And I need a dictionary now :P

Originally posted by: havokhotline
Willing to fight for someone who needed him, irrespective of whether he knew them or not. Simply because, Asad always wanted to do the "right thing".

Soo true !! I mean, HOW did you manage to make this SO FRIGGIN PERFECT ?!

Originally posted by: havokhotline
Those times when she didn't think it was stupid, she was too busy gawking at how sinfully hot he looked when he was angry.

Bhopal must've started believing in the Twilight Saga after hearing Asad Ahmed Khan when he was angry! He sounded like one of your purr-fect werewolves, in fact.

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: havokhotline
Tightening her grip, she said, "Once, just for once, let's do a role-reversal. And I'll be Asad, you'll be Zoya. And I'll tell you to stop talking."

❤️ I simply ADORE this part. I would literally KILL to see this in the show !

Originally posted by: havokhotline
Little did he know, that how much ever he tried to lock all the doors, he would always end up leaving one window open.

I am officially speechless. Do we have synonyms for PERFECT that mean something more perfect then perfect ?

You know, after this, I can officially and fairly call my work CRAP / DUMP. You. Are. Epic.