Teri Aahatein- AsYa OS: Final pt 4-pg 18

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Regina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

why dont 4 lions make u their writer... show will be superhit with no1 on trp charts :)

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JarenM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Awesome as usual! Apka writing style kamal bemisaal hai :)

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princessradhika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

The update FANTASTIC👏...AWESOME.⭐️...JUST THE WAY IT SHOULD BE...ZOYA'S confession was really sweet 😃just like her character & what what shud I say about our beloved MR.KHAN or shud I say ASAD...😉

A REAL AKDU AHMED KHAN like we all know...😆

THIS ONE IS FINISHED BUT WE ARE HOPING TO READ SOME MORE OUTSTANDING PIECES OF UR WRITING...DO WRITE MORE...

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Annie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

First of all..itni jaldi update?? Mein ne tou apna pehle wala res bhi edit nahi kia tha :P :D
Secondly...the part was beautiful! :) So simple and serene...yet so lovely! :) I am glad it went simply with out drama :) The confession was heavenly! :)
So loved it Bheegi di...!!! :):)
When's the next ff coming? ;) :D

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: SilverFairy
Aww That Was So Cute. Loved The Ending. Finally Asya Confessed Their Feelings. (:

Thanks silver fairysilver fairy😊

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Indidesi
Eagerly waited fr ur post.. It's worth waiting... Dhamekadhar ending. Kash serial may b aisa hojathaaa... 😊

Serial is still on...I am us there will be a lot more dhamakas there😊 thanks for reading and commenting

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: meow23
amzngg story di..
luvd it supa lots..
sad u decided to end it.. wantd to see hw she fixes her nikaah

Hi meow...good to 'see' you. Hope you have been doing well. Yeah, this story was supposed to be a ss. Perhaps, I will start a new ff later. Zoya can fix her Nikaah in that one😊

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: Laila2009
Sweet ending...would have loved to had more (because I liked it) ..conversation between Asad and Zoya before Dilshaad and Najma showed up...enjoyed it and appreciate that you got it to us so quickly.

Thanks Laila. Yes, I could have gone on and on with AsYa dialogue but I wanted to post it last night. Maybe I will start a ff some time soon...will write plenty of AsYa scene then😊 thanks for reading and commenting.

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Curiousmind
Very nice story and you made sure the characters stayed true till the very end.

Thanks dear. Credit goes to QH team for making such distinct character.

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: skavya
Awesome...

such a beautiful ending

nicely written & i can feel every moment in ur writing

Thanks kavya. QH team has a good screenplay. That makes it easy for us to imagine how the characters would react and feel. The actors are great too😊