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npatel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

It was awesome. I loved it! Please continue 👏

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Annie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Desigirl144
I loved how short and simple it was... yet it conveyed so much! Keep writing hun :)

Thanks a lot dear...! I am glad you liked it :)

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Annie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: EternalFrission
sweet

Thanks Fatti Appi! :D

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Annie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
What an influence. Anku, you are bigading my sissoo!! LMAO

As a first attempt WOOOW 👏 👏 👏
Soo good, bravo ❤️ 👏 👏 👏

🤗

p.s. And where was my PM?

Aww...have I told you before how cute you are Appie? :P

I am so so happieee you liked it :D 🤗🤗🤗

Anku ne kuch nahi kia Appie...mein tou pehle se bigadi hui hun 😆😆

Pm send kia tha Appie...shayad late ho gaya hoga :P Par next time pakka...will pm you first! :D

Love you Appieee 🤗

Edited by sweetypie_16 - 12 years ago

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Annie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar
This song isn't mine, but I would like to gift this to you for your first attempt on writing an OS on Asad and Zoya!!!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_u54G1MK0X4[/YOUTUBE]

Oye!! Neeche bhi dekh!
Haan... So like I said, I backspaced my comment so I could surprise my dearie Annie with my comment-wa!!

Sabse pehle tujhe bhi ek sada tamatar milegi tere sar pe agar tu bolegi ki tera kaam "LAME" hain!!! Yeh jo hain na, Mallika-e-Humpty meri, usne bhi apne OS ko vahi kahaa!! Na jaane kyun tum logon ko apna kaam "LAME" lagta hain? Agar aise hi chalta raha na, then I'll kick your Asses like there's no tomorrow and send you to an asylum for sure!! Stupido Senorita!! ☢️

Coming to the OS, this was so... Aha!! 😆 Refreshing and Haaye! Kya jodi hain inn dono ki! Pehle hi OS-wa mein kissy wissy, eh?☺️ Heehee... Vaise there ain't any rule either for kisses, so you are most welcome to add 'em as much as you want!!

[Asad]
Yeh ishq nahi hain asaan, Par jab tum aati ho mere saamne
Toh saari Qaynat hain meri, Aur main uska..

[Zoya]
Tune jo chhua mujhe, ek jaadu chala dill mein,
Dhadakta hain zor se, kyunki basae ho tum vaheen mere Dill mein...

Now THAT ^^^ is called "LAME"!!!!! My poetry has gone to the insects! 😭

That was well written, ruling out the spelling errors. Hota hain kabhi kabhi type karte huye!😳 Zoya's pain was more evident here, and Asad now knows the reason too.
And the kiss... You described their actions so well, my Annie!!☺️ Kya baat hain!! *hugging you tight by your neck* Chhaa gaye tussi, meri Soniye!!🤪

Annie

O-M-G 😲 Tu ne itna bara comment kaise type kia? wo bhi akele? :P 😆😆

pehle tou a big warm hug to you 🤗 for this beautiful comment! (like me😳)

And then, Thanks for the gift...I loved it 😉 Agar aise aur gifts mile tou mujhe koi problem nahi hai 😉😆 Arre nahi baba...mujhe koi tamatar nahi chahye :P Mein aur meri Appie ek jaise hain...apne moonh se kya taareef karen?😉 You know...modesty? ;) :D

Hehehe :D Thanks jaani...mera OS itna accha laga? SWEETUM KHUSH HUI :D 😆

Yeah...your poetry was really lame...par meray OS se zyaada nahi! 😆😆

Thankieee for such a wonderful comment Anku jaani...this really made my day 🤗🤗

love you lotsss :*

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Annie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: hifzaa
wow annu amazing yaar
U wrote so well
Kiss was passionate!!
Keep writing more stuff darling

Thanks Monu darling :* Will surely write more! :D

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Annie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Sruthi_Virmanli
HOTNESS UNLIMITED. ☺️
Loved it. ❤️

The way you explained her feelings, the way he unknowingly started feeling for her, and the way they made out. Perfect! :D

Do write more often. :)

Thanks a lot deariiee :) Will definitely write more! :)

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Annie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: janu1610
breathe in his arms is best place to live
simple,sweet love story.

Aww...thanks jaani :):)

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Annie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Jaren93.
If something on those lines actually happens in the show. Just imagine! Well brilliant is one word I have for you. 👏👍🏼 Keep us entertained with more of these naughty write ups which we may never be able to actually experience in the show. Kudos 😃

Awiiee :D Thanks a lot :) I am really glad you liked it! :)