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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

[Asad]
Yeh ishq nahi hain asaan, Par jab tum aati ho mere saamne
Toh saari Qaynat hain meri, Aur main uska..

[Zoya]
Tune jo chhua mujhe, ek jaadu chala dill mein,
Dhadakta hain zor se, kyunki basae ho tum vaheen mere Dill mein...

Now THAT ^^^ is called "LAME"!!!!! My poetry has gone to the insects! 😭

THAT IS NOT CALLED AS LAME.

it was SUPER LAME 🤣

LOL kidding 🤗

joke apart, haiyee yaar, tu kiss chakki ka aata khati hai? 👏 👏

Higher levels of Romanticism aate kahan se hai? 👏 👏

*jealous jealous*

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar
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what?? Sab bouncer gaya!! Kya baki be tu??

I said, sweety who praises himself?

see you did such a great work, and still you said "IT WAS LAME" huhh!!

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niharika

@nihamrm

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

wow that was an amazing os just loved the way you wrote it
and its anything but lame and your such a talented writer hope you continue writing such good works and posting it here

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

THAT IS NOT CALLED AS LAME.

it was SUPER LAME 🤣

LOL kidding 🤗

joke apart, haiyee yaar, tu kiss chakki ka aata khati hai? 👏 👏
Higher levels of Romanticism aate kahan se hai? 👏 👏

*jealous jealous*

Chal chal!! Jealous hone ki koi zaroorat nahi hain! 🥱 Bas thhoda aur romantic stuff padh aur dill se aise aise poetry aur stories niklenge na, ki tu dekhti reh jaayegi!! 🤪

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

I said, sweety who praises himself?
see you did such a great work, and still you said "IT WAS LAME" huhh!!

Oh... So I guess, this is called Hypocrisy?? *biting my lip in doubt* Haen?

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Aliena

@BlessedSoul

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Oh wow Annie you know I love your FF's and OS's. As usual it was fab, do u call it a lame attempt... Cmmon.. u are kidding...n madam i am waiting for ur ff, where is it????
Nice attempt my Princess 👏