Asya FF ||Love is in the air|| Uptd. Pt6 (20/5/13)

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niharika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

hey!!! nice start 👏
lol najma scene was hilarious
pls continue soon and do pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

This is a bit short because I have my final exams going on (though I don't care- they are easy, and tomorrow is Eng.). I kept my promise. Enjoy!

Asad did not have to go to work today as it was some bank holiday. Everyone except Zoya was present at the table for breakfast. This worried Asad, he wondered if she was yet asleep. How could he start his day without her laughter and her stupid shers?

"Where is Zoya?" he inquired.

"She must be coming. Why are you so concerned all of a sudden?" asked Dilshad with a smile, even though she knew.

"Nothing, actually she is there every morning so I asked." he explained, though this wasn't the real reason.

Zoya walked in. She was unusually quiet. The Khan family was now so used to her laughter that all of them were worried. Asad even stated that there is an India-Pakistan match today, but Zoya did not flinch.

"Are you okay Zoya? You are unusually quiet today." asked Najma.

"Yes, I am okay." she responded with a fake laugh as Asad dropped a bottle of sauce.

"Allah Miyan! What's wrong with you Mr. Khan? The perfectionist dropping something? I can't believe it." she said, genuinely laughing.

Asad had deliberately dropped the bottle. He knew that she won't leave a chance to make fun of him, and for the first time he wasn't angry at her.

"Ammi, I don't have to go to office today as it is some bank holiday. I have an important meeting at 1 pm, which I have to attend." Asad informed Dilshad.

"Okay." she nodded.

Asad and Zoya helped Dilshad to her room while Najma cleared up. Zoya had to speak to Najma so she told Asad that she is going to help Najma. Dilshad understood and asked her to do so.

"Hey Najma!" exclaimed Zoya, entering the kitchen.

"Hey! You wanted to talk to me right? Is it about yesterday?" she questioned.

"Kind of, yes," Zoya replied, "Sit."

Najma sat down. Zoya started her story. She had revised what she had to say many a time. Zoya told her how last night when Asad put his arm around her, she did not feel like removing it and when he commented on her beauty, she blushed and even though the coffee he had made for her was bitter, she had it as she did not want to hurt his feelings.

"I think you should discuss this with Ammi, she has gone through love so she would know better." said Najma. She knew this was love but she herself did not want to tell Zoya.

"I should discuss this with PHUPHI of all people? I am talking about her son, you know." said Zoya.

"I am also his sister, you know." replied Najma, in the same tone.

"You are also my best friend. Please help me Najma, I really need it." begged Zoya, she had never asked a favour from anyone, but she no other option.

"Okay, my conclusion is that you love Asad Bhaijaan!" giggled Najma.

"I did not expect this from you. I will talk to phuphi after all." sighed Zoya.

Asad came down at 12:30. Zoya was making soup while Najma was getting the tray ready.

"Najma, Zoya one of you go up to Ammi, I have to leave for my meeting." said Asad.

"Zoya, you go up and I'll get the soup." said Najma.

Zoya nodded and went away. This was her golden chance to speak to phuphi.

"Phuphi? I need to talk to you about Mr. Khan." said Zoya, seriously.

"Don't tell me he needs to see a physiatrist, please." joked Dilshad.

"No." replied Zoya and told Dilshad the whole story, she also added what Najma said.

"Najma is right, this is love." agreed Dilshad.

Asad was listening to all of this. He had actually come to bid goodbye to his Ammi. He was shocked and happy. He too probably loved Zoya and therefor cared for her deeply. He needed Ayan, and he needed him pronto.

Zoya blushed. She couldn't believe herself. She had fallen for Jahapana six-packs, but did he love her back?

"I am sorry, I had to ask you all of this and that also abouth your own son." said Zoya, sheepishly.

"Its okay, I can be your agony aunt too." said Dilshad winking.

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niharika

@nihamrm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

hey!! nyc update
its short but sweet
loved asad for caring sooo much and
"Don't tell me he needs to see a physiatrist, please" lol
and thanx for the pm

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@Asya6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Thank you for your wonderful comments. I will try my best to update tomorrow. I am not sure I will be able to because my mom is going in for surgery. If I do update it will be in the afternoon before I go to the hospital.

Enjoy!

And I will pm you guys. You do so too.

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Chinnu.Munnu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Nice update. Short and Sweet 👍🏼

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Sophia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Mayan6
Thank you for your wonderful comments. I will try my best to update tomorrow. I am not sure I will be able to because my mom is going in for surgery. If I do update it will be in the afternoon before I go to the hospital.
Enjoy!
And I will pm you guys. You do so too.

Thanks for the pm!

Nice update!
Hope everything is fine; with your mom.

Wish you all the best!

~Sophie :)

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Farhana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Fantastic start babe

Ca't wait for the next part

Continue soon

Wish you and your mom all the best

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jazz

@jazmeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

wow good one loved the idea lol she refused to marry right away

plz do con soon and pm me plzz if u do pm ur readers plz

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@Asya6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Part 3

Asad reached the cafe at the dot of 1. Ayan was as usual flirting with some random girl at the cafe. Ayan saw Asad approaching, and told the girl that he would be back in a few minutes. The brothers sat on an other table.

"Assalamualaikum Bhaijaan." greeted Ayan.

"Walaikumusalaam." replied Asad.

"What happened Bhaijaan? What do you want to talk about? I can solve all your problems, except business ones. Is it about some girl?" Ayan threw questions at Asad.

"You won't believe this, but strangely I want to talk to you about a girl, Zoya. She is the one staying at my house." said Asad, with a funny face. This was a weird situation for him.

"Zoya? Is she the same girl that those men were after? The girl who got you stabbed in the stomach? She was also the girl who saved Najma from those naughty boys. She is staying at your house? I've been looking for her! She is so pretty- and rude." Ayan went on.

"Excuse me Ayan, she is MY girl!" said Asad without thinking.

"Your girl?" Ayan was shocked. His Bhaijaan had fallen in love with the same girl he liked.

"I mean I think I love her and she loves me back, I heard her telling Ammi. Ayan please help me with this matter, how should I admit my feelings?" asked Asad and poured out the whole story. Ayans mood was spoilt. His Bhaijaan had spoilt while usually he was the one who cheered him up.

"Poems should help." suggested Ayan.

"Ayan you know I don't like poems." said Asad.

"Then just go ahead and tell her I love you or flirt with her." Ayan said.

"Good idea, I'll try." replied Asad.

"Bhaijaan, I have some important work, so I'll catch you later." Ayan made an excuse to go.

Asad bade him a goodbye and Ayan just went away. Usually, Ayan could sit with Asad for the whole day if he could. Asad, blinded by love did not understand that Ayan was upset. This meeting ended in only 15 minutes. Asad could not go back home this early. He decided to think about what to say to Zoya. He checked online for some poems. He then came up with:

Love can travel miles away

Just like time does during night and day

But as love travels miles apart

It still has a solid place in the heart

As I express these feelings I have for you

I hope you have them for me too

Because my life is empty without you...

He was reading out the poem as a girl passed by. The girl thought he was saying it for her, so she came and sat across him and thanked him in a flirty manner. He was confused. He did not imagine that she thought the poem was for her.

"Why are you thanking me?" asked a clueless Asad.

"Thanks for the poem,"she replied with flirty eyes, "I needed just that, my boyfriend just broke up with me."

"I am sorry, the poem wasn't for you. I was just practising,I need to say this to a girl who I love." explained Asad.

"If you want to practice, practice in some private place." she told him in a huff.

Asad felt like laughing. Some girls were so stupid. He had thought the same thing about Zoya when he met her. He was done. He was going to go home and and admit that he loved her.

He drove quite confidently, but then lost all his confidence as he came closer to home. He entered the house to see the women watching a movie. He chose to tell Zoya everything at night.

"Ammi, you should be resting." he said.

"I was getting bored so Zoya suggested that I could watch a movie. I agreed, so Najma and Zoya helped to come here." Dilshad explained.

"Okay, I'm in my room if you need me." he told them.

The women continued to watch their movie. It was soon dinner time. Najma laid out the dinner while Zoya went to call Asad. She too needed help to support Dilshad to the dining table.

Asad was startled to see Zoya at his door. He stammered to ask her why was she there.

"Mr. Khan, I need your help to support phuphi, if you could come out. Dinner is also ready." said Zoya.

"I'm coming and of course I will help you, don't fret." Asad said, in a jiffy to go out.

I'm too tired now I will post the rest tomorrow. Good night!