ASYA OS- Anything For Your Smile - Page 7

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#336699">Hi Mahima,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#336699">I enjoyed reading your OS! Even if it is long, you made itentertaining!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#336699">And Asad baking a Cake was one thing I had imagined myself!😉Wish to see it on screen! Nice title too!😛</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#336699">Some points to just remember.. Though am not an accomplished writer, myself, but would like to help you out. I mean no offense to you.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#336699">First: Please use Punctuations so it helps out the readers to understand how the dialogues are being delivered.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#336699">Second: You've got a nice writing style. I like it.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#336699">Third: In the dialogues delivered, you could include their actions or small expressions in brackets, indicating how they were speaking, acting, etc..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#336699">I would like to read more of your works. Keep writing!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#336699">Annie</font>

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

Wow...
I really loved your comment
It was gr8 to see such an honest comment

Gee! Am glad that You took it in a positive way. I was apprehensive of pressing the 'Post Reply' button after i had typed out my reply!😳

First: actually i typed the os on my phone so didn't bother much but you are right i should have taken care of it... I will in the future

Oh... Well, while typing in the phone, the phone takes the liberty of messing around with the text, at times. That has actually happened with me, while I was PMing something important to my buddy!! And I hated it, when it turned out to be something gibberish and ridiculous to even read!🤢 So I don't do any typing part in my phone!😛

Second: i am glad you liked my style
😳
Third: you are right... In my future works i'll take care of it... 😊

I would certainly write more

Wait, so you haven't written any on Asad-Zoya?

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Gee! Am glad that You took it in a positive way. I was apprehensive of pressing the 'Post Reply' button after i had typed out my reply!

Oh... Well, while typing in the phone, the phone takes the liberty of messing around with the text, at times. That has actually happened with me, while I was PMing something important to my buddy!! And I hated it, when it turned out to be something gibberish and ridiculous to even read! So I don't do any typing part in my phone!

Wait, so you haven't written any on Asad-Zoya?

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

Never feel aprehensive while commenting on my works
I am a commentor like you only
Even i get scared at time when i press post reply
But i personally like comments like this
It helps me develop

As far as typing from phone is concerned, I will no longer type an os, ss or ff from phone... Just to ensure mistakes don't happen

This was my first AsYa work. I have written before but only on Mjht and Mayur. Just one on Ariya too (Arjun-Riya).

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

I won't.. But it's okay to feel scared at times. Kinda pumps the energy to do it when you're not ready to do anything!😉

😃

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#336699">Wow! Am saying it again, that I liked it.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#336699">Oh really? I have never visited MJHT forum, except for the BG tunes. Never got the chance to. I like Arjun-Riya too. Felt sad when Riya had to die. I loved seeing Sana on-screen.</font>

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Sweet os :-)

Originally posted by: hifzaa

awsum mahima
Loved it

Originally posted by: AussieChick

Awww, that is SO ADORABLE <3
Such a cute OS love <3