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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: aditi061
Ouch! My cheeks are hurting coz of u. Whole the time i had a big smile plastered on my face while reading the os that nw my cheeks hurt...

Guilty Pleasures you see 😉 😆 😳

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_Ridz_

@_Ridz_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

ankie res means reserved... i have edited it... take a look 🤗

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fee-fee

@fee-fee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

I normally don't like reading OS's but this was really good! I liked how you kind of made it a almost post-inner turmoil scene. It was adorable. Keep up the good work.

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Daayan Bai

@KunwaariDaayan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

That was an awsome read!Here I was twiddling my thumbs bored out my brains with nothing to do and voila!... you made my day with this awsome dose of Asya.Loved the humorous style in which you wrote the scenes at good pace with leaving no stone unturned in keeping us entertained.Asad watching Dabaang and JTHJ is something I could never have imagined but nice touch by you as it only made me start daydreaming about Asya going to the movies sand watching it together...Love the ASya nok jhok and the ever so caring attentive Asad..he does it too with such style in his own discreet way so that Zoe doesn't get an inkling of any inner feelings...lol.Zoe trying all the tricks in the book just to spend a little more time with her Jahaanpanah...this is exactly what I picture her doing in the show wehn she does actually fall in love.I thoroughly enjoyed reading that and thanks so much for the pm!

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stacy

@stacyellowz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

awesome! loved every bit of it...especially the part "He got out off the bed and tiptoed to Zoya's room as it was the Now Usual Midnight Check for him". my wishlist is that this would actualky become apart of the show. i can onky imagine how cute asad would look peeping in zoya's room at night thanks for the pm. would love to read more of your stuff 😃

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jazz

@jazmeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

OMG

its was amazing i felling in love wid asya ffs and os

i reaaddd arhi ffs and now m so glued to asya ffs

man u guys are superb i simply loved dis os

wanna read ur first one and ur wishing list is amazing

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Asad checking Zoya

Movie scene

And finally gift scene

I so loved it

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: RiDz_rox
res

unresed...
this is so damn cute ankie... i was smiling throughout... you are a great writer... Asad actually saw JTJH and dabang .. unbelievable 😆

ankie res means reserved... i have edited it... take a look 🤗

Okayyy moi madam! now i understood the meaning of RES 😳 😳 thank you once again for being my Savior in this 😆

Welll serious? you liked it? *jingle jingle* 😆 😳 😃 🤗

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Awww that was so cute :D

I am more than glad that you liked it 😳 🤗

Originally posted by: fee-fee
I normally don't like reading OS's but this was really good! I liked how you kind of made it a almost post-inner turmoil scene. It was adorable. Keep up the good work.

😳 😳 Thank you sooo much!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: shaz2009
That was an awsome read!Here I was twiddling my thumbs bored out my brains with nothing to do and voila!... you made my day with this awsome dose of Asya.Loved the humorous style in which you wrote the scenes at good pace with leaving no stone unturned in keeping us entertained.Asad watching Dabaang and JTHJ is something I could never have imagined but nice touch by you as it only made me start daydreaming about Asya going to the movies sand watching it together...Love the ASya nok jhok and the ever so caring attentive Asad..he does it too with such style in his own discreet way so that Zoe doesn't get an inkling of any inner feelings...lol.Zoe trying all the tricks in the book just to spend a little more time with her Jahaanpanah...this is exactly what I picture her doing in the show wehn she does actually fall in love.I thoroughly enjoyed reading that and thanks so much for the pm!

You REALLY REALLY REALLY MADE MY DAY with your kind and humble words towards my stupid piece of work 😳 🤗 ☺️

Well me too second you, i just want them to spend time all alone, and do anything to be with each other, i dont know if you have noticed or not, Asad too wanted to sleep, but because Zoya was awake he didnt, cause he wanted to be with her. Something, a VERY MUST for future AsYa 😆 😳 😉

SilverFairy & Tukuni : Thank you soo much dearies 🤗

Originally posted by: stacyellowz
awesome! loved every bit of it...especially the part "He got out off the bed and tiptoed to Zoya's room as it was the Now Usual Midnight Check for him". my wishlist is that this would actualky become apart of the show. i can onky imagine how cute asad would look peeping in zoya's room at night thanks for the pm. would love to read more of your stuff 😃

I soo damm want him to do that, but Alas CVS dont give mush of AsYa moments. Ayaan and Nautanki Group gets all the icing and AsYa is left with the crumbs, anyway, lets hope or the best, more of AsYa to come. or else am goona strangle Zee and CVs eheh 😆 😉

Originally posted by: jazmeen
OMG
its was amazing i felling in love wid asya ffs and os
i reaaddd arhi ffs and now m so glued to asya ffs
man u guys are superb i simply loved dis os
wanna read ur first one and ur wishing list is amazing

Thank youuu sooo much 😳 😳 yupp pm-ed the other parts too 😆 😉

MjhtFan_Mahima : oww swwety, u write sooo cute, your piece reminded me of my childhood ka days, something i will never forget 😳 🤗