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Posted: 12 years ago
NEEED MOOOREEE!!!

I just read all 10 chapters in one go.. all I can say is... ARE YOU A CV? You should be! This would be an amazing alternative to the show!!! Not talented? ARE YOU KIDDING ME!? Their bickering is so realistic I can imagine Karan and Surbhi actually acting it out.

And I LOVE LOVE LOVE that Rashid is not a spineless coward but rather a loving father who was taken away from Asad too soon. I like how you also didn't delve into Zoya's Abbu like the show.. if gives them something more to relate to each other on.

I Found it HILARIOUS how they met and how they kept bumping into each other. When you I was reading the episode (to me these are episodes not chapters... tooo real to be only read.. I seriously imagined it all) of their wedding ceremony, I had a hunch they would only realize they were marrying each other in the Suhagraat 😆 and I was right! Muhahaha! 😛 And that way he took care of her when she fainted was justtt

I thought it refreshing that he didn't give her the bed. Sure he's usually a gentleman, but it was a great way to show the level of annoyance this woman caused him and how territorial he really is 😆

I LOVED LOVED LOVED how he felt bad for hurting her and then stayed by her side with her heals it was just tooo damn cute! Oooh and now he's jealous 😃 24 hours and he's already jealous.. even after trying to convince himself that it's a contract marriage 🤣.

And Dilshad and Najma's reactions were priceless and wonderful! So unexpected from a typical saas, but then Dilshu isn't typical, is she? She's extraordinary! The way she hesitantly asked Zoya to call her Ammi, was so sweet and endearing

my FAVOURITE PART (of course ASYA) when she fell asleep on his shoulder at the end of Episode 10 (not chapter 😆) and he made her comfortable and dozed off with her. Tooo sweet and one of my all time favourite romantic scenarios


Can you please continue this soon? Like now???? PLEASE!?? I just finished reading it all 10 minutes agooo and I'm already having withdrawal symptoms!!! I need Qubool Hai 2.0 😃😆

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love it yarr .. I am also a big fan of fawad khan ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting FF, just read all chapters. Awesome job!
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was beautiful! pls continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update! And love Fawad as Zaroon! Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing chp...luved the idea of zaroon u came up wid...luking forwad for the nxt chp...updte soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mochhug

NEEED MOOOREEE!!!


I just read all 10 chapters in one go.. all I can say is... ARE YOU A CV? You should be! This would be an amazing alternative to the show!!! Not talented? ARE YOU KIDDING ME!? Their bickering is so realistic I can imagine Karan and Surbhi actually acting it out.

And I LOVE LOVE LOVE that Rashid is not a spineless coward but rather a loving father who was taken away from Asad too soon. I like how you also didn't delve into Zoya's Abbu like the show.. if gives them something more to relate to each other on.

I Found it HILARIOUS how they met and how they kept bumping into each other. When you I was reading the episode (to me these are episodes not chapters... tooo real to be only read.. I seriously imagined it all) of their wedding ceremony, I had a hunch they would only realize they were marrying each other in the Suhagraat😆and I was right! Muhahaha! 😛And that way he took care of her when she fainted was justtt

I thought it refreshing that he didn't give her the bed. Sure he's usually a gentleman, but it was a great way to show the level of annoyance this woman caused him and how territorial he really is😆

I LOVED LOVED LOVED how he felt bad for hurting her and then stayed by her side with her healsit was just tooo damn cute! Oooh and now he's jealous😃 24 hours and he's already jealous.. even after trying to convince himself that it's a contract marriage🤣.

And Dilshad and Najma's reactions were priceless and wonderful! So unexpected from a typical saas, but then Dilshu isn't typical, is she? She's extraordinary! The way she hesitantly asked Zoya to call her Ammi, was so sweet and endearing

my FAVOURITE PART (of course ASYA) when she fell asleep on his shoulder at the end of Episode 10 (not chapter😆) and he made her comfortable and dozed off with her. Tooo sweet and one of my all time favourite romantic scenarios


Can you please continue this soon? Like now???? PLEASE!?? I just finished reading it all 10 minutes agooo and I'm already having withdrawal symptoms!!! I need Qubool Hai 2.0😃😆




OMG!!! Am I dreaming or something? 🤣

So many people have told me that this is their favourite FF but the amount of happiness your comment gave me was just unbelievable! 😃 ever since I sent you the link, I was waiting for your comment apprehensively but never in my wildest dream had I thought you'd like it so much 😳

I'm glad you were able to imagine it all and liked it sooo much! Hahaha you're calling them episodes?! This is sooo flattering that I'm literally blushing here 😳

And yes, I tried to keep the story simple by excluding the Siddique's 😛 and yep! I killed Rashid so that Asad Zoya had something in common and that's the reason behind Asad's nature too and the way that he is... I'll explain it all later 😉

Anyway, your comment without a doubt made my dayyy! 🤗 I just updated chap 10 yesterday morning! It'll take me a while to get the next chapter written down 😛

Will try updating soon! Sooo happy to have you as a reader! Here's a tight hug 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SmileyStar



Thanks Sadie! I love having you as a reader! 🤗

And yes in the soap, it's always Zoya who's getting jealous so I decided it's time Asad faces some green issues too 🤣

And when are you going to update your FF woman? 😛


😲 i thought we were discussing ur FF!!!😆😆

ahahaha ok ok my FF will take time! i'm busy with my BA admissions! in between i might post an OS or two but the update will take a lot of time!😆

ps - who is this fawad that u think should be imagined as zaroon??
Edited by --starstruck-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Alveena12

OH MY GOD!!! I absolutely LOVED this chapter, it was so cute...i loved Asad and Zoya's bickering and there was also a hint of romance added aswel and i loved it, hopefully Asad and Zoya start to fall in love soon and realise it too



I loved the moment in the car when they both fell asleep with their heads resting on each other and the driver saw them...that was so cute

this update is really amazing and i loved that it was so long, i really love long updates and you didn't disappoint, the update really is amazing and please please please update soon as i can't wait to read the next chapter

❤️





Awww Alveena! It's a pleasure to have you as my reader!! Your comments are always sooo sweet and I can actually FEEL how much you enjoyed the update after reading them 😳

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the car scene. That was my first bit of romantic work everrr 😆 Will try updating soon. Thanks for reading 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update.. a long one enjoyed it!! do continue soon!!!

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