My first two-shot Turned SS (Last Part updt pg 9) - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
"Cooking her with his eyes"?? 🤣

Hahahaaah... funny one bluey!
And did she actually want him to do something, instead of staring?? :O
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: blueflames


janaab this is a completed story, if only you scroll down and find the index to next chapter on page ! šŸ˜‰


idiota, i am reading it all!! And commenting as i finish each part!:P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar


idiota, i am reading it all!! And commenting as i finish each part!:P


my Mishtake, apologies please 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
You're evil! But oh well, this had to happen!! :P Now to the next and last part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay!!
I so loved what Zoya did to him!!! šŸ˜†
Man!!! I was like Shit! Why the hell did she slap him?? But then again I realised that he was a jerk for saying "loved someone" giving a mini heart attack to the poor girl, who was pining for him and was thinking that she had lost him too for ever like she had lost her parents.

Idiota he is!!! But I love my Miyaa nonetheless!šŸ¤— Dimaag hain unme phir bhi!!
Haaye! No need for kisses and all that shit when a hug can define so much. A touch can define so much and let you know what the other person feels.

Annie
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Yay!!

I so loved what Zoya did to him!!! šŸ˜†
Man!!! I was like Shit! Why the hell did she slap him?? But then again I realised that he was a jerk for saying "loved someone" giving a mini heart attack to the poor girl, who was pining for him and was thinking that she had lost him too for ever like she had lost her parents.

Idiota he is!!! But I love my Miyaa nonetheless!šŸ¤— Dimaag hain unme phir bhi!!
Haaye! No need for kisses and all that shit when a hug can define so much. A touch can define so much and let you know what the other person feels.

Annie


this shair aptly defines Zoya's feeling and her need to slap him šŸ˜‰

"Zindagi Har Kadam Par Imtihaan Leti Hai
Do Pal Ki Khushiyan Dekar Rula Deti Hai
Phool Khilati Hai, Umeedon Ki Roshni Deti Hai
Do Hi Pal Mein Naumeedi Dikha Deti Hai"


well i am glad you read it and appreciated it. šŸ¤—

in the end muhabbat k naam ek shair, Arz kia hai,

"Mohobbat Ka Imtihan Aasan Nahi
Pyar Sirf Pane Ka Naam Nahi
Muddatein Beet Jati Hain Kisi Ke Intezaar Mein
Ye Sirf Pal-Do-Pal Ka Kaam Nahi"


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: blueflames


this shair aptly defines Zoya's feeling and her need to slap him šŸ˜‰

"Zindagi Har Kadam Par Imtihaan Leti Hai
Do Pal Ki Khushiyan Dekar Rula Deti Hai
Phool Khilati Hai, Umeedon Ki Roshni Deti Hai
Do Hi Pal Mein Naumeedi Dikha Deti Hai"


well i am glad you read it and appreciated it. šŸ¤—

in the end muhabbat k naam ek shair, Arz kia hai,

"Mohobbat Ka Imtihan Aasan Nahi
Pyar Sirf Pane Ka Naam Nahi
Muddatein Beet Jati Hain Kisi Ke Intezaar Mein
Ye Sirf Pal-Do-Pal Ka Kaam Nahi"



Haaye! *dreamily* Aap ne toh humaara dill hi jeet liya aisi shayari se!! šŸ¤—
Kaash humko bhi aati shayari karna!😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is a lovely SS. I enjoyed every bit of it. Amazing work.

~Dee~
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManic

wow! It ws really suprb



Thank youu 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
just came across this ss and simply loved it.. please write more ss and ffs about asya!
Add me to your pm list as well
thanks for posting such a beautiful ss 😊 šŸ‘

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