FF: Under the Wishing star (New update Ch 19)

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Manpreet23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Thanks for such a long update and woah, the suspense.. Asad and Zoya going against each other is just the same as the precap.. hope they don't create a misunderstanding :/

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Sneha Nair

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Manpreet23
Thanks for such a long update and woah, the suspense.. Asad and Zoya going against each other is just the same as the precap.. hope they don't create a misunderstanding :/

I know it is going parallel to the precap...sort of...but not exactly...i need them to be against each other in order to move the story in the next chapter

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Sneha Nair

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: suchishah
He sneha ...u r brilliant writer...,, ur pieces are amazinggg...,,, want u to continue soonnn...I m waiting...was not able to cmnt in previous ones coz I was busy...am extremely sorryfor that:::::::::::::

Well when r u gonna update new episodes of Asya on YouTube atleast for lasttwo episodes are not there

Thank you suchi...it so ok u missed my prev ones..glad that u were able to comment on this one...i know...i am not able to upload Asya scenes coz youtube blocks my videos...hope in few days they stop blocking then i will upload everything

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Yuks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Great update. I liked Zoya standing up for whats right, even if it was to Asad

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Anjinie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Beautifull, so is this bhanjaan

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J12L85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Hello Sneha, just brilliant dear. You kept the suspense, drama, anguish and inntrigue going from start to finish. Zoya take a bow despite having so muck connected to all this she considers everybodys feelings and the repercussions of her actions. The girl as literally put aside her pain and sadness to be as neutral as possible to solve this mystery. Asad has fallen so deep in love, the mere thought of something happening to Zoya s causing him so much pain. This is so interesting as you have included more game players besides Razia n her husband, I so feel for Rashid. Rehaan really brings about a freshness to the story with his snide remarks...lol really enjoying his input and thoughts. Now to the most crucial twist, Asya having a fallout and Zoya having to be so blunt against her will and Asad looking at Zoya with so much hate...wow this sure is going to change the tables for Asya, but no love story is without their share of troubles. So excited for the next update so please update soon, thanx for the PM.