Dear writers, you are dragging the wrong tracks!!

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enchanted.

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Posted: 12 years ago

i was happy when i saw the James Bond thing on SBS, because I thought it was going to be a one-time thing. I did not realize that our CVs are going to turn that dream into a whole storyline!

I love Zoya, but this whole thing makes no sense at all. And yes I get that she's a curious sort of a girl, but being nosy, and making "finding-Asad's-true-identity" your main mission in life, is a bit too extreme.

Plus, I would love to see more mentions/occurrences of that horrible incident that took place last week. I think the CVs are dragging on the wrong storylines in the show. For example, they keep on dragging the whole Haseena Bi thing, and that stupid inspector who keeps getting Ayaan into trouble, and then Asad saving Ayaan from everything, and fighting with random goons all the freaking time! ..I mean seriously, in this way, I understand why Zoya would think he's a secret agent 😆

Instead they should focus on the whole Akram thing, how it afffected Zoya, Asad's guilt, Zoya having to re-live the whole thing everyday. Plus, shouldn't there be a change in her personality after the whole incident? And what happened to her being angry at Asad? I would also love to see Haseena getting EXPOSED..cause otherwise she's too irritating to watch. Also, the whole skin colour issue would be interesting to explore. OH and what happened to Zoya's REAL mission of finding her dad? Plus, why can't they explore AsYa's awkwardness around each other, or their hesitancy..i mean come on! they've had quite a few romantic moments, and I hate the way the storyline completely ignores the aftermath of these beautiful moments! They should base the track on these small moments, not on something completely hypothetical like having James Bond dreams! ..I mean yes, its entertaining IF it is a one-off thing.

Zoya is supposed to be a practical, intelligent and determined girl of today;s generation; not a spoilt, dumb and childish woman! Furthermore, both Karan and Surbhi are very good actors and share amazing chemistry..so utilise them! None of this is a complaint against them or their acting capabilities..it's a complaint against the writers and the CVs, because they certainly have the power to make or break a show.

Edited by enchanted. - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

My opinion about this show changed as soon as the kidnapping/qubool nahi scene happened. The whole rescue mission failed because the PH decided to make it a Bollywood heroic scene. Asad entry had no emotion, had no reaction when he saw a bruised Zoya, and then began a never ending fight. I then had some hopes because the scene with Asad and Zoya in the bedroom where Zoya held her hand for Asad somewhat made it up.

BUT the after effects were even worst. Instead of regret path they decide to go on a comic path(that's 4Lions solution to everything unnecessary comedy.) We still haven't heard a sorry from Asad and to look back he didn't seem so regretful either. One minute Zoya is upset with him and then just like forgives him.

They then start games: Find the earring, Find Asad secret lover, Find out if he's a secret spy.

Is this even a Muslim based show? I think they should have done some research before beginning this show.

Like does any of this make any sense? What does this have to do with the storyline.

They have sent Zoya's character down the drain. What happened to her she's transitioned into the typical 4Lions lead. I'm sick of these unnecessary tracks.

Like recently Asad grabbed Zoya by the neck and threatened her and Zoya found it amusing. We already know Asad is sexist but also an hypocrite? What was the point of saving her from Akram if you were going to have similar thoughts. And what happened to the fight girl power Zoya? The characters are drastically changing.

Haseeni Bi track isan't so awful compared to Asad and Zoya's at least what she's doing has something to do with the storyline.

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Ecrivain

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Posted: 12 years ago

First of all just assuming stuff like where the story is heading n what the writers are UPTO ...is pretty incorrect coz U don't know what is happening next ...

Diff people have a diff way of reacting ..while some choose anger as a defence mechanism, others might choose To put on a smile or do illogical stuff ...amongst many others ...and cynical ones have a wild running imagination...and hence zoya's antics.

There is always a build up , like a base of a track and yeah things always lead to something or the other ..BTW for a daily soap all tracks can't be logical and real..try other soaps and u will know what clicks here baby😉

TIME AND AGAIN I HAVE STATED THAT THE WRITING OF QH IS LAYERED ...I HAVE BEEN TRYING TO DECIPHER IT FOR THE VIEWERS ...Have patience ...

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Posted: 12 years ago

come on yaar in just 2 months show is good amazingly well and loved by everyone..

even storyline is doing good

it cant hv an amazing love story as anonced by PH that the show is not abt love is not a pure romantic show

and abt KSG's expressions

OMGGG i love his acting and everything about the show

thank u

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-rajsua-

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Posted: 12 years ago

everything will happen cvs knows what they are showing

they r just creating a fun element becoz after someday their gonna be high drama and to make it balance they r just creating fun element

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shewolf.

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Posted: 12 years ago

I understand where your coming from hun 😳 but you know the main thing is that the show is not about asya its about the two families, esp the journey of the brothers. Zoya and Asad are just a part of it :)Oh the Haseena B track needs to happen if you look at it, its gonna bring the brothers bond in front of the whole world. Idk what's in store ahead but the fact that they're brothers is gonna bring in a big twist. So for now you need to tolerate her. 😆 and I guess the Haseena B track is coming to an end soon :)

I'd have loved to watch the way the whole Akram fiasco affected Zoe, but right now the story has moved ahead and moreover Zoya herself told Asad that she can't stay angry with anyone for long and that she has forgiven him
oh that's a valid point, but right now she's still recovering from her injuries so I guess we'll get to see her getting back to her mission, after she's recovered fully :)
oh and about her dream, its just gonna be a scene and that too today. I dont think they'll drag it any further :) and its a 4lion tradition that their female leads have to have a weird dream featuring their male leads. 😆 you just need to brush it off like that.

Oh and well all of us have a mature and a childish side to us, just like how they showed a new side to Ayaan when he saved Humeira or how Dilshaad has forgiven Rashid and released her past, you need to give the creatives time to take the story forward, giving every character/relation a chance to evolve. :)

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enchanted.

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Posted: 12 years ago

I think some of your took me the wrong way. I have been constantly saying that this show has one of the best storylines, character sketches and writing on indian tv..and yes i'm saying this because i have watched many shows. What i was trying to say was, till last week, the everything was really really good. i genuinely could not wait for QH over the 2 day weekend. However, I really don't like the rushed-ness of the scenes between AsYa..as in the consequence of the moment is not dealt with. Yes I know that the show is about two families, but to according to me, it is important to complete the scene.

Yes, the jaasoos track is entertaining. I found it hilarious the first time Zoya says "Omg, Jahapanah is a Jassoos!". But I thought she too was kidding. I did not realize she was serious about this realization. She is entertaining, but mature!

I was just trying to say that the writers should try focusing on Zoya's incident, as the doctor said that it had a big affect on her mentally. Plus, I am waiting for the Ayaan and Humera wedding announcement, as I think it would bring for an interesting turn of emotions.

And just to clarify, I love this show and karan and surbhi (like i mentioned in my post), that is why I opened the post in the first place!

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enchanted.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kritzksgian
come on yaar in just 2 months show is good amazingly well and loved by everyone..

even storyline is doing good

it cant hv an amazing love story as anonced by PH that the show is not abt love is not a pure romantic show

and abt KSG's expressions

OMGGG i love his acting and everything about the show

thank u

i never said anything bad about KSG's expressions dear. I LOVE karan! ..and now Surbhi too 😊 i just had a few complaints with the writing that's all.

Edited by enchanted. - 12 years ago

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spurthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

i agree with u
great post
instead of dragging this haseena and police man track they should have shown the guilt track,KSG is fab in giving expressions ,simply they are wasting the scenes by showing detective types scenes which is not at all necessary
nowadays the only thing i am enjoying is asad and ayan bonding
haseena and that police man scenes are unbearable ,cvs are deviating from the main plot

instead they have to focus on asya ,i know it will take time for their love story to kick start but they should begin with friendship ,asad views regarding zoya must change and should stop ayan always being targeted by that policeman ,always he will be saved by asad,how long ... haseena's demands should be put to an end

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enchanted.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: spoorthi
i agree with u
great post
instead of dragging this haseena and police man track they should have shown the guilt track,KSG is fab in giving expressions ,simply they are wasting the scenes by showing detective types scenes which is not at all necessary
nowadays the only thing i am enjoying is asad and ayan bonding
haseena and that police man scenes are unbearable ,cvs are deviating from the main plot

instead they have to focus on asya ,i know it will take time for their love story to kick start but they should begin with friendship ,asad views regarding zoya must change and should stop ayan always being targeted by that policeman ,always he will be saved by asad,how long ... haseena's demands should be put to an end

exactly! i understnd why ayaan is being targeted tho, because that is only how haseena will find out about the brothers..but yeah..nobody EVER speaks up to haseena even when she makes such non-sensical, and obviouly matlaby demands. I want rashid to be more adamant in front of haseena and razia. i really want to see him supporting and speaking up for his daughter and her future. THAT would be a storyline they should focus on.

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