AsYa SS: T.L.C. Chap 16, pg 100

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adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: havokhotline
I was blushing like a crazy school-girl. :D Too damn good! :)

Haha! 😃

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adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: kaussar
Nice FF. you are a very good writer. especially liked this last chapter.. you have written it beautifully.. I usually don't like the romantic parts of most FF's because it borders on the vulgar side, and the piousness of the characters get lost..and i don't like reading them especially when it is written by young women and girls(no offense to anyone)... But here you have written this Temptation part in a really sensual way but still maintaining decency and with subtle emotions and undercurrents that made it very romantic and a pleasure to read.👏👏👏

Thanks Kaussar... I wasn't sure if this was too explicit!

I was scared it might offend people, but your feedback was really helpful... I guess I can put my doubts to rest. 😊

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arnvkushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Well read all the chapter in one go..😊

after reading 2 chapters i'm just hooked to dis SS and ended up reading all the chapters...😉

Its fabulous.. The way you showed Asad's turmoil of feelings, his possessiveness is wonderful... 👏

Waiting to confess his feelings to Zoya..

Pls send Pm's if possible dr...

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adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: arnvkushi
Well read all the chapter in one go..😊
after reading 2 chapters i'm just hooked to dis SS and ended up reading all the chapters...😉
Its fabulous.. The way you showed Asad's turmoil of feelings, his possessiveness is wonderful... 👏
Waiting to confess his feelings to Zoya..
Pls send Pm's if possible dr...

Thanks, sure will PM you!

I think he's already said it in not so many words... Because he thought she might want to go back to Ayaan. But a full confession of love, let's see 🤔 😉

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J12L85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

😳 very very naughty Asya lol but what the hell u two are so intuned n meant for each other lol. Beautiful update n very steamy description hehehe. Loved that it was a full on Asya update n they were carefree n forgottten were all their issues. Plzzz update soon and thanks for the PM:)

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adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: J12L85
😳 very very naughty Asya lol but what the hell u two are so intuned n meant for each other lol. Beautiful update n very steamy description hehehe. Loved that it was a full on Asya update n they were carefree n forgottten were all their issues. Plzzz update soon and thanks for the PM:)

Hehe! Well they did get carried away.. in a previous version I wrote for this chapter, they almost did but stopped and had a long conversation. Then I figured... what the heck! it's one night... and I have a couple of chapters to go... so let the talking happening later 😆

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ishka virani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

wow
u know update daily naaa
ok I know jyada ho gaya ok
alternate kaisa rahega..plz keep it fast cnt wait

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adeeti10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: LilApple
wow
u know update daily naaa
ok I know jyada ho gaya ok
alternate kaisa rahega..plz keep it fast cnt wait

Sorry 😕

Doosra SS bhi hai ab... So trying to update twice a week 😊

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Sophia

@sophie420

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Posted: 12 years ago

#359

Awesome update!

Thanks for the pm!

Please update soon!

~Sophie ;)

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hooriya93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#360

Ohh!! Its getting hot in here. I loved how he called her jaan. So sweeettt... I LOVED IT!!! I am loving their new relationship and the intensity btw them. Thank you soo much for the update Dee.

Update soon

~Hooriya~ ⭐️