AsYa SS: T.L.C. Chap 16, pg 100 - Page 13

hey just read d entire thing in one go...awesome work dear👍🏼
I just fell in luv wid dis new side of Asad...not going totally mushy contrasting to the actual character but rather showing his passionate side wid d actual Asad Ahmad Khan essence...loved all the parts n every scene...continue wid ur great wrk soon plz n if possible do pm me...😃

Originally posted by: trouble_006

hey just read d entire thing in one go...awesome work dear👍🏼
I just fell in luv wid dis new side of Asad...not going totally mushy contrasting to the actual character but rather showing his passionate side wid d actual Asad Ahmad Khan essence...loved all the parts n every scene...continue wid ur great wrk soon plz n if possible do pm me...😃

BRILLIANT, omg I came across ur ss randomly n so glad I did, lol read it it all in one go coz u literally had me drooling to see how things proceed. I am not on facebook or twitter but will check in from time to time to for ur updates, if u do decide to send out pms then plzzz add me to ur list...you are a fantastic writer n plzz update soon:)

Originally posted by: J12L85

BRILLIANT, omg I came across ur ss randomly n so glad I did, lol read it it all in one go coz u literally had me drooling to see how things proceed. I am not on facebook or twitter but will check in from time to time to for ur updates, if u do decide to send out pms then plzzz add me to ur list...you are a fantastic writer n plzz update soon:)

You are a brilliant writer. Normally I cannot stand fan fiction. I glance at the first few lines of a story, skim through the rest and find them a bore. I came across yours and instantly I was so impressed at the quality of the writing. This was combined with an amazingily passionate love story that left me feeling 😳

Nice one; at last MU is cleared w/out any big hungama!

-Sona

Originally posted by: Rach.

Update sooon Adeeti ! Cant wait to read the next installment ! Jaldiii karooo 😛

Originally posted by: sparikh

Nice one; at last MU is cleared w/out any big hungama!

-Sona

Originally posted by: Laila2009

You are a brilliant writer. Normally I cannot stand fan fiction. I glance at the first few lines of a story, skim through the rest and find them a bore. I came across yours and instantly I was so impressed at the quality of the writing. This was combined with an amazingily passionate love story that left me feeling 😳

The whole story was HAAAWWWT! Gosh, I was gasping for air it was so intense. What a guilty pleasure and so embarrassing to say, yes, this is what we want! We want Assad to take Zoya in his arms and kiss her until she is left giddy and faint. I think we're all going to need cold showers after reading each section.

This was so incredibly real and believable with all the details added that all I was left with was wanting MORE MORE MORE. Do not deprive us! This is absolutely the best. You should be a professional writer.

I wish I had even a 1/8 of your talent.

Laila