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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
grt story...pls update soon nd pm me pls...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Really good please update soon
Posted: 12 years ago
#83
love the updates .. pls continue soon..
do pm me when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was a stud.

Bhopal thought so.

I needn't even make eye contact for a girl in our city to melt into a puddle of goo.

Except Zoya Farooqi, she was going to be the death of me.

I had started counting the seconds, minutes and days… She had been ignoring me for that long.

Ever since that awkward incident in Najma's room she had made a bigger effort to stay out of my way.

I didn't think her absence would affect me as much as her presence did.

I gave myself one last look in the mirror and went down for lunch.

Zoya had predictably finished her meal by the time I had arrived. As Najma, Ammi and I ate I cleared my voice,

"Ammi…. I was thinking. I'll take you out for some shopping today."

My mom looked at me and nodded, "Why?" she asked between mouths.

"It's been a while since we left the house… And I think it would be nice if the entire family bought some New Year clothes, don't you think?"

Najma looked thrilled at the prospect and Ammi smiled.

"Good idea, beta. We'll finish up and leave."

"And… Ammi? Tell Zoya that she can come too!" I said, all in one fast pace.

My mom looked shocked at my offer and said, "Really, Asad?"

I tried to look indifferent while saying, "Yeah… She should come."

Najma ran upstairs in a jiffy going, "Zoyaaa! We're going outt!"

"You're doing the right thing, Asad." My mom whispered and got up from her seat.

I smiled at her and thought to myself, 'It does feel good to do the right thing once in a while.'

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The car journey was silent.

I looked at Zoya from the corner of my eyes. She looked absolutely delectable in a navy blue top.

She was evidently avoiding my gaze. She had after all made a huge effort to avoid this shopping trip.

I smirked, she couldn't run away from me this time.

Squeeech.

I pulled to a sudden halt at the signal. Focus, Focus Asad.

"EY! Drive properly, you imbecile! You can look at her face later! Kids these days!" A stout gentlemen on the auto yelled.

My mother and Najma tried to control their laughter and I gaped like a fish at his outburst.

I continued to drive the car, this time my focus was sharper.

Way to go, Asad. Get caught staring at her, perfect. K

I looked behind stealthily. Zoya was staring at her kurta like it was the most fascinating thing in the universe.

And damn my eyes.

She was blushing.

She looked up and caught my eye in the rear-view mirror.

'What are you trying to do here, Mr. Khan?' her eyes gently prodded.

And it took me all the willpower to tear my eyes away. I wish I could answer that question.

If only I knew the answer.

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Hey everyone! :)


Sorry I dont do PM's, I'm a bit of a lazy bum.


I know this part is really short but I'll update soon. :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
aah you updated :)I loved the part though its short..Asad, was well different from his usual self. A good change, but ayee I miss the chirpy Zoya..i really miss her. I hope things get better between the two soon 😳Update soon :) xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: ..SheWolf..

aah you updated :)I loved the part though its short..Asad, was well different from his usual self. A good change, but ayee I miss the chirpy Zoya..i really miss her. I hope things get better between the two soon 😳Update soon :) xx


YAYY!

You commented. :D

I love your comments, always make me happy. :)

Read the oneshot will you? It's called Misleading. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Nice update!!! Continue soon!!! 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Shit woman, you write like full on frikkin amazayn!
How in the hell do you do that?
Ma fav story of ASYA so far <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW this literally made my New Year's eve ! Trust me !! You are so talented :D

Pleeease update it asap ! And next time make it a long long one :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AussieChick

Shit woman, you write like full on frikkin amazayn!
How in the hell do you do that?
Ma fav story of ASYA so far <3


REALLY?!

I've read brilliant stuff on this forum on AsYa. :) I'm personally addicted to like a couple of those fics.

Thank you SO much for commenting. :) It was really nice of you.

Read my oneshots? :)

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