Just Another Day: AsYa OS

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It had been six months to their marriage. Asad and Zoya's marriage. But nothing had changed. Not one single bit. To the outside world they made it seem they were the couple made for each other, but really they weren't. ''Asad breakfast is ready,'' yelled Zoya. ''Great another day of burnt toast and salt less omelette,'' thought Asad. Nor she knew how to cook or clean the house, she was just a modern girl w/ modern ways. Ammi was away for vacation along w/ Najma to her sick brother's house, to take care of him. So Asad didn't when Ammi would come back and take care of the house again. ''Allah miyan, wat is taking him so long? thought Zoya. Meanwhile she was thinking, as Asad thought about the burnt toast and saltless omelette, she repeated the same mistake. ''Allah miyan, Asad you take forever to get ready!'' ''Why don't I say this, Allah miyan, why does my wife Zoya burn the bread and makes saltless omelette everyday?!?!'' ''Ugh!''yelled Zoya. THE END!! I know it was really bad!! It's my first OS, but please comment and Hit like button!!!! Thanks:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was gud try dear
cute one
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lol... Allah miyan.. It was cute
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Aww that was so cute :)
Right more please :*
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haha...cute n a fantastic try...do write more 👍🏼

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