That Moment of truth: A PAYA OS-Part1...updated..Part-2.....Part-3

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Friends ever since Pankhuri fell from the mountains I was thinking about this. I'm posting the first part of my OS. Kindly give me your honest feedback.

[3 Months have passed since Harish found Ayesha and her family and brought them to Diwan Mansion. Nilofer's plan of shifting to Dubai with her daughters have unfortunately been ruined by the biggest mockery of fate. Both Nilofer's elder sister and her husband died in an accident in Dubai, just 2 days before their scheduled departure for Dubai. She planned to go back to Lucknow, but one of her neighbors have informed her, that Galib is looking for her family like a mad dog. Aneesha convinced her to stay back in Diwan Mansion and has also convinced the family member's to allow them to stay in the outhouse. They have been living their lives their own way there. Little bit of familiarity has developed between Nilofer's family and the Diwans. There have been numerous occasions when Ayesha could have been spotted by any member of the Diwan family, but by the grace of God, she is still safe, nobody has seen her till now. Ayesha has convinced Nilofer for undergoing internship under Arif and is currently doing so. Rubal and Payal, both have sincerely tried to sort out all issues and are currently a happy couple.]

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Adi is seen running for his life as a land slide is going on. He somehow manages to save himself, but stumbles to the ground and becomes senseless. When he opened his eyes he sees an old man, with white hairs and long white beard.

"Aab kaisa mehsoos har rahe ho beta?" Adi wakes up and slowly gets up and sits on the bed. "Lo beta thora paani peelo". Adi takes the water and asks "aap kon hain? main kanha hoon?"

Mera naam Shaadab Alam hain, main is gaon ka Imam houn. Tumaha naam keya hain, kahan se ayee ho?

Meera naam Aditya hain, mumbai se aya houn. Yeh kon ka gaon hain?

Yeh Himachal ka ek bohot hi chota gaon hain Mandipura. Tum chal payoge beta? bahar gaoge?, maaf karna beta yeh kamra bara hi chota hain.

Adi gets up and come out of the room with Saadab. They stood in the yard of the house. It was a very small house, but the scenic beauty was inexplicable. Adi kept looking at the mountains and tired recalling what had happened. It took him two long years and three months to find the way to this place from the top of the mountains. He still believes Pankuri might be in there. He has taken a lot of risk and pain to get there, trying to follow the exact path that Pankhuri's body might have followed while falling.

Imam saab is gaon tak kaise paucha jata hain, matlab yehaan sab ate jatee kaise hain.

Yeh gaon Mandi sahar se 30 mile dur hain. Koyee pakki srak nahi. Pahariyon ke beech se ek chota sa rasta hain jo Mandi tak jaati hain. Haapte main 2 din log trekker main charke sahar jate hain our saab kaam lipta ke aate hain.

Tum yehaan kaise ayee? maine tume us kabarithan se bagte hue aate dekha, tum gir paare aur behoonsh ho gaye.

Kabristhan? Adi almost screamed.

Haan beta. Is gaon ke lagbhag sahbi log muslim hain. Wahan hamara chota sa kabarithan hain.

Haan main wahan pahariyon se neeche aaraha tha, achanak land slide suru ho gayee aur main bhagne laga.

Aare aise chote mote Land slide to yehain roz hote hain.

Adi was shocked, he was trying think if that was a very small land slide, what is actually a land slide according to Saadab.

Maaf karna beta main ne tumse puncha hi nahi, tumhare baaki sathi kahan hain? kidhar camp lagaya tum logo ne?

Camp?, Adi was surprised, kaisa camp Imam Saab?

Aare tum log to yehan... woh keya kehte hain ... haan... trekking ke liye ayee ho na. Pahari ke raaste Mandi tak janewale ho na!

Adi kept looking at Saadab bluntly. He didn't knew what to say.

Keya hua beta? tum thik to ho?

Haan Imam Saab... Aap trekking ke bari main kuch keh rahe they.

Haar ek do mahine main yehaan ek na ek team aati hain our trekking karte huye Mandi jaati hain... chalo main tumhe tumhare camp tak chor deta hu ... and he starts to move. Adi was still standing there. Sadab looks back.

Keya hua beta?

Imam Saab Main aap ke kuch puchna chata hun.

Haan Beta bolo...

Aap yehan kab se hain...

Aare meri to zindegi juzri hain is gaon main... lagbhag 70 saal ho gayee

Imam saab... aap ne kaha yehaan roz chote mote land slide hoti hain...

Haan...

Aapne kabi bari land slide bhi dehke honge...

Saadab was shocked... He kept mum for a while...then leased out a deep breath and said... haan beta dekha hain... aaj se karib 2 saal pehle... us din to aise lag raha tha ...jaise... yeh pura pahari tutke neeche aa jayegi.

2 saal pehle?...Adi almost scamed

Haan beta do saal pehle... khuda ka lakh lakh sukar hain hamare gaon ko kharosh tak nahi ayee. Kyoun beta... tum itni pareshaan kiun ho!!!!!

Adi rushed to Saadab and holds his hand... Imam Saab ... tab keya aapk ne kisi ladki ko dekha tha?

Ladki? Saadab's face become pale, he could not say a single word, he was standing like statue

Haan Imam Saab,... Boliye na Keya aap ne tab kisi Ladki ko dekha tha?

Saadab gently sat on the yard... haan beta dekha tha...

Kahan hain woh...

Woh aab nahi rahi

Nooo, Adi screamed yeh nahi ho sakta... meri Pankhuri mar nahi sakti...

Sadab holds his hand saant ho gao beta... keya huwa tha...

Tears were pouring down Adi's chicks, but he still maintianed a strong voice. Imam saab ...main koyee trekking team ke sath nahi yaha hoon ... nahi mujhe trekking ka sauk hain... Pichle do saalo sain rasta dundhte dundte us pahari se neeche yahao hun main sirf aapni patni ke khoj main...

Patni!!!!!!!!!!!!

Haan Imam Saab,... 2 saal pehle ki us land slide main meri patni us pahari se gir gaye thi... aaj tak uska body nahi mila... mujhe biswas hain woh zinda hain...

Yah Khuda... yeh kaisa insaaf hain tera... Said Saadab looking up to the heavens

Imam Saab yaad kijiye ... yaad kijiye keya woh aisi dikti thi... Adi shows a photo of Pankhuri...

Pata nahi beeta. Uski body patharaon main dhak jayee thi... 4-5 dim baad jaab bad boo failne lagi to hum logo ne pathhar hatake uska body nikale the. Sakal puri bigar chuki thi...kisi ne bhi pehchan nahi paya.

Phir keya huwa...

Hum ne police chowki main kabar ki... aur un logo ne Mandi police Station pe.

Adi gets up Mandi police Station... 30 miles dur hain na... Saadab also gets up... Imam Saab apka bahoot bahoot sukriya... Main chalta hoon.

Aditya ruko... main bhi chaloonga tumhare saath...kaal subha jaon se saab shar jayengee... hum bhi chalenge.

Both Adi and Saadab could not sleep the entire night. Next morning they reached Mandi Police station and met the Officer there. The office brought out a file...

Mr. Kumar humne aas paas ahr jagah kabar ki thi... 1 mahine tak body ko morg main samalke rakha tha... leking koyee ushe identify kar nahi paya...Phir humne body jal diya.

Adi started crying like child... both the officer and Saadab tired to control him... The officer said

Mr. kumar us body ke saath humme kuch samman mile they.. ek baar dekh lijiye agar up identify kar payee toh.

He brought out a packet. Inside it there was a dupatta, a pair pf sandle and a pair of jhumkas. Adi looked at those very carefully. None of them were familier to him...they didn't belonged to Pankhuri.

Yeh saaman meri patni ki nahi hain.

The jhumkas were beautyful. Adi took a very closer look at it, there were some shades of blood in it.

Officer can I take this, said Adi

Yeh govment ke edidence hain I can't give it to you.

Adi takes out his mobile and takes a very close- up shot of those. Officer koyee to rasta hoga gis se ligally main ye le sakon. Please.

Par aap is ka karo ge keya?

Mujhe lagta hain yeh jumke hi mujhe meri Pankhuri tak Pauchayegi.

Officer thought long and hard and then made Adi sign a lot of documents and finally give the jhumkas to him.

Thanks a lot Officer aur Imam Saab aap ko bhi, aap dono ki bajhe se mujhe ek clue mila apni Pnkhuri ko dhund ne ki. Both Saadab and Ali left the Police Staion. Adi bid farewell to Sadab and set off for mumbai.

... to be continued.

Part-2


[ Adi returned from Mandipura last evening. He looked more agile than earlier. Next morning Aneesha and Nofer were having a chat in the Garden of Diwan Mansion]

Good Morning Nani... cried Adi from a distance and started approaching toward Aneesha.

Good morning ...replied Aneesha with a smile.

Aneeshaji ..."yeh ladka..." sadi Nilofer, she quickly recalled the incident in the street when Adi was trying to get closer to Ayesha.

"ehi to Adi hain, mera Naati...,kiuon key hua?... Adi had almost reached there.

" kucn Nahi"...said Nilofer.

"So Nani... what's up... aare Anti aap inhaan?... Adi was surprised...

"Aare yeh hi toh meri saheli Nilofer hain...tum jante ho inhe?...Anesha was worried..

"aare Nahin Nani... woh actually ...ek bar main inse raste main mila tha... Anty I know up sab logo ko bohot akward laga hoga...but...

"koye baat nahi beta...Aneshaji ne tumhare pariwar ke baare main mujhe sab bataya hain... khuda pe bharosha rakho beta...ek din tumhe tumhari manzil zaroor milegi...woh keya hain ke hum muslim logo ki kuch tehzib hote hain ...baas isi liye hum chale ayeen.

Actually main up ki beti se milna chahta hoon...uski awaz...uski ankheen sab kuch...

Anisha comes to the rescue... Aree Adi yeh keya bol rahe ho beta... yeh possible nahi hain...inka culture and custom alag hain beta... Adi was about to say some thing... suddenly they were distracted.

"Rukshar, hum neh aap ko mana kiya hain, aap bahar nehi jayengii"... they all looked up Ruksar was coming toward them and Nafisha was following her...

"aammi dekhiye na aapa bebajah mujpe chilla rahi hain" said Ruskhar...

"Aammi dekhiye ishe, hum tab se mana kar rahe the, isne nahi suna...aap log samajhte kiun nahi hain keh yeh hamara ghar nahi hain..." siad Nafisha

"Nafihsa, aap itminan rakhiyee or ander jiyeeye, hum rukhar se baat karte hain" said Nilofer...

"Aammi hume sirt wahan us bench pe bethna hain, please aammi..." pleaded rukhser...

"thik hain Rukhser... aap wahan beth sakti hain"...

"par aammi..."

"aap ander jaiyee Nafisha... hum hain na inhan par..."

"kijiye...aur lad kijiyee aammi, ...hum toh koye hain hi nahi aap ka... sirt do betiyaan hi hain aap ke..." naifisha leaves angrily.

"nafisha...nafisha suniyeee..." cried Nilofer...but in vain.

"how surprising... aare apne ghar ke garden main beth ne main keya buraiee hain..." siad Adi.

"jaane do beta... yeh meri bari beti Nafisha...khuda jaane keya taqlif hain usko... aur yeh meri choti beti Rukhar"

"hai!... said Adi"..."Aadab" replied rukshar...

"anty yeh keya parti hain...?"

"parh to rahi thi beta Luckhnow main... par yehan..."

"Aare...Mumbai main bhi toh Madrasha School/colleged hain...admit kar dijiye"

"Niloferji...bura maat man na... hum me samaj main nahi aata Nafisha ko kis baat ki it na frustration hain" siad Anisha

"samjhti toh main bhi nahi Anishaji...apne hi behno se kis baat ki it na chir hain usko"

"Adi baba...Jiji...breakfat ready hain... chale ayeeye" cried Shanky from a distance

"aacha niloferji...hum chalte hain"...they leave toward Diwan Mansion... and Nilofer leaves towards the outhouse.

[That evening Adi was moving towrads the outhouse, he was thinking in his mind...]

They will never let me meet that girl. Par uski awaz...uski ankhein... bilkul Pankhuri jaisi hain...kuch to kar na hoga... somehow mujhe usse milna hain... keya karoon...suddenly he felt that he has kicked something...fortunately it rebounded of the wall and stopped in front of his feet, he bend down and pick it up... he was shocked... it was a jhumka... it was identical to the jumka that the officer gave him with a very tiny difference. Yeh juhmka inhaan... he was wondering suddenly he heard ...

"yah khudha...bacha lijiye humme... please khuda humme dila dijiye... aammi mei jaan le lengi...please khuda..." it was rukshar...she was looking for something and crying...

"AAre Rukhsar ...keya hua... is tarah ro kiun rahi ho" asked Adi

"kuch nahi janab"...said Rukhsar...she said in her mind "agar inhe pata chala, toh aammi ko bhi pata chal jaye gi...nahi humme khud hi dhundna hoga"... she started to move...Adi noticed she was wearing a jumka in one of her ears.

"are Rukhsar...yeh tumhare Luckhnow ka unique style hain keya...ek kaan main earring???" he was smilng

"ji woh..." rukhsar was shocked

"kahin tum yeh to nahi dundh rahi ho"...he shows her the jumka...

"yeh...yeh aap ko kahan se mila...ya khuda...ter lakh..lakh sukar hain" said rukhsar...

"ehi par para hua tha... yeh tumhare hain..."

"ji janab...meherbani karke hum meh dejijiye..." Adi was about to hand it over to her...suddenly ..."rukhar ek baat batao...is mamuli se earring ke liye... tum aap ne khuda ko kiun disturb kar rah thi..

"yeh koye mamuli jhumka nahi hain janab...yeh hamare Abboo ki nisani hain"

"oh i'm sorry"

"koye baat nahi janab...Abbu ne hun tino behno ke liye bilkool aise hi jhumke banye they, meri or bari aapa ke jumke to sahi slamat hain, par Ayesha apa ke jhumke kho gaye...aammi ne bohot koushis ki par koyee karigar waisa jhumka bana nahi paya"...

"what...", suddenly Adi's expression and Voice changed... he almost started shivering

"In main khas baat yeh hain ke in main hamare naam urdu main likhe hain... aaccha janab... hum chalte hain"...she start to move...

"Rukhsar...please suno...she stops... keya main tumhare is in jhumko ko baas aaj raat ke liye le sakta hun... i promise kaal subah hi lauta dunga..."

"paar janab..."

"Don't worry Rukhsar... kisiko pata nahi chalega...Nani tumhe yeh wapas kar aa yegi"

"thik hain janab.."...she hands over the jhumkas to him Adi kept them in his pocket...Suddenly..."rukhsar aap yehaan keya kar rahi hain..." it was Naisha again

"apa ...woh...hum"

"isi waqt under jaiyee... keya sare tehzib bhookchuki hain aap...? rukhsar runs towards the outhouse, Nafisha approaches Adi

"dekhiye janab...hum pehli bhi dekhe hain aap hamare behno ke nazdik aane ki kaushis main lage hain...lekin hamare bhi kuch tehzib hain...hum aap keghar main rehte zarroor hain,...par lachar nahi hain...nahi aap ne marzi se rehte hain...jo aap humare behno ko pareshaan karte rahenge..." is tarah shaam me waqt kisi anjani ladki se bagiche main milna up ki tehzib main hoga par hamari nahi"

"yeh hello!...just be in your mind o.k?...mere bhi bahot saare muslim friends hain, jinke ghar roz ata jata tha main...unki behne humme Adibhaijaan bulati hain aur rakhi bi bandhti hain...so you don't dare to teach me what is muslim culture and customs...none of them noticed nilofer was approaching them...aaur agar apne customs and cultures ak itna value hain toh tum keya kar rahi ho inhaan...jao burkha pehn ko aur aap ne room se maat nikalna."

"adi ...keya hua beta"...asked Nilofer...

"Aare kuch nahi anti...yeh apki beti hain na she is actually sick...pata nahi kis baat ka frustration hain is ko...hum rushsar se baat kiye ki yeh uspar chilla ne lagi...listen...i know how to respect people and their values...o.k?

Nafisha was shocked by this outburst...she could not say anything...tears started to flow down her chicks.

"Adi...aap apne kamre main jaiye...aur Nafisha ...aap chaliye mere saath"...all leave towrads therie repective ways.

That evening Adi met his friend Rashid, who could read urdu...he said the jhumka which rukhsar gave has rukshar written on it in urdu and the one the officer gave had "Ayesha" written on it in urdu.

to be continued...

Part-3

[That same night, Adi was cleaning Ayesha's jhumkas. He made absolutely sure no stains of blood were left on them. Thousands of thoughts were running through his mind. He was feeling restless. He decided to go to the garden. As he was moving through the corridor, he bumped into somebody and somehow managed to save himself and the other person from falling. It was Ayesha. They were looking at each other eyes for quite some time. Adi touched the chicks of Ayesha to make sure it was real]

"Kahan chali gayithi mujhe chor kar. Pata hain yeh do saal kaise juzara hain mainey. Pal paal dunndhta raha tujhe. Pahariyon ke kone kone main dunha tujhe aur too..." Ayesha could not answer anything she was completely lost in Adi's eyes. Suddenly...

"Ayesha...kahan hain aap"...it was Nilofer, looking for her. Adi woke up and shaked Ayesha. She also woked up...Ayesha...Kahan hain aap cried Nilofer agian.

"ayii Ammi " said Ayesha and ran towards the outhouse. Adi stood there like a statue. His head started spinning and everything was becoming dark in front of his eyes. He knelt down to the ground...Moments later he gathered himself and went to his room. Next morning he met rukshar in the garden.

"yeh lo rukhar tumhare jhumke"

"sukriya janab..." she had started to move. "Rukshar... inhe bhi leti jao.." said Adi extending Ayesha's Jhumkas towards her.

"Yeh ...yeh aap ko kahan se mila...yeh toh apa ke jhumke hain..." she was happy. Adi was about to say something...but..

Adi baba... aap ne bulaya tha..., it was Shanky. Rukshar leaves form there as Adi turns to Shanky ... "haan Shanky kuch kaam hain...chaliye"

[Later that day...in the outhouse]

Apa... dekhiye main keya liyee hoon...said Rukshar showing the jhumkas to Ayesha.

"Jhumke...inse-allah...yeh to bohot hi pyaaree hai...kis se hain..." said Ayesha

"keya apa... hum itne dino ke baat aap ke jhumke dhunke laaye aur aap humse puch rahi hain"

"Yeh mere hain...matlab tu mere liye layee hain..."

"nahin apa ...yeh ap hi ke hain ...yaad nahi 2 saal pehle kho gaye they"

Ayesha was thinking ... then "iski design to bohot hi bariya hain"

"Abboo neh banwaye they... aache toh honge hi"

"Abboo neh...phir mujhe kiun yaad nehi...aachha woh chor... Abboo ne keya sirf mere liye bawathe?"

"nahi apa...hum sabhi behno ke liye banwae they...yeh dekhiye...yeh mere hain"

Ayesha took very close look at both jhumkas..."yeh thore alag hain na"

"hogi hi apa... isme mere naam likhe hain aur usme aap ki"

"kahan"

"mazak maat kijiye apa...yeh to urdu main aap ka naam likha hain...ayesha"

"aare mujhe urdu parhna kahan ata hain"

"mazak maat kijiye apa"

"saachi rukshar...mujhe urdu parna nahi ata"

"Maaf kijiyega apa...par itni gurur bhi aachi nahi...mana aaj kaal up angrezi main parti hain... par yeh to maat boliye ke aap ko urdu parna hi nahi aata"

"saachi rukshar...mujhe urdu parna nahi ata"

"Ayesha...kuch to tehzib rakhiye...yeh key keh rahi hain aap" said Nilofer. None of them noticed when she came.

"Aammi... hum saach keh rehe hain hummeh urdu parne nahi ata...ek to yeh Rukhshar... yeh jhumke lake bol rahi hain ke yeh mere hain...upar se aap"

Nilofer takes the jhumkas..."yeh aap ko kahan se mile Rukhsar...jabab dijiye humme" she looked very angry.

"aammi woh ...janab Adi ne diye"

"keya...Nafisha...Nafisha...Nafisha came running in...jab tak hum wapas na ayee aap main se koye kahin nahi jayenge...hum abhi aate hain". She rushes towards diwan mainsion.

[In Diwan Mansion]

Aaj phir aap logo neh is photo ko yihaan lagaya hain...kiun...Avantika was screaming at the servants

"Maine inse kaha hain Mom" said Adi..."aap log jao"...the servants leaves

"Adi what is this beta...Pankhuriki portrait wohan kiun lagay tum ne"

"Adi baba...yeh sab keya mangwaya aap ne ... yeh phoolo ka haar..." said Shanky

Everyone had gathered at the hall. Adi takes the garland from shanky and moves toward Pankhuri's portrait

"Adi...no...no...Adi" cried Avantika

Adi stood in front of Pankhuri's photo..."Aisa nahi ke main tere bina ji nahi sakta...par tere bina jina nahi chahta...ehi kehta tha na main...tu chali gayee...aur maine jeena chor diya...aur mere sath is ghar ne bhi jeena chor diya...par aab main jiyunga...tere liye ...is ghar ke liye...un lamho ke liye jo hum ne sath guzare they...he tries to put the garland on Pankhuri's photo.

"Ruk jayeh Janab..., Nilofer came running in...humare sawalon ke jawab diye bina...aap is taswir pe mala nahi chara sakte"

"Anty...aap"..Adi was shocked

"Yeh jhumke aap ko kahan se mile"

Adi didn't know what to answer..."woh..woh anty...haan kuch din pehle main Luckhnow gaya tha ...wahan ke ek jewlery shop se karide they"

"juth bol rahe hain aap...aise jhumke Lucknow ke koye karigar bana nahi sakta...hum ne lakh kousis ki thi... yeh jhumke mere maike Agra ke ek karigar ne baniye they...Ayesha ke Abboo ne banwae they...saachayi keya hain janab..."

Adi was sceechless he kept mum for a moment

"humme jawab dijiye janab"

"Yeh jhumke mujhe ...Mandi ke police station ke O.C. ne diye...2 saal pehle...anty...anty" Nilofer faints. They took her to Aneesha's room and called the Doctor. After an hour or so she came back to her senses. Nafisha...came running in

"Ammii...keya hua aap ko...maaf kijiye ammi ...aab aur intezar nahi kar sakte they hum...Keya kiya aap logo ne hamari aammi ke saath...dekhiye hum police ke paas chale gayenge...aammi aise leti kiun hain...itni bimaar kiun lag rahi hain...jawab dijiye..."

"Nafisha...itminan rakhiye ...hum thik hain...yeh sharif log hain ...kuch galat nahi kiye haumare sath"

"To phir chaliye aamii...hum aaj hi Lucknow wapas jayenge...ek pal bhi nahi rahenge yehaan"

"Nafisha...choop rahiye aap... she opens her palms and Nafisha notices Ayesha's jhumka in her hand.

"Aammii...yeh...aacha toh yeh baat hain... kaha tha hum ne aap se Lukhnow wapas chalte hain...Ayesha ko maana lenge ke woh Galib se nikah karle...agar jine ke liye yeh kurbani deni hain to denge par is ghar main nahi rahenge. Par aap nahi maani"

"Baas karo Nafisha...Gabil gaise ladke ke saathAyesha ki saadi...aap ne choti behen ke bari main itne bure khayal kaise ate hain tumhe..." said Aneesha

"haan bure hain hum...bohot bure hain...aammi aap bhi yehi sochti hain na...hum itne bure is liye hain kiun ki woh Ladki meri bahan Ayesha nahi Pankhuri hain" she breaks down in tears and knelt down to the ground.

"Nafisha ...yeh keya keh keh rahi hain aap...Woh Ayesha nahi hain" asked Nilofer.

"Nahi ammii...woh Ayesha nahi hain, Ayesha...ab nahi rahi"...tears were pouring down her chicks...

"yeh sachhayee pata thi aap ko..., phir bhi aap ne hum se chupayee"...nobody noticed that both Ayesha and Rukshar had reached there and were standing behind.

"hum majboor they aammii ...do saal pehle jab khala ke ghar Ayesha ka accident hua aur aap bhi bimar par gayee toh Hafish saab neh hum se kaha tha...koyee bhi sadma aap ke liye jan lewa ho sakte hain..yaad hain aammi Ayesha ke pith par ek lambi kaali nishan they...Accident ke baad jab Ayesha khud se kapde badal nahi pati thi toh uske kapde badalte waqt humme woh nishan nahi mile...tab se hi pata thaa ke woh Ayesha nahi koye aur hain"

"Nafisha yeh key kiya aapne..."

"Ammi hum keya karte...9 saal ke they jab Aabboo guzar gaye. Humne dekha kis tarah garibi aur musibato ko jehl kar aap ne hum tin behno ko paala hain. Apne aur apne jawan behno ki abru ki rakwali karne ki aur aap ke janza uthane ki taqat nahi thi hum main...aur hum ne fehsla kiya ke yeh raaz ko hum apne sine main dabaye rakhenge aur ek din hamare sath yeh raaz bhi dafn ho gaye ji...jab kabhi hum pankhrui ko dekh te they toh Ayesha ki yaadein humme tarpati thi... hum aap ne zamir se larte rahe aur toote rahi aammii...par khuda ke marzi ke aaje kisi chalti hain...unho ne humme us ghar pe lake khara kar diye, jiske log hi nahi balki diwaro main bhi Pankhuri ki dharkan baasi hain.

"Adi ...yeh keya kar rahe they aap..." asked Nilofer.

"Pankhuri ke jaane ke baad jo dard humne mom aur sasuma ke Aankho main dekhe they...main nahi chahta tha woh dard aap ko mile anty...agar Pankhuri, Ayesha baan kar aap ke paas khush hain toh usi main meri khusi hain"

"Apa...aap jhoot bol rahi hain...baloiyee na apa ...aap jhut bol rahi hain na..." said Ayesha coming in front of everyone...everybody was stunned..."

"nahi bahen...hum such keh rahe hain... aap Ayesha nahi...Pankhuri hi hain"

"nahi...nahi..." Ayesha started running and stumbled to the staircase. They rushed her to the hospital.

[2 days later]

"Nurse...Paaani" Said Pankhuri...The nurse gave her water. "bahar mere papa aur mamaji hain...unhe bula dijiye".

The nurse informs every one that Pankhuri has come to her senses. Adi comes to meet her.

"Adi aap ..yehan kullu main"

"tu aab mumbail main hain"

"mumbai main???"

"Aab aur baat nehi...so jaa...ghar chalke bohot ssari bate karenge" said Adi smilingly...Pankuri nodded with a smile.

[6 months later. All members of Diwan family and Nilofers family were in the Hall. There was an old man and members of another family. The old man said]

Baari khus nasib hain aap ki beti... aise muhrat to kahin saalon main ek bar ate hain... toh phir yeh muhrat pakka kare???

"Ji kazi Saab" said Nilofer

"Aacha toh hume izazat dijiye " he said " aur hame bhi" said the members of the other family and they left.

Nilofer looked worried. "aare niloferji itni pareshaan kiun ho?" asked Aneesha.

"muhurat pakki ho gayee, par taiyari kaise hogi" Said Nilofer.

"Uski chinta aap maat kijiye Aammii, didi ki shadi to inte dhum-dham se hogi ke mumbai se lucknow taq sab dekte reh jayenge...kiun Rukhsar" said Pankhuri

"inse-allah...humare bari apa ka nikah hain...jasn to hogi hi" said Rukhsar.

Nafisha hold the chiks of Pankhuri and said " Jab bhi hum aap ko dekhte hain toh humare yekin aur pakki ho jati hain ke Ayesha ki rooh bhi aap main saama gayee hain. Khuda kare aap hamesha aise hi khus rahe aur sab ko khusiyaan baanti rahe"

"Haan beti...aur isi tarah aap main hi meri Ayesha hamesha zinda rahe" siad nilofer.

Nilofer, Nafisha, Rukhsar and Pankhuri all hug each other.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW!! Its awesome!👏 Wish CVs would show something like this..

Can't wait for next part! Continue soon!👍🏼
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Awesome writing!!!!!👏 I love it!!!!!!😃 Thank you for posting it here!!!! Waiting waiting waiting for the next part!!!!!
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loved it to the core. Plz do continue and hope pankhuri is alive. How is the deewan family.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start...😛
loved it...
continue soon...
also do pm me ... plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Friends,
Thanks a lot for your comments. I have been pinned down in my office, give me a couple of days and i'll post part 2
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Loved Part 2! Continue soon! :))))))))))))
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awesome part -2 now adi wil come to know d truth.😛
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I love this story! I really really love it. It's wonderfully written and the concept is awesome! Please do continue soon!
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Friends
I am eagerly waiting for your feed backs.
Please find some time and read this os and give me your feed backs

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