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Hey all,
I have been asked to write an OS by a few members and I have finally got around to it! This is a little emotional but there is a happy ending! 😳 I wont reveal too much hope you guys like it and leave your honest comments and views! This was totally rushed so apologies if it is not up to standard!
Aditya watched her intently as she drew her sketch for a new building project. His eyes were fixated on her luscious red lips. It had been a few weeks since their marriage but she still seemed really angry with him. She still hadn't softened towards him but he had. Somewhere through the journey from strangers, to friends and now life partners he had given his heart to her. He couldn't imagine a second without her. The fights, the special moments spent together he had madly fallen for her but she... she was still angry.

*Flashback*

Their wedding was filmy and unexpected but Aditya had no regret over his decision at all. He never regretted marrying Pankhuri. But he could never forget the pain that was in Pankhuri's eyes when he filled her mang with sindoor. Aditya's decision shook everyone and angered her whole family but he couldn't see the girl he loved being betrayed by the one she loved Shivam. She gave her heart out to the man but he left her in the mandap alone. Aditya vowed to Pankhuri that he would never let sadness fall upon her and only let happiness into her life. Pankhuri slapped him for his step. That had been the start of their fights. She had shouted thrown curses at him while he had stood awed at the spirit and strength of this woman. Aditya controlled everything. He didn't let her anger lessen his love for her in fact it increased. He just wished Pankhuri would smile at him.

*Flashback Ends*

Months passed and Aditya and Pankhuri were together but weren't each other's completely. They were still incomplete. Pankhuri's anger started to lessen and she showed softer feelings towards Aditya. She started doing his work for him and tried to become a part of his life. Aditya liked her every gesture. She even smiled. One night Aditya walked into the room and Pankhuri was getting changed. "Oh sorry Pankhuri!" Aditya blushed and looked away to see his beautiful wife with wet hair in her red chiffon sari. Pankhuri noticed and she looked at him through the mirror and smiled a little. Aditya captured that little movement and admired it. "It's okay Aditya ji.. you can come in!" Adi smiled as this was a big thing for him. He loved it when she called him Aditya ji. It soothed his heart but he secretly desired for her to just call him Adi. Adi sat on the bed with his file looking through it and secretly watching his wife adorn herself for the party this evening. Her every look was mesmerizing to his eye and he couldn't take his eyes off her. Pankhuri looked irritated in her reflection as she couldn't tie her necklace properly around her neck.

Aditya saw her but he didn't want to help her because she may not like it. Pankhuri tried forcefully but then her eyes fell on Adi. She paused for a second and looked at him. Their eyes met. Adi looked at her. "Aditya ji..c..can you help me put this on?" Pankhuri finally got her words out. Adi wondered why she was hesitant. She was never hesitant in fact always straightforward. Adi smiled and nodded. She moved towards the dressing table and sat down on the chair. Adi looked at her and smiled. He moved her hair to the side and his fingers brushed her neck. She felt something strange. He looked at her. He made her wear the necklace but soon realized he would have to use a safety pin to tighten it and position it. He used his mouth to open the safety pin and his breath was contracted on her neck which made her shiver. She smiled. "Adi!" she said it. Adi looked shocked at her. She opened her eyes and looked straight at the mirror. Adi stopped what he was doing to just watch her. "I mean Aditya ji if you cant do it..its okay I will tell mom to do it!" Pankhuri quickly replied to cover up. Adi was silent.

He came back to reality seconds after and replied "No its okay!" he quickly fastened it and moved her hair back. She watched him move away and a little smile played on her lips. Adi got his clothes and changed in the bathroom. He came out in a tuxedo suit and went downstairs to meet the rest of the family. Pankhuri was waiting with the whole family. "Woah... Adi you look really good!" Kaira commented. He smiled and blushed but his eyes fell on Pankhuri who was looking amazing in her red chiffon sari. Her simple yet sophisticated look was to die for. "Adi, Pankhuri please come here!" Nanu called. Adi moved towards Nanu and so did Pankhuri. "Adi, Pankhuri beta... today you have made me the happiest man in the world.. you have bought Deewan Industries to new heights and signed 2 international deals which has secured our future! Without your managerial skills and Pankhuri's creativity this wouldn't have been possible! Give me your hand Adi and yours too Pankhuri!" Nanu requested. Adi looked at Pankhuri. They both put their hands out. Nanu got both of their hands and put them together. Adi felt the touch of Pankhuri's soft skin and Pankhuri felt strange feeling Adi's warm but gentle hand. They felt a little uncomfortable but they held on. It felt right. "You know what I have just done... bonded you forever.. I dont want you to ever leave each other's hand ever! Now for my actual surprise.. Adi, Pankhuri you were married in such circumstances that we could never give you a proper wedding so to make up for that and your hard efforts we are sending you both on a honeymoon to Mauritius!" Adi's eyes lit up and Pankhuri felt a little shocked but there was no reaction from her side. She was quiet. Adi sneakily looked at Pankhuri and thought about their honeymoon. Everyone was happy and was excited.

They set off for the party. Aditya was welcomed by all the guests grandly and Pankhuri was given the same respect. "Mrs Kumar you are looking stunning!" one woman said. She smiled. "Mrs Kumar..you and Mr Kumar are a great team!" another man said. All night everyone was praising them together. Pankhuri decided to move towards the fountain that was outside the party to think about everything. She pictured all those moments spent with Aditya before and after marriage and she couldn't help but smile. She had realized that Adi had never forced her to do anything. But there was only one question in her mind why did he marry her when he knew that she didn't love him? Pankhuri looked at the flowing fountain for inspiration when she felt footsteps nearing her. She tried to become normal and come back to reality. "Pankhuri.. are you okay?" Aditya said. He slowly approached her. Pankhuri turned quickly and lost balance due to her heels. "Ahhh!" she shouted. But why did she worry when she had her hero in front of her. Adi grabbed her in his arms. She opened her eyes to see those beautiful blue eyes filled with love. There was so much depth in them. For a few seconds she was completely lost in them... she forgot all that anger, that pain which was running through her veins and she just fell in love.

Fell in love with those eyes, that face, that person Aditya Kumar. "Adi!" she whispered gently. Adi was a little surprised his eyes were fixated on her lips. "Say it again!" he replied not moving for a second. Pankhuri moved up and hugged him tightly. She wrapped her arms around his neck and grabbed him tightly. Adi looked at her to see she was crying. He wrapped his arms around her and cradled her with comfort. "Pankhuri..what's wrong are you okay?" the concern in his eyes was evident. She moved away from him. "I dont deserve this.. I dont deserve this love, I dont deserve you!" she cried her eyes out and Adi just watched her. He shook his head in disagreement. He moved closer to her. "Leave me Aditya ji.. you dont deserve me! The day we got married and even before that I never respected you but you only loved me and took care of me!" Pankhuri spoke her heart out. "Pankh.." he interrupted. "No Aditya ji just let me tell you everything... you saved me when Shivam the boy I loved left me alone and if it wasn't for you my parents would be hearing taunts about me all their life! You saved me but I gave you hatred, anger and neglect in return! I dont deserve you!" she slowly started stepping backwards. "I dont deserve you.. I dont know what type of idiot I am...why I did this to you? Adi I dont know what mess I have created.. what I have done to your life.. I have ruined it completely. but I dont know why.. I dont know why but I Love You!" she stopped and there was pin drop silence. Adi registered every word she said but the last three words echoed in his mind. He was totally shook. He looked at her with the utmost love.
He had won. He won. He had won the love of Pankhuri. "Pankhuri... now you have said those three words I know everything is going to be alright.. who says you dont deserve me? Infact I am blessed to have you in my life.. you have made me the happiest because my Nanu is the happiest! I knew that Shivam meant the world to you and I was willing to wait for this very moment.. even if I didn't get it in this life I would have waited for 7 to hear those three words from your lips.. I had faith in my love.. faith in my heart that you would love me one day!" Adi moved closer to Pankhuri and cupped her cheek. She fell straight into his arms. "Aditya ji.. I dont know what I would have done without you.. if possible please forgive me for all those harsh words and things I have done to you! I know it is impossible to forget but I will try my best to love you as a wife!" Pankhuri vowed to him. Adi smiled. "Pankhuri... I have forgiven you way back and in love there is no sorry and thank you at all! Oh and one more thing.. you dont have to call me Aditya ji.. I prefer it when you say Adi!" he replied. She blushed romantically and nodded.

They walked back into the hall hand in hand and Pankhuri felt so much more secure. "Ladies and Gentleman... the dance floor is now open and we are going to start off with a couples dance.. so all you guys bring your gorgeous girl onto the dance floor and sway along to this beautiful track!" DJ announced. Adi looked at Pankhuri and indicated to her. She blushed and nodded. Adi slowly wrapped his arm around her wait and Pankhuri placed her hands on his shoulders. They looked at each other and swayed to the song "Tum Hi Ho" Adi and Pankhuri danced the night away together.

Adi had finally won the heart of his wife Pankhuri through unconditional love. Their love is even stronger now and nothing can break this beautiful bond that they share.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it!!!!!!! Well Done!!!!! Beautiful OS!
Do keep writing!
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super writing love it sooo much
continue soon
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Just awesome , mindblowing . You have sketched it beautifully. One of the best i hv read.
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superb os 👏
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Loved it😊
plz do write more..😊
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hey nice os, all i have to say is that it's amazing! the words you used, it really touched my heart. so far the best os i've read in this forum!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: NISHADEEP

I loved it!!!!!!! Well Done!!!!! Beautiful OS!

Do keep writing!

Thanks for reading and loving it! Will try too! 😳
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Originally posted by: Duggukede

super writing love it sooo much

continue soon
love PaYa so much
no one can beat your OS's

Thanks a lot duggu! 😳 Will try too keep writing! Aww... I love them too! There are way better writers than me.. thanks again though! 😳
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Originally posted by: vivek2010

Just awesome , mindblowing . You have sketched it beautifully. One of the best i hv read.

Thank you so much... it really does mean a lot! 😃

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