Valentines Day Special--OS ;) - Page 2

Originally posted by: -Gunjan-

Sharna, like I said you have a way with them words😉 Gosh I love how cute/sweet/intimate this OS was! Everything was perfect about this. I love how you described Adi acting like himself with the removal of his shirt buttons☺️ lol This is actually omg this is way too cute and it honestly made my Valentine Day in advance!😃 I love this and yay you took up my suggestion! The song is way too cute na? Anyways love this Behna, this is amazingly cute and honestly I could tell you were trying to refrain from going in a certain direction with this but even then, you still made it sound so sensuous and unique to PaYa! Love you Behna!🤗

Awww thank you little behna! You know me, I'm all about keeping the characters consistent! Especiaaally Adi! <3 I was giggling when I wrote that part.. I knew you would like the strip tease, haha. Wish we could actually see that.. Haaaii.. Haha, yeaah, I can't physically wrote "that" stuff, so I just showed it was understood.. haha.. Thank you sooo much for liking it, and giving me the suggestion! You rock!

And to your other comment, AAH THAT PICTURE. I'm in love with it.. its literally what inspired me to write this.. *swooons*

Originally posted by: anusha.cochin

Amazing Sharna...U have a gud future in writing...👍🏼

Happy Valentines Day
Happy Valentine's Day

Aww, woow, that means a lot Anu, thanks!

Happy Valentines Day!

Originally posted by: SAYAN18

Simply wonderful.

It can easily be made into an episode.

Thank you! Nahh, it couldn't be made into an episode.. The strip tease would be edited =(

Originally posted by: sudipta1988

love u sharna ,,,,u r a amazing story maker ,,,,

lovely os ,,amazing ,,,,love ur writing ,,,

valentines gift for all pkdhians :))

thanx for dis os :))

Thanks Sudi! So glad you liked it!!

Originally posted by: Poojaa_P

AWW!!

it's super amazing !

Love every word of it, seriously i'm in love with your writing! It feels goood to read it after such long time!!

I honestly can't praise you enough.

it's short but expresses PaYa's feelings so beautifully. Love how you included Avantika and Maasi.

My favourite dialogue is the last couple of lines by Pankhuri.

I could totally imagine playful adi, and uff that kiss on the neck.. i think i got goosebumps just reading it.

This is the best valentine gift ever :)

THANKYOU SO MUCH.

loveyouu!

and that picture killed me! PaYa being that close.. their chemistry is sizzling.

And I'm in love with your comments! I seriously miss seeing your name on IF.. I literally squeal whenever I see it!

Thank you so much for your wonderful, wonderful words. You always make me feel so special! It was short, sorry for that, haha, but I intended to keep it short and to the point! See, I'm learning! ;) I love Mausi, so I always have got to include her in some way or another! I LOOOVED that kiss.. I started blushing just imagining it.. hahaa. So glad you liked it! I love youuu, and hope to see you on IF more, or I'll just hound you on Twitter ;))

Originally posted by: priya713

Wow, Sharna...this is actually the first OS i've read of yours...having just started on these forums recently and all...I need to go back and read more apparently cuz you are awesome! Loved it!! Just the right amount of sweetness, cuteness, romantic-ness?, lol...you didnt leaving anything out It was perfect! Thanks!!! On the precap of today's episode, she's wearing this red sari...its sooo pretty. Just an FYI. You'll know what Im talking about on Saturday lol.

Thanks, Priya! We've already talked through PM, but I wanted to comment back still, haha! There are a lot of other really got OS's here.. Especially Sonia's.. She's a real treat to read! I cnnot waait to see her in red.. I actually have a thing for red sarees.. and black ones.. haha. Thank you again for your wonderful words and glad you liked my work! =D

Originally posted by: Silsha

WOW...!!!!!!


LOVELY OS Sharna!😳


i m jst imagining our PAYA..!😳


Thank u so much 4 d beautifus OS!


BTW Advance
HAPPY VALENTINES DAY :) 😳

Haha awww, thank you so much! Glad you liked it! Happy Valentines Day!

Originally posted by: Nihira-fan

Wow...Awesome OS!so beautifully written...loved it loads!!
Plz write some more!

Aww, so sweet, thank you!!

Def not bakwazz! It was so good, especially Adi and his buttons. I could totally imagine him saying that! Write more soon! Thanks! Happy Valentine's Day!